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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Shruti dear i am extremely srry for being late for comment...
actually i read the whole when i was in cls and it took me a while to calm myself.
what a horrible and brutual chapter it was
emotional,action anger hatred love passion hlplssness it has every single emotion...
Devendra ki aisi ki taisi
swasan bond is good to see.
actually u penned down it so well that i got goosbumps while reading this like i can see the whole infrnt of my eyes.
do update nxt and pm me
With Love
Soumi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sakshi my sweet! I seriously tortured you with 17 no?! Sorry honey!! I'll be doing proper replies but omg sweetie- i know the harsh words are for the disgusting psycho and ofc I won't feel bad!! I want everyone to have that reaction to him. That why I wrote him. If SwaSan can face such a man and stand, it just proves their perfection, individually and together so pls don't feel like you ever need to restrain from a reaction. An author's job is to create characters people can react strongly to and i wanted a true villain and it seems like I got one!

Lots of love xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Beautiful,amazing and awesome was what chapter 17 was.Chapters15 ,16 and 17-beautifully painted emotions of both Swara and snacker.This story is getting interesting chapter by chapter and every chapter makes me want to read the next.😊😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Asyalover

congrats on new thread ...thnk 4 the update...i just hope swasan gets out of divendra's clutches soon



Hello! Thank you so much, you'll like the action coming up I'm sure:) verdana
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks Mystic:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: amimus

That was a chilling chapter. My god I was so sacred for Swara. That devendra is a maniacal beast, a filthy animal, disgusting amd sick man.

Thank god Swara understood Sanskaar and grabbed the dagger at the right time. That piece of Shit deserves it all. I want Sanskaar to rip him apart, tear him to pieces.

Swara was bold and she fought back bravely,, so proud of her.

I hope the next chapter is less gruesome.


Thank you so much Ami, it was meant to raise a chilling effect and show what an astoundingly brave girl Swara is so it seems to have done that, which I'm really pleased about. Devendra is all you say and more we cannot even describe. Detestable pig. Yes the SwaSan connect worked even at a time like that when Swara gained strength from Sanskaar and understood about the dagger:). I am not sure about less gruesome as it is a battle in the next chapter but of course it's a totally different kind of chapter so rest assured:).

Love Shru X
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: a_uma

that was a stunning update ... still feeling scared for swara and sanskar.. you have beautifully depicted what agony swasan went through at the hands of devendra.. I could barely control my tension while reading it.. thankfully swasan kept their wits and now devendra has been wounded... but what about his soldiers.. I hope swasan are able to escape.. and I so dearly want sanskar to kill that animal bagri..


Thank you so much Uma 🤗. SwaSan are by no means clear of danger, a lot more awaits before they can be called safe . Really appreciate your comments about the writing. Sit back and enjoy the battle or actually sit forward and enjoy it 😉
Love, Shru X
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: foresight

res...will comment once i am through writing my next chapter..sorry


Take your time Sapu, totally understand and have left an apology on your thread too! X
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Sampriti.

Amazing piece of writing 👏

Wonderful update..
Loved it
Thanks for the PM 😊


Thank you so much Pubi, glad your enjoying the story:) Love, Shru x
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: NitaReid

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Hi Shruti🤗 ...
I thought last chapter was intense but you outdid yourself with this one👏 . This Chapter was so good. So as expected no one was fooled by Swara plan.. While I loved how Sanskar saw through it , i just hate that the Devendra didnt fall for it either..
Wow Devendra is such an disgusting character, i already thought i hate him the most but after this chapter i am wishing for all sorts of painful death for him🤢.. Poor Swara i really felt very bad for her.. She was a princess lived with dignity all her life and the way he was treating her made me furious😭.. But i loved Sanskar righteous anger. The way he kept lashing out at him for all his evil intentions was so good.

I really hated to see Swara and Sanskar so helpless but when Swara slashed him with Dagger, oh how i wish she hit the eye too and not missed it😆 , that guy doesnt deserve an eye or deserve to live for that matter. Swara to the rescue⭐️ . Wow i loved it that she was the one broke his ropes and now it is his turn to save her back..
I loved the forehead kiss not because it was romantic , i know this is not the setting for it, Because it was an act of calming her down and reassuring her that he is with her and will protect her now. So the odd are agaisnt them but i know they will make it or atleast i hope they do😊 ...

Awesome update Shruti👍🏼... Reading it in the early morning was such an treat❤️ ... Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.


Hey Nita 🤗

Thank you so much as always. Yes, it was Swara's sort of last ditch effort to stall and in her naivet the poor thing probably thought it might just work but alas, for people like Devendra- nothing good is sacred .

I believe the reactions to Devendra have proved, as I wanted them to, that he is beyond vile- the foulest of creatures is no exaggeration to call him. Swara was indeed heartbreaking in this no? 😭😭
Sanskaar was in such a bind and yet he had to try anything he could but again 😭.

Haha- I didn't want Swara to finish him off 😉. So settled for a permanent mark he would always remember. That's exactly what I wanted- Swara to actually save Sanskaar as little chances of that usually happening in their equation and as you say- from now on, it's his turn.

Yes!! The kiss on the head was a thank you, I'm sorry and I have you now, it will be ok and everything in between. His way of giving thanks to her and for her both 😳.

Thanks so much Nita, always a pleasure to see your comment.

Love,
Shru x

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