DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF-T3-DELETED- AN-PG 1 - Page 6

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice update..
Devendra is disgusting 😡
Update soon the next part..waiting 😊

Originally posted by: Zephyr8

Chapter 17 was an amazing update. An absolute edge of the seat chapter. I could almost see it play out in front of me...superbly described. Swara was brave and used her wit well in spite of the horrible situation she was in.Sanskar's despair and helplessness was heartbreaking. Waiting for the next just to see how Devendra and his men meet their doom.

Res

OMG!!! No words Shruti ..no words!!! Lemme recover a bit and then I'll update my reply!

Tas

Amazing piece of writing 👏

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Oh wow superb update 👏
I love this brave swara
Sanskar helplessness 😭
Update soon

Thank you so much Sujay, glad you liked it! I'll work on the next part as soon as I get some free time:)

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

Omg...this was amazing..how did u write...this..it was mind blowing...plzz continue soon..will be waiting for next

Hello! Thank you so much for that:). As for writing it, it was a rather draining experience but to do justice to the story I saw so no other way. Am so touched by the reactions!

Love, Shruti X

Originally posted by: dilwali

Hey Shru it was very horrifying update but it will make swasan bond more perfect n waiting for next update with victory of Sanskar

Hey Ami xoxo

Thank you and yes all of these terrible experiences too can help a couple grow of their love is true, which here it of course is:). Do keep reading X

Hi Shru
I know I'd reserved chapter 16 on that thread. But I'll unres it here! I hope you don't
mind!
Okay, so coming to chapter 16-
Wow!! This was an unexpected twist. I mean I'd thought that it would be Laksh or
Adarsh but it was This Devendra who I loathe to the core of my heart. Ughhh This
man is so disgustingly horrible and he's such a bas***d! Sorry dude, unresing
after reading chapter 17. I was about to miss the city bus as I was reading chapter
17. Anyways will rant about that later.
This guy was so irritating! I mean, how more loathsome can a man get. And the
way he said the lady too of course, I understood this man's intentions. I was sure he
wants to do some hanky-panky with her and torture my Prince Charming. Holy
Hell!

Those men dragged Veer!! I'll KILL them!! How dare they drag such a loyal animal.
Don't they have a heart! If I would have been there, I would have made sure that they
don't hurt my Veer! Um...zyada ho gya?? But I would have surely tried I tell you.
Tried my best.

Sanskaar called her his wife! OMGGG, the feels here when he calls her his wife<3
How good and heart warming it feels!*big smile*
Swara should ride with Devendra?? Why in hell?? I tell you his intentions are soo
very wrong and of course that was proved in Chapter 17. That vile. He tied Sanskaar
! Aww my poor Prince. What he must be going through! Being tied like that. And
Swara is so disturbed at that! Of course she would. She loves him soo much! Aww
my SwaSan<3 But this Moron here is so damn irritating

So Devendra was the traitor. See I told you earlier that I knew it wasn't Laksh.
I had full intuition that Laksh isn't the one responsible for all this crap!! Had
Kaveri and he been together anyhow? Maybe the came together to rob Sanskaar and
kill him but Kavita died instead. And Shru, please don't be like RS to bring Cavity
back! Definitely no... Okay??

I knew Swara would be doing this trick. She's trying to buy Sanskaar time and
somehow escape from there. But Shona, this plan of yours is gonna land you
nowhere! The update was awesome!
Sakshi