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Shruti🤗

Sree 🤗 I learnt from some others that it might be helpful to reply like this so experimenting on your reply first 😆

Love this chapter too as like the ones before. Shruti, I'm on cloud 9 after this chapter.

😃😃 How happy this makes me!

Both mothers seem to understand what lies in the heart of their daughter. Poor Swara!! Though I understand the stand of the mothers, my heart really feels bad for Swara. Like you have said that happy princess is gone and the new one seems to be too much mature or maybe depressed. I love the part where she defend her prince by saying that they should place the blame where it lays and not the one who saved her numerous times. When it comes to her prince she will fight with all her might, broken or not. Love that quality.

Yes the mothers can see she is pining but it is one of those- they almost don't want to know? As to know might raise all sorts of issues so better in that sense to ignore I guess And poor Swara- she is so lost and hurt and has to way to mitigate the pain . I totally wanted her to be very clear in her defence of him just as he is about hers 😳 Also this Swara isn't blind and she won't stay silent about her sister as she already showed. There isn't too much she can do and of course she won't want to cause more pain but she isn't having Sanskaar blamed for Ragini's deeds.

Extremely diplomatic of Durgaprasad pressing not to focus on the Swaragini issue and concentrate on the main issue. True king in that sense. It's good to see how he supports Sanskar in all the matters. Poor Shekar, though he wants to confront Sanskar his hands are tied. Has to bend down under pressure. I'm not feeling bad for him, infact I was laughing thinking about his situation.

Durga Prasad- well yes, he took the way he had- let's focus on war for now! Shekhar 😆- he would love to call Sanskaar to account but he hesitates- what can he say? On one hand you would think he would say- marry my daughter now but now he has an issue due to Ragini and he cannot openly say anything about Sanskaar due to Sanskaar's restored position and his own dependancy on the Maheshwaris.

I'm proud of my Sanskar where he tried to initiate conversation with Laksh trying to mend his relation with his brother. But the resulted in another heated argument. Both trying to support their respective partners. Poor Laksh doesn't know whom he is supporting is the real reason behind everyone's misery. My heart really goes out to him. Apart from this he has yet again showed his concern over Swara's security. It indeed is an ironical situation.

Sanskaar I guess still feels bad for having doubted Lakshya and vice versa but as the issue about the sisters stands between them big time, they are both stuck for now. Sanskaar will see to Swara's safety if he can- he knows what Ragini did last time so now he has to take care!

The irony doesn't stop here. Now when Swara is with her own family she is not able to relax if anything she feels alone. I loved the part where she was clinging on to the things Sanskar bought for her during the fair and insisted on having it with her. They are both trying to live in the memories of those wonderful days they spend together.

This was definitely the most ironic part of it all. Being lonely has only happened she's back amongst her own. Before in the wilderness with only Sanskaar really for company (and maybe Veer 😊) she never felt alone! Says it all huh?

Swara and Uttara's friendship is a good turn of events. I really like to believe that she might act as a messenger for her brother when the time comes. Both seems to want to go visit the horses with a hope of meeting their master. Poor Uttara is trying so hard to get the attention of Pawan where as he is trying to avoid any such thing. Why I do have a feeling that even she knows what her brother feels for his princess. Para playing cupid for Swasan. Love these two jodis. Bechara doesn't know that no one can run from love. Ask Sanskar if you need more clarification on that topic.

Swara not only need a tiny but of light relief but also a nice and genuine girl friend, cue Uttara! With the smile that reminds her of her Prince too 😳. Pawan wants to run but can he really hide?! 😉 Avoidance didn't work for his best friend too well either 😉. Uttara- well I think she really liked Swara and now can see something is up. Pawan's hints were rather obvious too and she has clearly seen Sanskaar's state which he tries to cover up but sort of sticks out a lot! I love the- ask Sanskaar bit 😆😆

Pawan doesn't seem to stop with teasing just Sanskar. He was teasing Swara too. "He misses you Princess!". Whatever he wanted to convey he conveyed without actually addressing Sanskar directly. He was shocked to see Uttara siding with him on her brothers issue. He then went ahead and started teasing Sanskar when he came. But as karma would have it, Swara could understand the undercurrent between Para. Loved the teasing from Swara's part.

Pawan- as some said, yeh maar khaayega from Sanskaar one day but from Swara he got it back another way! 😆 I just find him hilarious- that easy teasing and how clever he is? Catching onto Swara's pretence that she's talking about Veer, he carries on too and does the same but slips in the real reasons for Sanskaar's absence.

Veer like his master doesn't like Swara's attention diverted. Still possessive and like his master, won't get attached that soon and once attached will not share even the attention of their favorite person.

Veer 😆- I already showed before how like his master he is 😉

Ahh!! Sujatha... You know I knew she will create more trouble. She came and destroyed what remaining peace she had. But she has made a clear statement that she will not entertain Swasan relation. Kyu apne bte ki khusi ke peche padi hai ye aurat?? I know she is not bad, but what she did has a very bad impact on Swara as if the issues they were having was not enough.

Sujata She reacted in the way the women are thinking- she was just the first one. Rather than delve deeper to see what her son really truly wants she thought she would nip this in the bud- selfish and short sighted. Let's see how she does in the future. Not only on Swara, this has made things very difficult now as the mothers too know what issues Swara would face there so they'll be even more anti SwaSan

Part 3 is my favorite in this chapter. You know the reason Shruti!!

I know yes 😆

My Kiss ☺️... Shruti barish me itne hot feeling kaise laye tumne yaar? I can write the whole part especially the kiss paragraph by heart. What can I say, my madness is increasing day by day now.

I am super glad that kiss came across the way you think it did! 😳 I was really branching out there and trying to make it bold without losing the grip of the time or plot but with that much passion, they cannot keep control the whole time so I wanted this sense of slipping out of control.

"I missed you so much", he groaned against her mouth, getting distracted in kissing the beads of dew dancing on her face and neck. "Please ask me to stop! I need to to go and speak to your father. I need to ask him for your hand and .."

@underlined: why he didn't stop with this and continued with kissing.

@bold: This had me laughing. A man with super self control is not able to stop by himself. He can do that only if she asks him to do it so

Haha, the stopping was almost impossible. And I found it poignantly humorous too that a man like him had to ask her to make him stop! 😳

Had hai yaar!! Why bring father here? Who brings parents in the middle of romance? Idiot!!! I know he wanted to have the right to be with her before doing anything including kissing but he is not able to stop himself from kissing her.

😆😆 Mood killing parents. But it was of course more about being done with having the permission and marriage being a done deal so he had the "right", which of course he does as you say but for that time especially I have to show some recognition of those issues. And haan, let him talk na- he still isn't really able to stop 😆 If I hadn't stopped them there, I'd have needed a bedroom and bed 😆

She would have not accepted this offer as still she feels he is trying to set things right. She has to know that what he is doing is out of love and nothing else. And to add to the already misunderstanding and sufferings Sujatha has done her bit. Shruti do something yaar!! How are you planning to show this impossibly stupid girl that her prince was not talking about kavita that day and it was her whom he was talking about.

What I am going to do you will see but it's not going to be immediate relief so be prepared 😈 I hope it will be worth the wait 😉

(The beginning of that chapter 12 she asks "Have you ever seen anything more beautiful?" Sanskaar looked into her upturned face, and mesmerised by her as she was by the scenery. he replied with his eyes glued to her face, "No, I don't think I have."It's clear here that he was talking about her. Even she was blushing hearing this. But then when he said"Maybe some love stories are never meant to be? Maybe only in death could they find any fulfillment of their love and some peace from a world which thrives on inflicting pain in the name of honour and family and duty, but never allowing one the freedom to enjoy those oh so noble causes with love? The world is cruel indeed Swara, sometimes those who do right are met with only wrong and perhaps loving someone too much should be a crime as it can consume you, and once you are in a grip of love like Samarjit's, if the world doesn't let you have your love, you want to destroy it, but may end up annihilated yourself and worse still, see that very love lost to you." He was sharing his fear of losing her here, not Kavita's loss. How will this be cleared??

All in it's time hon! He was of course talking about her but of course she would have not been able to know that. And yes, she did sense his admiration, attraction other times but she is TOTALLY inexperienced, she doesn't quite get the depth of all that and also she is genuinely rather modest and totally unaware of her own charms 😕

You do remember in one of your earlier chapters I've referred that chapter 3 marked the beginning of Sanskar's feeling for Swara. No wonder she keeps coming to the same spot. It was here where he had an urge to protect her even from himself first and now it's the same place where he vows to win her.

I do remember and I agreed then as I do now- I wanted them very much to come back to where things changed as such. The whole shift in their dynamic came after this- even Sanskaar's pretend friendship wit Swara, calling her Mermaid Princess and the whole thing of realising how he felt attraction for her- the start was marked here 😊

"You will be mine Swara! I don't know how I will make you see sense but I will. I will not let you suffer alone like this worrying about pointless gossip. You might not love me but you are far from indifferent. You would have never let me kiss you and responded the way you did if you didn't feel something and that has to be enough for now! I love you enough for both of us and if marriage means that only one of us is in love, so be it."

@underlined: This line alone made my week. The determination is clearly evident here. Let's see how he will convince his adamant Nymph.

@bold: Love such words and declarations when it comes to love... But here both love each other more than anything else. Like he realised she is not indifferent towards him. There is some sort of feeling for him but can't asses the intensity till she reveals it herself.

So pleased you like that monologue- I felt that it epitomised a lot of Sanskaar and yes the later part was his understanding of how much his own love means, a subliminal belief too that somewhere she feels and what (he fears) she doesn't he will make her 😳😃

Love,

Sree

P.S. Thanks for "I wanted to. I tried to so many times. But you stay too well hidden Nymph. I could have climbed the window but I didn't know what both your Maas would say to that. I do know what your Baba would say, and I didn't want to cause that situation. So I am glad you emerged yourself today, Mermaid. I was waiting."

I suggested this in last chapter and you gave an explanation on why he couldn't here. Love you yaar muwah!!!

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P.P.S. Are you going to deal with Para love angle as well. Would love to see what happens when his decision to not fall in love with anyone goes south. Uttara seems to have already fallen for him and Pawan's mind is convincing his heart to think otherwise, I think. Now in all Sawan conversation Pawan is busy pulling his leg. A reverse scenario will be fun to watch, though he can't pull it to this extent as the love interest of Pawan is his own sister, but still I think Swara will take the opportunity to pay him back for all his teasing.

Uttara-Swara bonding so maybe soon she will share whats in her heart to Swara and ask for guidence. But let me tell you if she does then Uttara is making a great mistake.

Haha, love you too!

As for PaRa- I won't be able to fit their full love story in here- let us see what and how much this can deal with. Also, we need to see what happens to various characters by the end 😉 And 😆😆 - yes yes let's not make Swara the love guru- khud ka kitna mess kiya hai! But mind, I am rubbish in my own case but fab at other people's love angles so Swara could be too 😆

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

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Hey Shru 🤗 🤗

My lovely sis 🤗

Back finally for the Un Res. 😊 The cold and cough germs finally got fed up of me and deserted...😉

I am so glad you feel better although I know the tiredness take some time to really disappear, so mmmwah for still making the time and taking the effort for this lovely set of detailed comments, all with your usual finesse 🤗

Coming to Chap #24, what I loved most was the deft way you portrayed the family dynamic, the shocked reactions of the Maheshwaris and the Gadodias to the firm, unrelenting way Sanskaar exposed Ragini's truth. As expected, Shekar and Lakshya chose to shut their eyes to logic and reason, and believe Ragini's histrionics and melodrama! That lady does know how to play them both, doesn't she?

It is always difficult in such major impactful moments to really estimate how people would react without making it either overdone or underwhelming so am glad you feel it came through ok. Yes, Shekhar and Lakshya immediately getting anti-Ragini despite the logic displayed by Sanskaar I thought wouldn't sit right with their characters as portrayed. Ragini knows who the weakest links are yes and how to target them 😡

I've always thought that Shekar and Lakshya resemble each other a lot---they are a sasur--damaad duo made for each other! And perhaps, the reason why Ragini is so fixated on Lakshya is that old theory that every girl looks for some traits of her father, in her future husband! Ragini must have loved the malleable, weak kneed, cloudy intellect which Lakhsya possesses---so reminiscent of her spineless father. 🤢

I couldn't agree more - I said in so many comments that they are both what I refer to as "soft spined"- elasticated- no real steel anywhere and not bad, just too weak when it really comes to it. I too actually think that Ragini really stays blind to Lakshya's clear shortcomings as she just transposes a hero into him like she does into her father but won't analyse further at all, i.e. she makes him what she wants him to be, which he just is not.

Those subtle undertones of the glances Sanskaar and Swara exchanged were so lovely. It was as if they were drawing strength from each other; giving comfort and assurance to one another, although things between them weren't exactly rosy at that point. That's one of the best things about SwaSan--whatever their differences may be, they deal with it between themselves. Sanskaar would rip apart anyone who dares taunt or try to hurt Swara; and thankfully, the Swara in DK is equally staunch and protective about her prince. 😳

Exactly my intention- I wanted to very directly show that internal differences are all very well and real but like the very best couples who make their love and relations work, these two will stand for one another when it really comes to it. More of course of the wordless connect but now enhanced by the need to offer support even outright. Sanskaar did that early on too but Swara won't hold back either. I don't think I can relate to a heroine who won't support her man when needed so our Swara certainly won't be one of those 😃. I find it so telling when people are so protective over each other no?

No matter what barriers (largely imaginary) are between them right now, the fact is that they have become so much a part of each others being, each others consciousness, that they really cannot function without the other. I guess Sanskaar has finally realized that, the issue now is how he is going to go about convincing Swara. She needs to be assured that he wants to marry her out of love, out of the fact that he cannot imagine an existence without her. But Swara, plagued by the insecurities of her own parents' unconventional union; and the scurrilous whispers and innuendo about her own "culpability" and "reputation" might certainly need a lot of persuading before she realizes the truth...

Absolutely spot on of course. Their issues are largely self imagined and born out of this silly ignorance the most perceptive of people have when so madly in love I think. They are both so absorbed in their own tidal feelings that they cannot see the other one is sailing where they should be- in the same boat! Sanskaar being more worldly has now seen that he needs to explain things to her, but he too is hampered as he doesn't understand that she loves him too but at least he's still determined 😊

I loved the way she stood up immediately for Sanskaar, when Shekar and Lakshya were casting doubt on his explanation of what Ragini had done. Not even a thought of sweeping the whole sordidness of Ragini's machinations under the carpet, staying mum for the sake of "protecting" her sister. 👏 👏 Thanks Shru---for portraying Swara the way we always see her--a strong, no nonsense type, who is certainly empathetic and giving, but is definitely not a doormat!

This one I felt I HAD to do! I couldn't have stood it if Swara stood by and cried and let her evil sister cast aspersions on her knight who was once more being her literal shield. Am so pleased you like that so much. And yes, I see Swara as soft and vulnerable when the time comes but a real trooper when needed and certainly never a doormat- more on this upcoming as well I hope 😉

Ram Prasad---I have always loved to explore his potential as a Dad, on the existential conflict he must have faced, torn between his duty and immense regard towards his elder brother, and the genuine love for his son. So glad the Father in him, carried the day as far as Sanskaar was concerned. Better late than never. Though I suspect Ram would never quite be able to forgive himself for staying silent when his beloved son was accused of treason and carted off to prison to ensure unspeakable torture; at least, he is showering him with paternal love and support now. That was an emotional scene indeed, where he narrated how he had come to realize Sanskaar's innocence, and had realized Sanskaar was only pretending madness, in the time needed to uncover the heinous plot which had been hatched against him.

You and me and even Saku always love to really delve deeper into Ram. He just doesn't get enough voice in the show but as I've said before, its bad enough Sanskaar has a foolish mother but I cannot see his father like that. I see a lot of depth to Ram and this was my small way of showing some of the potential there. Ram does carry a heavy burden but this was some start to making amends for him I guess. He had already done a lot behind the scenes before the escape too as of course that couldn't have practically been carried out without powerful influence from inside. It is time for those who want to set things right to put their money where their mouth is so some did 😃

And Annapurna, too, regal and commanding as ever, told Durga Prasad frankly that she'd always suspected Sanskaar was only pretending to be mad. 👏 Durga Prasad certainly received loads of surprises that day! 😆 Though I am really happy that he sought forgiveness from Sanskaar, apologized for the years of torture he was subjected to; I do get a sneaking feeling that had Adarsh or Lakshya been in the same position, Durga Prasad's decision would have been different. He may claim all he likes, that he always thought of Sanskaar as a son (it certainly was moving, the way he acknowledged that he'd failed as a father); but I still got the feeling---here was the difference between considering someone like a son; and really being a father to a son.

Annapurna- she consolidated what she had done before. She had started her amends a while ago of course. The whole getting Sanskaar out and then defending him when Durga Prasad was angry at his escape was her way so this was just her final highlighting of all that. See with Durga Prasad- he is not saintly and there is no black or white there. He did wrong but partly his harshness was also because he had he highest expectations from Sanskaar, more so than his own sons if truth be told. I am not sure what he would do about his own sons- I think he himself sees the inadequacies in them so he would have most likely been a lot easier on them despite being disgusted and disillusioned. But then again it goes back to the real pedestal I think he really sets Sanskaar on. You will have to tell me whether your assessment changes as things progress 😉

And then started Ragini's pin point acting. 🤢 Man, whatever pangs of guilt she experienced certainly weren't enough for any lasting remorse or a quest for genuine redemption. She is still selfish and grasping, bent on holding on to the things (read Lakshya!) that she's grabbed. Well---in a way, Swara is fortunate after all. Had Ragini not done what she did, Swara might well have wound up married to Lakshya. 🤢

Ragini can feel remorse but when it comes to saving her own hide, she is the total opposite of her sister in so much! Swara would die for another. Ragini would take the life that might jeopardise hers. But again absolutely nailed it sis- karma plays a hand and if she hadn't hatched those nasty plots our knight and princess wouldn't have been thrown together to carve out their destiny 😃

Shru, why do I feel Janki's slap to Ragini to get her to shut up served two purposes? It certainly showed Janki's protectiveness and concern for Swara, she did not want Ragini to speak nonsense about her. But it also served to forestall further angry intervention by Sanskaar. Might Janki be trying to safeguard Ragini from being complete;y exposed after all? I don't think she's evil or negative in that sense---she does seem genuinely fond of Sharmishta, and cares for Swara immensely. But a part of me wonders, whether she has realized what Ragini did, but would like the whole issue to be stalemated as it is, with people believing different things and reconciling themselves to an uneasy truce.

Janaki- yes I think she slapped Ragini in that moment to shut her up for sure. Janaki is a real politician and queen, just as Annapurna is. They will do what is necessary and it can be judged but it is what it is. Does she believe Swara? Probably yes, she is a very astute woman but she sees that Ragini going on a mad rampage just now would put them all in a position of no return. She probably wants the uneasy truce (perfectly described 👏) as what else do they do? When you read 26 you will smile wide- as ever you divined things that were implicit in and going to be gradually built up. Love how you have made the distinction between that and being evil or negative 😃

Loved the ending too, when they were all, under Durga Prasad's orders, retiring to their respective apartments. The concerned glances Sanskaar and Swara exchanged were so lovely. Their desire to be with each other, draw and provide succor to the other, was so palpably evident. Nice touch there.

Glad you liked that ending. It was deliberately made anticlimactic as far as Durga Prasad's approach was- what else could be done there and then? They cannot turf Ragini out and neither can they say SwaSan are lying (or believe it deep down) so he chose the suppress for now option which seems incredible but in the circumstances I just didn't see what else could happen. And as for our two- 😳😳They are in for more pining so those little things are going to have to keep them rooted.

I will comment on #25 as soon as possible, my dear.

Mmmwah again for this and take your time sis, no rush!

Lots of Love,

---Viji

Originally posted by: NitaReid

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As always so sorry for the late Unres shruti. I wanted to do Unres sooner and as you know having half of your family over for weekend doesnt give you any break to do what you want. Also sorry for the short comment.Still a bit busy ...Hoping the schedule relaxes a bit during this week .

Let's cancel each others out 😆 You can see how late this is! But the comment was much treasured as soon as it was read dear Nita 🤗. The length is immaterial- quality doesn't need always need the volume 😃

I loved the update ,all three parts of it. I do get Sharmistha fear, no one could understand it better than her. My heart literally felt Swara pain too. Sleep seems like an alien concept to both of them now that they are apart.

So pleased you liked the whole Chapter. Yes, as a mother who has gone through tough times in her own marriage due to her circumstances she would fear would't she? I felt it natural. Just as Janaki will fear for different reasons. Poor Swara - nothing but the one thing she is denying herself will help her.

The men calling for truce on time of crisis seemed logical. And i love to read that unlike before DP has Sanskar back now and i hope he continues to do so in regards of Swara too. While i am not happy about the mother role play in trying to keep them apart.

Yes, men are simple creatures in these things. They can also compartmentalise way better than women so when practicality calls they deal with that. DP really seems to have learnt from his mistakes so let us see ongoing. The women- 🤢- but then I felt that this is how they would react in their place

Veer makes an comeback with Varun too. Uttara seems like the only person who can make Swara will comfortable during this time.Parents will only spend time consoling her. But to cheer her up Uttara seemed like a perfect choice. Loved the teasing of Pawan and him playing Cupid by letting her know Sanskar was busy . Also liked Swara teased him back too. Uttara and Pawan i knew this one was coming and i am happy about it too. But i do worry for both Pawan and Swara considering there mother in laws. I refuse to like Sujatha after that scene.Even if she welcomed Swara back with open heart after sometime.

Haha, the horsies cannot be ignored 😃. Uttara was literally a breath of fresh air for a struggling Swara and then the little time spent with her and Pawan was a balm to her spirits in many ways which I felt she really needed. I just wanted this fun lighthearted banter again so Pawan seemed perfect for it. Swara is capable of holding her own as we have seen before so gave back good 😆. Yes Sujata can be a real thorn in their side but the funniest thing is it seems both her kids are rather strong willed so she needs all the luck there rather than other way round only 😉. Sujata is short sighted, she isn't bad, just her. Not everyone can like her but she is I think one of those that you have to take with a pinch of salt.

Sanskar was bit late..Why oh why , if not they would not have been able to talk alone. As uttara would have been there as well.

Haha, some timing confusion is necessary 😃

As i already said in my PM .i read the last part too too many times. Because i loved it that much. Words wont be able to describe how much i liked it. They finally met and i was super excited even when i know they are not most likely to resolve it soon after what Swara overheard.

I am so so pleased you loved that part so much! It was meant to just convey their overflowing love and need, and yes of course it wasn't going to instantly sort matters but was their little interlude after so many hours for them and for us 😉

The kiss was magical and it took me by Surprise. How i wish instead of mentioning the father first.Sanskar let her know how much he loved her. She still seems to think he is trying to do right by her to an extent and he think she likes him but not love yet.They dont know how deep the other is in love with them.

Ah I don't think anyone expected that kiss there. I just felt that we were all starved of them too so this was for us as much as them. Sanskaar was just too lost as was Swara and his reflex was to seek a long term solution which he sees as marriage and regularising this so it gives him the "right" for more of this 😳 and thus he blurted out about her father and didn't focus on the awkward topic of their feelings which of course they are both in confusion about.

I know she will run or walk away from him after the Kiss but totally loved Detemined Sanskar. He is going to marry her even if it means it going to be a one sided love marriage. Cant wait to read the next one. But will wait patiently as always or try .

Yes she had to run from that- it was too much for her in that moment after all the other stuff already thrown on her. But yes it cemented Sanskaar's determination and now he doesn't want to back off. You will see what happens next- some surprises I dare say! 😉

Love

Nita

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Shuruuu love...😊..muahhh muahhh muahhh for chapter 25...i was literally jumping with excitement when i saw my email notification...😆😳

Taliaaa my sweet 🤗

I love the excellent- thank you so much for being so connected to DK 😃 Mmmwah to you too!

Chapter 25 was sooo good i cant even describe it...i want to skip my comment to last part but nooo ...i wont that the bestest part..coming to update...👏

Haha, I'll read in sequence- but I can see which part you loved the most 😆

Swara condition is getting worse...😭She is longing for sansku...wanted to see him..feel him..stay with him like when they were together in camp.n palace.. she is getting weak..insominac but cant help herself..just want one glimpse of him but its not possible..with soo many people wandering around her...on the other hand sansku condition is same ...worse like swara...he wanted to see her..wanted to know if she is okay..wanted to clear soo many thing...but not getting enough time...managing.. plotting and scheming ..to protect his realm...ahhh poor souls...😭 felt bad for them...beautifully described their pain n sufferings...😭

Yes poor Swara and poor SwaSan actually . The angst and pain is part of overwhelming love stories to me so here they have to go through that phase too. Trials like these hone that which is pure and true and their love is certainly that so despite it all, there is beauty in their suffering without being (well too much) of a sadist 😊

Was sooo happy to read sooo many people have understood their special bonding..sharmishta..janki...pawan uttara ..sujata etc...all have noticed their silences...😳

I think it is obvious to those around them that these two are so affected by each other. But not all around them are anxious to help. Pawan and Uttara at least can be relied upon not to get in their way!

Swara n uttara bonding..😊.good bhabhi should bond well with her nand..😉.hehehe...swara ..uttara n pawan scene was sooo cute...all that teasing by pawan..😆.loved how swara retaliated n tease them...heheheh sooo cute...😆

I wanted Swara to have a nice friend and Uttara can surely fill that role. Pawan is so funny no? But yes he needed to get some back and our feisty Princess made an appearance again for a short while and dished it back out 😆

Sujata ahhh women why u never understand ur son.😡..but i feel she is doing this under someone's influence...bcoz she got back her son after sooo long .his happiness meant everything to her...she noticed how he introduced swara after returning..she is not heartless to let her son suffer again ..i hope im right...n she has some hidden motive to unite swasan..😕.finger crossed..or may be im wrong ..she is just stupid...n not using her head..just like she is in serial...😡

Sujata is a short sighted and rather selfish woman. I keep saying, she's not bad but she is certainly not the sort of mother that can really help her son. I am not sure of hidden motives. I think its more of unfair double standards. She does love her son but she fears having Swara in his life will make his position difficult as Swara is dishonoured, despite the fact that her own son is responsible for that part as is Ragini. She's rather stupid in that sense I guess but whether she will prove a real obstacle or just a temporary one, let us see 😊

Now coming to the bestest part...you know there is a term...😳😃

Death by chocolate...😳.after reading last part..it was like Death by chocolaty kiss...😉😳

Death by chocolate I am very familiar with 😆- often at danger of dying like that and there is a cake with that name too 😆 So I am rather honoured that the kiss I wrote inspires such sentiment! My job is done! I felt a lot of passion between them in that scene so I am glad I was able to express that given the period setting too 😳

You know darling im going to file a case on u..for slowly torturing me to death...😲by giving me massive heart attacks...🤢.hehehe 😆uhave to defend your case now??? hehehehe

Oh dear no cases please 😆. I have enough of that in my real life job 😆 And you can't have a heart attack- there is more updates to read so we need you hale and hearty for that 😉

..u literally increased my heart beats...😆ahhh loved the intimacy swasan share...wish that scene continues..but it was short lived..thank God...for my own mental health n sanity...😆now a day everyone is thinking im a nut case..always smiling ..with mobile in hand...cherished swasan moment to the fullest...😳😊👏

You made my day with loving the scene so much- thank you sooo much honey! Mmmwaah

Love u girl...😉

Love you too x

Update when health allows...😃hoping ur good now????😊

26 posted and I see you've Reserved. Health is getting better but the pain is bad still so . But I am really good at ignoring things I don't like so am doing the same here 😃

Tc lots of love hugs n kisses😉

Talia