DARK KNIGHT-A SwaSan FF-T4-DELETED-AN PG1- Creations-Pgs 98/9 - Page 11

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Me again guys! I just had to post this as I am laughing so much at work! I think I won't have many readers left soon as the predominant reaction from almost all seems to be - "I am dead"! 🤣
For some reason this tickled me pink and I had to share:). Love to you all!!

Originally posted by: Sakura24

I'm alive 😃
I promise you I want die until you get these two happily married 😊

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Me again guys! I just had to post this as I am laughing so much at work! I think I won't have many readers left soon as the predominant reaction from almost all seems to be - "I am dead"! 🤣
For some reason this tickled me pink and I had to share:). Love to you all!!

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

I'm alive.. But this definitely feels like heaven😛

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Awww Akshata sweetheart 🤗

You don't know how happy your comment made me! I've read it in between meetings and trying to exchange an agreement three times 😆. Mmmwah

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Saku dearest *hugs*! Am so thrilled with your lovely comments! And reading this made me remember something else I had to say so am editing above! And as for happy ending- errrm let's not assume anything there but I can try for memorable?! But you never know! 😉

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Saku dearest *hugs*! Am so thrilled with your lovely comments! And reading this made me remember something else I had to say so am editing above! And as for happy ending- errrm let's not assume anything there but I can try for memorable?! But you never know! 😉

Hey hun!! Look, this is by far your best chapter till date! I know you know about the dilemmatic convos that I have with your chapters but this time I'm hereby declare this as my most favourite chapter of Dark Knight till now! And the difference is just by 0.000001%. But better is better right?! So coming to it-

Part 1:

Finally Swara and Ragini face off! I wanted to read one and this one was hell amazing I tell ya! Ragini won't change. She is such an irritating and disgusting woman! Actually does she have a heart of a woman man? The heart of a sister? Such a vile lady who stings so painfully and full of poison in her! Oh, I hate her. She can only think about others as she herself is. Selfish and greedy. Does she even know what Swara? Venomous! Swara's answer was amazing! Must have boiled her black blood. I guess I'm saying too much, but look the way she enjoyed the sadistic pleasure in hurting her sister, I couldn't help lashing at her verbally.

The way she scraped that bracelet over hand as harsh as it could be, was really painful to read. That was a really beautiful scene you had written and that too with the best of words that made it all the more realistic. And here I would say this allusion' to your chapter 21 was really a beautiful memory which brought an ached smile on my face. Swara and her fears seemed totally valid to me. Those uncertainties especially at that era when the bride never had a say in her marriage, well these all are justified. This pain and yearning reminds me of the Manchala sequence during Cavity and Sanskaar's engagement. It was so beautiful and just loved reading it.

Part 2:

Well, I guess this one is the longest right? Never mind, I can read your stories all day and never get bored or distracted! Sanskaar's stare was so cold and steel. The way he looked straight in her eyes as if hearing all what she was thinking, I was like, Prince Grumpy, what are you upto? *smiles bright with thrills of excitement* But then I were right! I knew he is gonna do that and I just loved this bold, fearless Prince who is asking for what is rightfully his! So loved it man! It was a treat, literally treat to read this!

Swara felt that she would swoon! I honestly was giggling, I don't know why! Maybe I was too happy that I started giggling. But I felt just amazing reading this. Although Sujata was stopping Sanskaar, yet I felt that she wasn't wrong, she has a say in it! Afterall she is his mother. I don't know other's take on it but I actually don't hate your Sujata at all and not even in a single place! Well, I don't know why this is but maybe I'm a bit crack! (There is no maybe in it actually) As I always said, Janaki is one of my favourite characters. She has that powerful aura around her that I believe each woman should carry as women are no less than men, and here she very well proved it. I knew it! Sharmishtha suddenly coming and asking something like this to Sanskaar, I just knew it. Actually I keep thinking about your FF lotsa times so I just thought about something like this and got it too!

This was really unexpected! Ranjit agreeing with Sanskaar and readily giving Swara to him! Well, thank heavens he did that but honestly I hadn't expected this. When Sanskaar said, why don't we ask the princess what she wants, I was like Dang it Sanskaar! You shouldn't have done that. Al the next paras I was like Swara say yes, Swara say yes!! The dread was too much honestly! But the gal chose heart over mind at the end moment and chose Sanskaar! Thank Heavens again. That huge sigh of relief, you don't know!

I was in total awe of the Prince when he said he'll kidnap her again! Like, that's the way Prince, I'm proud of you. Well, that was something unexpected on Laksh's part. I mean I never thought he would say something like this, but as he did, well the guy has increased a tweeny bit of respect in me for him. Ranjit is not a fool must say. He took a wise decision, or Sanskaar would have not let him. And when the Princess couldn't realize that he loves her, this man did! Maybe experiences! Janaki is the best, I knew she would love to have Swara married to Sanskaar after all she knows that her darling daughter is totally heads over heels for this so awesome guy!

Part 3:

Shruti, the entire description of The Jal Bhavan was really amazing. Like really amazing, okay wait I'll change the word. Um..it was quite awesome and um..you can breath-taking, yeah! With the lotuses and glasses and all, it has to be a beautiful sight for a nature lover like me! There used to be blue lotuses in my school as well and whenever I used to go somewhere, I would go from there touching them when nobody looks. Our Mali Bhaiya became friends wimme this way. Lol...I know I'm mad! Sorry, will come back to the topic.

Sanskaar, you really don't know how much she wants to throw herself in your arms, but she is restraining herself with as much efforts as you used to have! I'll not say have after the recent experiences *winks*. That verbal spat was really amazing to read. Honestly! Just loved reading it. And especially the horror that Swara feels when he said that he would kidnap her again was hilarious! I so love these two man!! These two define perfection in all senses. So it was Swara first hu? Well I thought it will be Sanskaar. As I already mentioned, I keep daydreaming about your FF to often in the day, so was thinking how you would write the confession and I thought maybe it's like a frustrated Sanskaar would hold her by her shoulders, and confess his love for her but this is way better! I guess that would have been quite clichd na?

That slight slip was sooo pleasing to my eyes and brain, I can't tell ya un! Finally all matters sorted, mutual feelings confessed and cherished. How I loved it when Swara kept shouting how much she loved him and the many many reasons and he ignoring what she said just hugged her as if hugging his whole world and life. And then cupped her face and told her the truth. Dude, here I agree with Sanskaar! Couldn't she tell? Which man would kiss her and love her so passionately if he didn't love her? Swara is too innocent and Buddhu! Even the Samkalgoonj incident! God I just love that chapter too! #Memories

Shit Shru Shit!! Are you a confession expert or what?? Honestly hun, the way you wrote Sanskaar's expression as to how he considers her as his life, his oxygen, his everything, I went mad! Totally overwhelmed! Look I might destroy the ending of your FF, but if this Prince Grumpy continuous to become Prince Charming, I surely become Cinderella and rob him at any cost! Even Swara's paragraph as to how this meant everything to her and how happy she is! Man, you oughta be the best out here. I never rant on any FF as much as I do on yours!! You rock buddy<3 The whole scenario enacted again was very beautiful and passionate! Well honestly, reading it had my GM on an overdrive, but I just loved this part. It showed how their true love for each other and this angst and separation had them needing each other like anything. Needing no craving actually, yearning as you said. The truest form of love, has no regulations and rules, it is pure in every sense and Sanskaar's self control shows it! Amazing...no wait...um...exquisitely written with the most beautiful of words and imagination to show their love and yearning! I already told you what I felt about it and there is nothing wrong in it yet reading it again obliged me to write this all. But yeah, it was quite orgasmic and exhilarating *winks and blushes*

Such an honourable and adorable Prince damn!! He Bhagwan, aisa piece hai kya is duniya main? Even If he'll be a Chinese, I'll rob him! Mr.Perfect Maheshwari! Pawan and Uttara haan? Well, these are gonna be big teases! Loved Chapter 28 too. See ya there

Love ya

Sakshi