DARK KNIGHT-A SwaSan FF-T4-DELETED-AN PG1- Creations-Pgs 98/9 - Page 14

Created

Last reply

Replies

778

Views

58.6k

Users

79

Likes

1.6k

Frequent Posters

--Anna-- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
Shru 🤗

I have already told you how I feel about DK so many times and I am going to apologise here for not coming to the forum and commenting. I thought one comment was definitely due after Chapter 27! 😉 Even though you have heard this - I felt the need to put it down again. 😛

Shru, I absolutely LOVE how DK is progressing and I am in AWE of how you write Sanskaar! You have written and portrayed Sanskaar SO beautifully and royally, I have fallen in love with him so many times while reading DK. I love this Sanskaar!

And same goes for Swara too...You have written a Swara, I cannot ever hate. She is such a gem of a person in DK. I absolutely love her and Sanskaar together in DK and I cannot wait to see how the story progresses further.

Chapter 27 has to be my favorite chapter of all. I loved Sanskaar's confession in front of everyone and especially the 'kidnapping' threat he gave. 😆 And I love Swara for choosing Sanskaar. 😳 Absolutely loved the confession and cannot wait to read more! 😉

Update soon!!! Pleaseee!! 😳

Love
Anna 😉

Edited by --Anna-- - 9 years ago
tootiefrootie11 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanya17

I hope that ranjit and his alliance with swara part end very soon I am not liking it , there are already so much problem now on top of that this new problem😡

I liked swaras outburst she had sfrd so much first her parents forcing her to agree to marry laksh n now this new person she had enough she confessed to janki that she loves sanskar👏 I wish ap knew about this she knows sanskar loves swara if she knew that swara loves sanskar she would have been able to do something

But no worries sanskar will do something he has a new mission now "mission swara" or "mission family manao ranjit bhagao" 😉 sujata is gonna be one big hurdle in this mission shekar I am not sure about his reaction he remains confused and a confusing character sometimes he is a good father and sometime he like the one in the show I wish this new problem ends in the next part itself there are many other things waiting, most importantly the upcoming battle their misunderstandings which is one more big problem and their confession then their mrg preparations then their marriage functions their wedding so many things are waiting but the problems seems to never end the old problems didn't get solved new ones are continuing to keep coming and coming it looks like by the time they will get together forget about 18th century even people of 20th century will grow very old or you are planning to bring it till 20th century that will be really epic not saying that its not epic already 😛👏 we don't have any problem we are happy to get more of dk 😃 I want to throw that ranjit out of the story real soon hope sanskar manage to handle the situation and makes if not everyone atleast most of the family members agree let's see what he does

Waiting for the next part


Hey Sanya 🤗

It seems that 26 drove you to much frustration huh? Yes of course there was a new problem but hopefully you have read 27 to know what happened there? 😉 Some angst and a lot of problems are part of DK as if it wasn't complex and layered there would be little point in a saga like DK in my humble opinion 😊.

Swara is strong and whilst she is sensitive and sacrificing she is also self respecting and knows what she doesn't want for sure- and she certainly doesn't want anyone other than her Prince, hence her outburst. And I deliberately didn't want the mums to know both sides and simply sort the issue for SwaSan- if they want their love they need to fight 😃.

You are/ were totally right- this was about Sanskaar taking charge and doing something 😉 Mission Ranjit Bhagao 😆😆. Sujata is a hurdle but her son knows how to handle her and all others in a way too. You will have seen what Shekhar did in 27:)

Hmmm I think with due respect you need to trust in the writer here:) I have a plan for the story and a very definitive ending planned, and you won't be made to wait for centuries 😆😆. There isn't many chapters left and with DK often I start with something in one chapter and finish it off in the next so I think the risk of what you fear- that I won't tie up all the loose ends, is less:). I would warn that despite 27 there will still be problems as there is obstacles still- such as the upcoming days and also Devendra plus the reveal of any other plots that may have taken place so please bear with me and don't feel that it will drag or not be resolved. I cannot promise happy ever after or no problems but am trying to give fast paced drama and suspense but never losing the romance but whether I do it or not- you guys are judge and jury 😃 I will try not to disappoint and if I do, huge apologies- it is a difficult story to write . I hope you enjoyed 27 and it helped balance the angst here 😃

Lots of love,
Shruti x

DivineDarkness thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 9 years ago
Shru update other chapters too like this one so that Anna madam will give us surprise visit 😡 Do you mind if I beat the crap out of her for abandoning us😭 you have to agree with me ya agree with me no other option 😈
tootiefrootie11 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aamias

shruti dear ,

I don't how how to comment but i will try .I am shy and I only write when someone blindly supports and is anti feminist 🤣 But I think that I and sree are going to give an xam on your text book the way we are reading it several times🤣. I have become a dedicated fan of yours. first congrats for the new thread now coming to the update..

Hey again Asmita dear 🤗
Welcome to the world of DK and once more, like I said in my other reply so glad you've joined this party 🤗. Thank you for making an exception and commenting so nicely on these updates! Thanks also for the wishes!

Veer and Sanskar have such a beautiful bond both are jealous if Swara admires someone else and as Pawan said hard to tackle but when they come around they dont leave and love the person from everything they have. Pawan is going to die or something? and uttara is going to marry Ranjit Singh
Ranjit Singh who is he? a cameo then why he is getting so screen space😲

Yes indeed like master like horse 😆 Aha- why have you thought Pawan will die? And whoa- you thought I would marry Uttara to Ranjit? 😲. Hope 27 allayed your fears there and also about Ranjit. To be fair to me, Ranjit was a cameo and that too for 2 chapters with a few lines in some paragraphs so not that much space? 😆

Swara is so proud of Sanskar and that is the reason she doesn't want her maligned name to be connected with him.

Exactly- Swara would do anything for Sanskaar and vice versa so her attitude is to protect him even if its at her own expense

Shekhar and Lakshya are dumbwits and spineless man. Ragini burn plz burn .DP's apology didnt statisfy me but nevertheless minimum he knows he was guilty.

What to say about that father in law- son in law duo? 😕 And Ragini- haha 😈 You don't have to like Durga Prasad but he is what he is 😊, I cannot make him do much more. 😊


Janaki is Ragini's Mom blood is thicker than water isnt it. idk but i have a feeling she saved Ragini by slapping her and now by wanting to marry Swara with Ranjit . Janaki talking about dancer girl is she making Swara jealous or ignite her. is she a villain? plz clarify it so then I will hate her to the core and bash her too.

I cannot say who or who isn't a villain as in DK except for SwaSan literally ANYONE could be 😉 but as for Janaki- there is a totally different way to look at her too. You will have to tell me if 27 shows a different side to her. I have never denied that she is a queen like Annapurna and if its a harsh decision too she will take it. She did slap Ragini to make her shut her mouth but that doesn't necessarily denote that she saved her although I see what you are saying and like I said it could be anything! Sorry for being cryptic but that's the way the story is 😕

Annapurna actually in the serial I just loathe her more than even ragini she is one of the reason Ragini is like this . now coming back to ur story idk but i dont like her might be due to influence of the serial but if u made her do something she will raise her status in my mind. They are Queens let them do something other than petty kitchen politics.

I can't help you there if you don't like this Annapurna 😲. She is nothing like the serial at all- please don't say that 😭. As for being Queens- I think both her and Janaki have done nothing else but be there. I don;'t think except for maybe Sujata there has been what we would call kitchen politics in DK? 😕 As for Annapurna- lots of times- she retrieved Sanskaar, her whole attitude to Kaveri and her approach with DP, her support of Sanskaar- I don't see how I can do more to make you like her. I fear you are judging her by the dislike in the serial which is totally fine too - not everyone has to like every character but as a writer there isn't much more to be done there 😃. But there is some story left, see how you feel at the end.

Lastly our hero Sanskar no confusion nothing straight thank God he is not like Male leads who obeys their parents say yes for engagement though they have someone else in their heart. His passion , his love male leads learn something from him and climbing the window how much i wanted to see that. The ruckus made by soldiers 😆 means soldiers are highly aware of the affair .
Swara stand really made me feel good she also said it to Janaki maa but women really have less choices cant really blame her .

Sanskaar is totally his own man 😎 He won't let anyone, even Swara in that sense hen peck him. If you like how he is here, 27 might be even better for that so let me know? 😃 Glad you liked the window climbing, it was especially for Sree too as she was so thrilled with this idea since ages 😆. Sanskaar's men are smart too 😉. I wanted Swara to be firm and say what she wanted to her Maa at least but yes women don't get overall control on these matters

Next part Plz update soon. Hows ur health dearie? Take care

Hope you liked 27. Health is getting better but just a lot of pain from torn muscles and all- thank you so much for asking! You take care too!
onething i have a feeling ur love for sadistic feeling giving me negative vibes 🤣 i think u r going to make immortal in love by killing them isn't it😭

Ohhh you think I will end on a tragic note? Interesting!! Again, I cannot say anything and you will have to stay on the ship till final port 😉. Happy or sad I hope the ending will be memorable! I will continue trying my best!!

your's loving friend
Asmita



Replied above dear Asmita, thank you!

Love,
Shruti x

tootiefrootie11 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: a_uma

wow.. a whole lot of twists and happenings..

so happy for Sanskar that he got back all his lost lands and titles... but where is Laksh's reaction to all this.. and Ragini's.. both of them would be quite upset I think.. 😈

Also, feeling sad for swara to have her life arranged for her without a single thought for her own consent.. .. hope Sanskar does something and reclaims her publicly.. 😳.. before swara's betrothal to Ranjit is announced..

.. and somewhere I am expecting Ragini to queer the works between Swara-Ranjit and help Sanskar's cause indirectly... that would be a befitting punishment for her.. 😈


Hey Uma 🤗

Ah yes some meandering but you know that DK doesn't travel a straight path 😆. Sanskaar is indeed restored and you will have hopefully seen RagYa's reactions in 27 😉.

Swara but tell me what you think about the rest of your wish as far as Sanskaar's actions in 27 😉😃. Re Ragini- I didn't want her to have anything to do with SwaSan's relation being cemented so hope you like what I did instead:)

Lots of love,
Shruti x

--Anna-- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness

Shru update other chapters too like this one so that Anna madam will give us surprise visit 😡 Do you mind if I beat the crap out of her for abandoning us😭 you have to agree with me ya agree with me no other option 😈


What the? 😡
Sanya17 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11


Hey Sanya 🤗

It seems that 26 drove you to much frustration huh? Yes of course there was a new problem but hopefully you have read 27 to know what happened there? 😉 Some angst and a lot of problems are part of DK as if it wasn't complex and layered there would be little point in a saga like DK in my humble opinion 😊.

Swara is strong and whilst she is sensitive and sacrificing she is also self respecting and knows what she doesn't want for sure- and she certainly doesn't want anyone other than her Prince, hence her outburst. And I deliberately didn't want the mums to know both sides and simply sort the issue for SwaSan- if they want their love they need to fight 😃.

You are/ were totally right- this was about Sanskaar taking charge and doing something 😉 Mission Ranjit Bhagao 😆😆. Sujata is a hurdle but her son knows how to handle her and all others in a way too. You will have seen what Shekhar did in 27:)

Hmmm I think with due respect you need to trust in the writer here:) I have a plan for the story and a very definitive ending planned, and you won't be made to wait for centuries 😆😆. There isn't many chapters left and with DK often I start with something in one chapter and finish it off in the next so I think the risk of what you fear- that I won't tie up all the loose ends, is less:). I would warn that despite 27 there will still be problems as there is obstacles still- such as the upcoming days and also Devendra plus the reveal of any other plots that may have taken place so please bear with me and don't feel that it will drag or not be resolved. I cannot promise happy ever after or no problems but am trying to give fast paced drama and suspense but never losing the romance but whether I do it or not- you guys are judge and jury 😃 I will try not to disappoint and if I do, huge apologies- it is a difficult story to write . I hope you enjoyed 27 and it helped balance the angst here 😃

Lots of love,
Shruti x






Hi how are you

Don't worry I know you will give perfect ending I know that in dk we get more than our expectation it always turns out to be more good than expected don't worry we know this story is hard to write actually I am very attached to the story seeing our swasan sad I get sad and I have read 27 I know that swasan got reunited 27 was just more than perfect will give detail comment on it
tootiefrootie11 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

😆


tootiefrootie11 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Shru dear..🤗

Nainu my dear 🤗

Just now read your last two chapters 25 and 26..😊 and so I decided to post a combined comments in this thread for both..😳

Thank you so much for this! I have yet to comment on 15 of Zinda but you know me- I will make up for it!! 😃

Chapter 25 started off with Swara walking along the palace grounds and then she found herself near the fountain where the old mad version of Sanskaar had wet her with water jets many days earlier..You have tried to compare Swara's old cheerful lifestyle and present silent and matured version with the fountain, which now lay stationary and lifeless..Wow..I really loved it😃

So glad you liked it and yes it was about drawing the contrast to her then and now and also to bring them back to almost where it sort of changed things for Sanskaar as the impact of Swara on that day really made an impact!

When the Gadodia ladies had asked her about her erstwhile journey with Sanskaar, she spoke highly about him and her mothers got the clue, that she might have developed feelings for him..After all they are mothers..😊

I wanted Swara to be clear that she won't listen to anything against Sanskaar, and yes of course the others sense something deep running here!

Ok so SanLak have decided up on a cease fire for the time being..😆 So there is no luck to witness San--gini and Swaragini war any time now..hmmph, will have to wait for it I guess..😛

Ah yes, sorry- I didn't want that typical track from the show anywhere near DK- I think we have enough other things to show here no? 😃

I really loved Uttara Swara bonding..😊😊 and then the way they went to meet Varun and Veer at the stables..aaahh Pawannn he too came there..😉 Really loved the way he talked with Swara about Sanskaar, indirectly through Veer's name..😆 Pawan is so fun..I really love him,.😳 You already know it na..😆😳
Swara gave it back to him, through Uttara..👏 that was really funny..ha ha

I think Uttara-Swara make such cute friends and as for Pawan - awww he is adorable no? 😳 I so wanted Swara giving back and she did huh?! 😈

Swara was too hurt after hearing Sujata's dialogues..😭

Sujata

Poor Sanskaar he misses his princess so much..And when he found her all drenched and beautiful in that abandoned building, he was so relieved and happy..😳
The kiss was magical..☺️ I really enjoyed the Swasan scene here..😳It was so beautifully written..

😳😳😳- glad you found that scene nice- I see so much passion and love with these two how can they not set fire to even rain?! 😳

But again she rejected his proposal for marriage..😭This girl na..😲

Well Swara cannot think clearly at this stage and she is convinced this is the right thing to do given she doesn't know how much Sanskaar loves her

Chapter 26 was so shocking..OMG, Ranjit and Swara...no wayyy..Please put a stop to that alliance Sanskaar..Save your princess, will you..😭

Janki maa understood Swasan relation, but still she has no choice, and she even asked Swara to consider that relation..OMG..😭 Even if Swara is really against it..

Really loved the way Sanskaar talked to AP about his love for Swara..But AP is also helpless like any other woman of their era..

Now only Sanskaar can do something...😲

I knew 26 would cause angst! None of us likes the thought of someone else being anywhere near Swara let alone being forced to marry her but I had to get matters to that stage as you will se why in 27 hopefully. You will have to tell me whether that helped with the trauma and stress caused by 26! 😉



Replied in blue above dear Nainu.

Lots of love,

Shru xoxo

Sanya17 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Me after 27 😃 ☺️ it was so very good ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏 👏👏 👏 👏 👏
In the beginning ragini keep burning 😈 that girl start taunting swara 😡 swara gave perfect reply 👏 👏 after everyone agreed for swasan marriage I imagined raginis expression her shock it made me 🤣 🤣

Sanskar announcing and asking for swaras hand for marriage the way he did it i was like go on claim her 🥳 the way he did so perfectly swara chose him mothers supporting them👏 👍🏼 👏 ranjit he told it would be foolish to fight with sanskar when he is fighting for his love thats true he is intelligent 😆 and then sanskar dialogue if they don't agree he will just kidnap swara again 🤣 🤣 🤣 hmm so he was ready with back up plan 😉 😆

The epic confession send me in dreamworld and their romance it was really so very nice and hot left me ☺️ 😳 with all blush dreamy and with a wide grin thank god no one has seen my expression that time otherwise they would have wondered whether I have gone mad or found someone special😆 they don't know this is dk madness😆

For you🤗 🤗 and lots of chocolates ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Edited by Sanya17 - 9 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".