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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

I m silent reader of this story. but today I can't stop my self from commenting that how beautiful your story is... 😳 after last chapter my heart was broken n I was so scared to open this one but I m glad that I read this awesome chapter. just loved it. ⭐️ you are too good. 😳

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Shru I love you!!!

I'm not sure anything else matters after that. I love you so much my dear! That chapter 26 had left me with no sleep or rest, thank you for restoring my senses with this super awesome chapter 27.

Now I can comment peacefully on all the chapters I have missed. But will keep them short, because truly this latest chapter deserves the main spotlight of any comment at this stage.

Sanskar's return...reminded me of Shri Ram's return to Ayodya. I know you drew no parallel between them, but still the tremendous joy vibrating through the subjects seemed equal only to Diwali, with their prince, his rightful honor claimed returning to them, and being embraced in welcome with equal love!

In the next, the growing tension between SwaSan was almost setting fire to rain! That was one steamy sequence, excellence of writing at its best and brightest.

I so knew after that, we would be plunged in to a deep sea of depression and huh, I was right in assuming so!

It was not just a sea of depression but also was dwelled by a giant turtle called Ranjit! I couldn't even breathe properly after I finished reading that chapter, it was like I was about to marry the samavant twice of my age...

But worth of mention, that torch of heroes being lit by Sanskar was...regal, awesome, awe-striking!

Now, now, in chapter 27.

Sanskar to rescue, basically, both Swara from an unwanted marriage and me from a potential heart stroke!

I just love him...he is the prince through and through. Respectful, honorable but all the while firm in his stand and clear in his demands. I'm so glad that almost the entire royal court, after trying their best could not, even by a mere inch, change his resolve.

Thankfully, my lady Swara also had mercy on me and minded to tell them exactly what she wanted without giving me any migraines.

Then the turtle wasn't so bad after all. But still, he is the turtle Shru, for he troubled me so much in the past week, I was sick with a viral flu and unhappy and on the top of that I kept thinking how on earth are we to survive the turtle's proposal!

I'm so glad Samavant Ranjit is a man of honor as well as understanding and kind hearted person. He understood the unsaid there. Thank god for that!

Now these two...they do have to fight everything out right? At least I'm glad everything was clarified from Samakalgunj to Maheshmahal.

Then...what was that?

OMG, how fiery can you really write? I mean you literally set my screen ablaze!

Then, I am left to wonder at Sanskar's immense self control. Truly he is one wonderful man.

Okay, now, we have to wait till the battle of Baadigunj is done. Why do I feel that is not going to be the simple task Sanskar made it sound like?

And Ragini, would she not, plan one last blow?

All in all, I'm at wonder about your ability to deliver masterpieces one after the other. You're so...out of the worldly, talented at this my dearest. Do continue soon.

I hope you're feeling all the better now. Take care.

Loads of love,

Saku

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

I God I am literally dancing right now Shru!
finally the words are out aloud... the confession was so touchy and emotional... loved every word of it
And Saamvant Ranjit sounds like a decent man too for backing off...
seriously I am just in love with this update

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Prerana

@prerulalli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Been a silent reader till now as I had no words to comment upon

But I can't control myself anymore😊

This had been probably one of the best chapters of dark knight I must sayJ

The way sanskaar dealt with the entire situation is purely commendable

Everyone was shocked with his proposal including swara

At the end when DP asks what she actually wants , she says I wanna marry sanskaar

Sanskaar ji badhai ho badhai!!!!!!

Everyone acted mature enough to deal with this

Glad that lakshya supported his brother

Now that everything is clear, he rushed to his lady love <3

The confession was so natural

The next scene was absolutely hawwt

Good that they controlled themselves as he had a war to wage

Embarassing situation when pawan and uttara come there

Next chapter is surely gonna be humourous J

Wonderful update on the whole

Love,

Prerana...

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Krishnabhisarik

@Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

OMG Shruti!!! Many hugs and kisses to you!! This chapter was so perfect on so many levels... Every single thing i love rolled in one amazing treat!! Wow!! First off, loved Swara giving Rags a much needed, not-so-good-natured champi.. Then the whole SwaSan's stance and wordless exchange at his entry, the way you described his rigid face in sync with his furious yet determined mind, and her trying to hold herself together despite her frustrated mood, so lady-like..

The moment Sanskar made his proposal i started reading in a hasty frenzy, coz i knew that it will ultimately somewhere lead to asking for swara's choice.. Reached that part jaldi jaldi, and then soaked her 'i'd like to marry prince Sanskar' with blissfully closed eyes.. Of course i had to go back and read the whole part again so as to read it better this time😆😳

Sanskar actually threatens he'll kidnap her again?? Such a cutie!! He's literally shouting he's madly in love with Swara, only a zombie wouldn't realise it..

Saamvant Ranjit is actually a very wise man.. I was mad at him for thinking to marry Swara, but now i absolutely adore him for his matured stance.. The whole explanation behind his actions earlier and his stance now, shruti, it portrays your maturity at handling difficult situations.. Super👏

How awesome are Ram n Pawan!! They know a conversation is overdue and they give it to him...

I had this big grin on my face throughout their confrontation!! I really can't describe how awesome it was.. Just super awesome.. My heart is still dancing with happiness... You described their joy so very poignantly.. As if their souls rose from the depths of darkness to the blinding light of pure bliss!!! Superb!!!

And then.. Hotness!! As they started umm advancing.. Umm i was so nervous, koi aa jayega koi dekh lega😳😛 The best part was when Sanskar was so overcome with longing and yet managed to reign in himself coz that is the right step... I love that in a hero😃

Shruti, you have literally rolled all qualities i love in a man into one in this single chapter.. Determination to do the right thing, fearless in the face of a challenge, truly madly deeply in love with his woman and so damn proud of it, passionate yet sensible, the above mentioned quality too😃😃 Love love loved it!!

And whoever said this isn't a cliffhanger?? I so wanna read the teasing session, oops, i meant the normal conversation between the four cuties😉😉

Off to read it again,

Akshata😊

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piccola1

@piccola1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Res-ing for when I can be more coherent! Looove the update, Shru! 🤗

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Hey guys! Thank you so very much for the wonderful responses already coming in! It's helping cover me in a "happy daze" and making me not mind having had no sleep and having to be at work! Am so happy that everyone so far seems to like 27! I'll get back to you all as soon as I can! Lots of love!

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Okay!ths part 27 is bestest part till nw.i love love love it.
Its wondrful.its lk i cn FEEL swasan's love thru ths updt.
Finaly swara said aloud her opinion & sanskar-wht to say!he z d othr name of perfectn!i love sanskar.
With the authority he wnt swara's hand & oh ya tht dhamki of kidnap swara again!!!oh i lv ths tashan.
&thn cms d best part of heart 2 heart cnfessn!!
Hats of 2 u shruts!.u mk tht part full of pain,emotn,agony,frustratn,love,desire,passone.
The intensity of tht scn mindblowing heart warming.
I jst love it.waiting for nxt part.updt soon.

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Kamala

@Kamala05

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+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#99

What was that ? Reading chap 27 was like a roller coaster ride.
The proposal of Prince Sanskaar was the best royal proposal I have ever read.
And the make out scene after the mutual confession , I was praying literally that no one should disturb them in between 😳
Let me reread again .
Thank you Sruti for the PM .🤗

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Me again guys! I just had to post this as I am laughing so much at work! I think I won't have many readers left soon as the predominant reaction from almost all seems to be - "I am dead"! 🤣

I love you all and please guys, at least stay with me very much alive till I end this story and for much much longer after too, God bless!

For some reason this tickled me pink and I had to share:). Love to you all!! 😆 😆

Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago

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