DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF-T3-DELETED- AN-PG 1 - Page 4

I know I have never commented before. But that in no way means I have not wanted to. It is simply how brutish time is, more than 10 minutes spent on this site on working days is impermissible to me. But if I do get those 10 minutes, I choose to spend them reading The Dark Knight.
I would first of all want to thank you, from the deepest bottoms of my heart for being brave enough to start a story so utterly fascinating. I have never been in love before the way I am right now with SwaSan. To call them my obsession would be an utter disgraceful insult to not only their pure and sacred bond, but also to the immense adoration I have for them. The way Sanskar loves her, like his every breath, every heart beat depends on her-it is truly unfathomable.
And if I were to speak of your story, I would fall short of words. There is probably no adjective I can find, truly powerful enough to even attempt to describe your dark knight. The character in itself is so powerful-his heroism, his unwavering confidence and his sense of righteousness, I am beyond awed. Having lived a life of such grief and loss, he still has the rational part of him functioning, it is unbelievable. The more I read, the more I seem to fall in love with Sanskar. And I know he would have defeated all those that came in his way with no effort whatsoever, but now he is helpless, having lost his heart.
The intensity of his feelings is such in magnitude, that I being a reader feel it to my depths. This particular chapter of yours was so mighty, that you almost had me trembling by the end of it. I am literally fighting with time right now, but I cannot resist saying all that I have in mind since the beginning of this story.
I know this being one from times people like us have not seen, it cannot easily be imagined. But to have someone like you write it-trust me, the vision is in front of my eyes. The flow, the pattern that you have brought in-it really is commendable. There is nothing overly dramatic or unbelievable about it. Every next chapter is like this is the only possible thing that could have happened after the one prior to it. And I have no words for the way you are taking forward SwaSan's love story.
Trust me, I felt his anguish this time, of seeing his precious beloved being stripped by a disgusting leech like Devendra. Our little Swara, too brave for her own good- oh, what to do.
But its time to rejoice. Our hero is free. And Swara is his biggest strength. If he has her, Sanskar can fight the world. What are few soldiers, then?
I know the cycle of life, and I deeply appreciate the fact that you manage two chapters weekly for us. And the unexpected surprises that we have been receiving, in the form of early updates in the last few days, I literally want to stand up and solute you.
If you can do so much for your readers, trust me Shruti, I promise you, I will make it a point to give you all of my views on every chapter henceforth-no matter what.
Between two updates, you literally keep me on tenterhooks. I wait so desperately for each progressive update, I almost want to laugh at my own childish glee when I see there is an update from you.

Shruti, a small request. Take as much time as you want, but please, please, please give a slow painful, agonizingly painful and horrifying death to this Devendra and his men.We Swasan fans will feel rewarded. Thank you.

Love❤️

Geet

I've been off for so long! Missed 15, 16 and 17. Apologies. Was not in town.

This one would be really long Shru!

Damn, that end to 14 didn't see a progression. 😲 I was expecting some more light moments. But tbh, I think I liked the way you weaved it. I have got a feeling leaving this light moment for now, would end up giving us a much more intense scene between the two later on 😳😉

Anyway, the way sanskaar was avoiding Swara's gaze to protect himself from drowning in her eyes😆. Their silent communication through eyes. These two are *I don't have words to describe them*❤️. Amidst everything, all they think about is the other person's safety and welfare. Giving us relationship goals ❤️ Swara's state of panic on seeing sanskaar being lashed out on his back. 😭

Omg, Devendra is like the most filthiest character I have ever read. His lecherous comments and the way he pries swara, is absolutely disgusting. The immediate panic and fear that grips sanskaar for swara when he realizes Devendra's intention connects with us so much. How he hides swara from the prying eyes everytime!

How swara, enters into this gamble staking her dignity just to protect sanskaar and buy him some time. These two are aww.

I have one doubt, how was he so sure that the bearded man would be sanskaar only ?

Also,was he aware of that sanskaar kidnapping swara plot ? Or he thought that they have actually eloped ?

Chapter 17

Could you please stop writing such gripping chapters and plots ?

No! Don't do that. I adore them.❤️

These angst full chapters are so gripping. The way you have written the scene - Flawless👏. one can actually feel each and every emotion and can feel the fear and panic for swara and sanskaar envelope them as well.

There can be no punishment more grave for sanskaar than seeing his life, Swara's dignity being violated in front of him and partly because of him. I can not imagine the guilt and worry and HELL that he would have gone through when Devendra was doing such heinous things to his life! The way you have penned the scene, the reactions and the emotions I literally had goosebumps on my skin. I am actually at short of words to describe the plethora of emotions I went through while reading this chapter. I won't be detailing out the instances of Devendra's assault because i just cant make myself do that.

This has cemented their relationship. If they had any doubt regarding their feelings for each other,this nightmare has definitely cleared the depth of their feelings for each other.

I admire the way you have shown swara glancing at sanskaar frequently to gain strength from him.

lastly, I would like to again compliment you for your sheer brilliance with this chapter.👏👏👏

This one , despite being so brutal is by far the best along with samalkoonj one for exploring and bringing out their deep feelings for each other on the shore. I am waiting eagerly for 18 to see how Sanskaar handles this situation and how this nightmare leads to some sort of acceptance from both of them about their feelings , if not to each other than to themselves atleast especially swara.

Thanks for the PM Shru and apologies once again for missing 3 chapters together!😔

P.S - By now you must have realized my love for angst full chapters! 😉

Thank god Swara understood Sanskaar and grabbed the dagger at the right time. That piece of Shit deserves it all. I want Sanskaar to rip him apart, tear him to pieces.

Swara was bold and she fought back bravely,, so proud of her.

I hope the next chapter is less gruesome.