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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Res for 22...love u babes😊
Unres😊

Shruuu jaaan...hugs n kissies...😳

What a stupendous update...wow...👏

Beginning with the incredible swasan cuddling scene..😳.swara woke first...n that blush n not willing to leave him was sooo awe worthy...im alll ☺️
Suprisingly sansku witnesssed her flushed face n understood she is pretending to sleep...awww😳😃

Was soo delighted to read how swara feel all different..😃.love makes u do crazy things..😊.she is now back to being old swara..😉.loved how she discarded the cloak.n wore clothes presented by him..😳😃.sigh...n that direct appeal to not let her go n that mesmerizingly beautiful kiss.😳..the declaration of love for each other...im over the moon now..wow..deep breaths...(bear hug to u shruuu)❤️

But those kabab mai hadi.😡..kisi aur time ajate...ahhh😡
Anyways after that it was a roller coaster ride..😲.of sooo much revelation👏..sooo many misunderstanding clear..😊.specially between sansku n adarsh...sooo sansku not being traitor is aknowledged..😊😃.im happieee for him...
Well swara was soo happy she made kheer😃.welll i had a cake for my sansku n ur update...hehehe😉😆

Why adarsh is giving me negative vibes???? Something is fishy about him...hmmm😕

N then we witness the most heartwrenching scene.🤢..swasan misunderstanding..😕.im sooo much crying.😭😭..nooo love ur nok jhoks.😊.not this fight...but it was needed in the story.😭..it should have all the flavour ...happiness .sadness..pain..jealousy.. fights n misunderstanding...😭

Climax was sooo sad...😭swara why u not understand his feeling??? He loves u not pity on u...but i understand ur turmoil as well😭..wished he had filled her.mang n assured her of his true feelings...😕but.swasan now separeted..😭.temporarely..i hope this misunderstanding resolve soon..n we get our lovey dovey couple soon...😉😃

This chapter has taken meee to extremes..😊.extreme happiness 😳😉n extreme pain 🤢😕...hoping everything clear soon..its not good for my health..🤢i cant see swasan seperated.😕.they are meant to be together..they are soulmates..😊.

Update earliest love...⭐️
Praying for ur health...hope u r better now????😃

Lots of love.. hugs n kisses.😉
Talia

Taliaaa 🤗

Lots of return huggies and kisses even though they are late! So pleased you loved 22:)

I knew you would like the tender waking up moments between SwaSan and the slight reversal with Swara waking first this time 😃 Yes love does make you behave in weird ways and here Swara is finally rediscovering her confidence due to her realised feelings. I am so so thrilled you loved that whole scene from the dressing up to the kiss 😳 Bear hug back but carefully as my ribs are on fire 😆

Then yes, it was a roller coster. The interruption- ah if that hadn't happened how does my story move and my sadist heart get its kicks?! 😆 Joking- but it was a necessary evil. Yes Adarsh has resolved his MU re Sanskaar and you are not the only one getting negative vibes from him- the vast majority are too. You shall see if you are all right or not 😉 Oh I like that you ate cake in honour of DK 😆

You are right- heart wrenching it was but was so heartened to read how you got that it was necessary and exactly as you say- all those ingredients are needed to make a story well rounded so 😭. Hmm, Swara would MU I felt especially with the way he started when he first began. Also a little more of her thinking you'll read in 23 and overall she wishes it, hopes for it, but fears that he cannot love her as she does him - a common issue when you fall in love no, the uncertainty about the other person's feelings As to how long before things resolve, that I cannot answer yet, things need to play out but hopefully what is to come will be good even if its painful .

Thank you so much for your prayers- much needed always. I am a little better for sure but still not recovered! Apparently this viral lasts long but am sure it will go soon- I like to ignore things I don't like 😆

Loads of love always and mmmwah,

Shru xoxo

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dilwali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#482

Hi Shruti
i hope u r fine now
as usual this update was as brilliant as i expected and at this point story is so emotional n I m waiting for moments when swasan will be united n I m anxious after Ragini's truth will be revealed how everyone will react n story has reached to that point where we are anxiously waiting for next updates but I ll say to u that while giving us updates do take care of your health
lots of love

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Chapter 22:

Phew! What a chapter. Why did you have to update Part 2 today?😆 You should have left us in our dreamland Shru😆 But chalo like a bitter medicine its best to get it done & over with ...and I hope that is ALL that we have to get done & over with & there is nothing worse coming up

You haven't written this in the chapter but should I assume that yesterday Swara didn't have any nightmares?😳 And this could be due to the fact that now her dreams of a beautiful future with Sanskaar have driven away her nightmares? 😳 Swara waking up earlier & studying his sleeping form as she thought about how much she loved him was ☺️ That whole scene for me was somehow more magical than the kiss. I dont have any proper words to describe it; not that that stops me ever; but it just felt so right for these two people to be there doing whatever it was they were doing. Sometimes even the simple act of sleeping in your beloved arms is more ☺️ than a fiery love making session could ever be😳 Sanskaar is so in tune with her that on waking up he immediately recognizes that she isn't asleep either. The blush that rose on her because of his steady gaze ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Sanskaar's will power is legendary but I must admit Swara's is no less. How did continue feigning sleep when I would have just rolled over & buried my face in a pillow😆 He should have tested out his theory in some other harmless manner😈

Every time I see Swara hiding under that cloak I want to just envelope her in a tight hug & assure her that she need not hide, so I can imagine how much this whole incident would mean to Sanskaar😳 Finally his acceptance & love has reached her & she is ready to shed that dratted cloak because she is over her sense of shame. Such a baby really who gets all dressed up so she can show it to him & so eager for his approval 😳 and my my... the Prince definitely approves😉 I am sure even she hadn't expected such an intense approval😉😆☺️

So she has packed away Mohan hmm. But where is Mohini? I see a lot of late night talking to puppet sessions coming up😉

Finally the Maheshwari's got to know the truth about Sanskaar. That is one less tension AND it also means now Sanskaar has no reason to dwell on "if onlys..." 😳 Now he can act on all his desires😳 I like it how Sanskaar asked Adarsh to shut up...clear indication there that he wont listen to a single thing against his Swara, even if its his family or elders doing the talking😊

A celebration to welcome Sanskaar & proposals for him Now it will be Swara's time to get jealous😆 😈

And then the most heartbreaking heart break ever. I am happy that she didnt give too much importance to the soldier's gossip but instead chose to go to Sanskaar though I dont know what it was she would have asked him😕 But then she heard Adarsh repeat the same things 💔 and she knew that this thing would now be repeated time & again by everyone in their community

And even after all this she doesn't blame Sanskaar at all😊 How is it possible for a single person to be so good? Ragini is responsible for 95% of her troubles but Sanskaar too did play a role...but once she forgave him, she wont even think about it👏 Is there even any one word for such people? That Ram couldn't value his Sita, but I have high hopes from this Ram. He will treasure her like she deserves to be.

I am so proud of Swara. She resisted her own desire to marry the man she loves & rejected him.
She craves a love so deep that the ocean would be jealous because she herself loves him that deeply in return😳 She will not settle for scraps. She is ready to face the world alone without needing the crutch of sindoor & shaadi but she is not ready to be his under any sense of obligation. Such a strong self respecting woman. Abhimaani ladkiya toh bahot mil jayengi par swabhimaani ladkiya bahot kam milti hai.

All I will say to her is:

Dheeraj dhar, vishwaas kar
Poorn honge sab kaam😳 (from BRC MBH)

Lanny dearest 🤗

I am so late on this reply- sorry!!!

Haha, I am cruel huh? I could have left everyone feeling all nice and happy and dreaming of confessions following kissing but no - I had to ruin it 😈. The sadist in me thrives on making people cry 😆 As to nothing worse- hmmm, no comments for now 😆

Ah yes no I didn't say, might in later ones but no Swara's nightmares got suspended with realising her love and being in her knight's arms after the puppet show that made her laugh 😳. I loved how you loved that scene so much, even more so than the kiss 😃 I wanted to create this utterly sensual but yet romantic feel to it and your reaction implies it did. I totally agree that some things are equally if not more intimate than just the act of love making and throughout I sense that for these two. Making love to me is more than just physical - real intimacy needs more and they so have that I think. Haha both of them are vying for who has more self control now 😆 Sanskaar's "testing" would have taken this story to a totally different phase and unfortunately we cannot go there yet 😉😳😆

Awww- she is such a sweetheart isn't she? It does make one want to hug and reassure her and then ofc lock her in a room with her Prince and throw the key away 😈😆 But yes it was about finally letting go of her pain and self consciousness to accept his love and before it went wrong he so accepted and returned her gesture with his very satisfying response which said it all 😳. Oh Mohini is packed too- she packed it all away but just spent more time looking at Mohan 😉. Late night staring at/ talking to puppets 😆

Yes now Sanskaar is all in the clear and of course this will consolidate his own position but as you identify this itself will bring all sorts of interesting events into being so let's see how I manage to unfold all that. Jealousy? Ah well she has to suffer the same pangs but to be honest she is already secretly jealous of Kavita too without knowing she is.

I wanted to show that Swara isn't stupid- she won't make up her mind on something so important without enough impetus but all the right buttons were pressed for her so she finally snapped after hearing similar from Adarsh and also realising the truth about how people she knows would react.

I really didn't want a Swara who will madly lash at Sanskaar because things are going wrong- that part of the show supremely annoyed me as it was overplayed. I am not saying Swara will never lash- she did sort of lash at him in rejecting him and in future some blame may be part of it but not for totally unfair things. She also sees what he did- save her from her own sister and protect her with his heart and soul so she had to bow to that I felt 😊. I am hoping that the Ramayan angle here can be played very differently 😉

I want to 👏👏👏 for your last para! This is so at the very crux of my whole concept of what a worthy heroine should be I felt from all the comments that you nailed that there! I so hate people who have no self respect. To me that is actually more important than even love. If you lose that what do you love with? And that last line of that para- I wish I can frame it- I will in my mind though! ⭐️

Perfect quote from my fave show of all time!!

Love you xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy
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Shruthi!!👏
You did just what I wanted all along. I was hoping all along that in this chapter they will address the obvious and finally things will get a lot more complicated for them. Remember we all wanted them to be separated to realise the depth of their feelings in the original plotline. It was just like that for me. But here I trusted you more than I trusted the cvs then. I read the update right from my bed and
it was such a good way to start my morning. Thankyou :)

All through the update my mind somehow knew what was coming next. I knew that she would break the routine waking pattern. That she would play a sleeping beauty to find some reason in her confused state. And innocent as she was she didn't know that her ever blushing skin would give her act to the ever attentive Sanskar. She is really naive the girl. And thats just perfect. I thinking giving the archaic touch to the story kind of toned down our swara that it is making the story more and more perfect.

I expected her to walk to him in that outfit, but I didn't expect her to actually do it. She really pulled some courage there. Choosing out an outfit from the bag ,just the one he happened to have liked, and wearing it to emphasise her feelings as silently as possible while meekly asking him if she should go away. I kind of expected Sanskar to go down on his knees but i realised that it's 1800 but then you just surprised me. A kiss. Right away. Snap your fingers and they were kissing. It was so incredible. I was literally swinging between two couples one dressed in your medieval clothes and the other our own Swasan from the screen. 😳. From the picnic. Where we still ponder on the thought if they have kissed on have not. The mystery of first kiss still stays unsolved there.

Adarsh and his troop!! God mm wasis always are their enemies when it comes to such scenes. But here too. But everything happens for a reason. And it's your story. So I was back to saying "swasan end game" .

I'm guessing pawan to play Cupid here. Oh he will. I know. The guy is just made for that. Unless you are planning to stick him to Uttara. 😆..would love to see Sanskar playing the protective brother. Confused yet happy that it's his friend. But that's for another time.for now I'm so sure he will clear sanskar's head off that guilt and confusion. And ofcourse he will also make swara see sense. But how is that going to play with the jealousy bubbling inside Sanskar.. I'm so excited for the next ones. I care the least about raglak..or shekar for that fact. And I'm sure once they are back manaki will be playing a huge role for Swasan.

Thankyou so much for the early morning treat
Hope you are back in good health 😊 take care.

Lots of love
N

Dearest Nalini 🤗

You made me dance (well as much as one can with fever and a strained rib!) reading your comments as you said I introduced the sort of angst you agree a story like this needs! Phew!! It is hard to bring a tale to that juncture but I don't see how else you can round things off. All happy and easy does not to me make a truly moving love story 😃 And awww- thanks for saying you trusted me to do justice to that part 😳

Haha- I can tell that you really saw through some much of this update- more on this later but yes I want this sweet and innocent but still likeable and believable Swara who doesn't annoy so am so glad you see her that way too 😃.

Yes I wanted to show once more how much grit she has- she isn't a wallflower even though she is very modest and bashful but her feelings too are so strong and she trusts him so entirely she would make such a gesture. Aha- if I wrote 19th century England I might have got away with getting on his knees 😆 but no I wanted a kiss instead. I don't think it sort of matters which century- such passion cannot be stopped no? 😳

Haha, yes Adarsh was a necessary evil for that scene 😆 Hmmm as to Pawan playing Cupid more so than what I have already shown? Let's see - some surprises there maybe! And now- take a bow!!! ⭐️ you somehow divined what you have seen the start of in the very next chapter 😆 I was laughing so much when I read this! Hope you will like what comes although this ofc isn't their story 😉

Shekhar and RagLak- siggghh what to do- even I struggle there 😆. Keep saying necessary evils there too! Janaki- yes her and perhaps all mothers will have some role in the future 😉

Thanks again and sorry for my late response, still not 100% .

Love,

Shruti x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: jess_27
NO NO NO PLZ NO... you cant do this shruti... after such a lovely part one, how could part two be so heartbreaking... im sure you'll set things right.. but still.. im just too upset..

1stly getting your PM of new chapter when i wake up, is the best feeling ever... with the illness and work, you still manged to update sooner, cant thank you enough for that.. coming to chapter 22..

it was probably one of the very few times, or should i say 1st time when swara woke up before sanskar and saw herself wrapped in his arms... feeling embarrassed about how she had asked him to stay back, but im sure the red on her face that time would be more out of blush and less out of embarrassment... and then pretending to sleep so that the magical trance doesnt get broken.. i loved the way he brushed his lips on her hair, taking in her scent to take him through the upcoming separation..

then comes the scene where swara returns sanskar the cloak, as she now does not feel the need to hide the marks of her fight from the world.. that scene meant so much.. that sanskar had finally healed swara and now she is back to the confident self that she used to be.. and yet swara trying to convince sanskar not to send her without him.. and then... the most beautiful thing,, their first kiss.. and how beautifully written was that.. kudos to you...how sanskar thought that he would send her to see her safe only to come back and claim her forever... it was wonderful, the whole scene...

then back to war zone, where matters got sorted, adarsh apologizing to sanskar.. finally sanskar got free from the tag of a traitor and now termed as a true fighter... on the other hand happy after making kheer, swara getting the shock of the life after hearing what the soldiers and adarsh had to say about her... in sanskar's protective cocoon she had probably not even got a chance to think about this aspect...

the last scene was seriously hear breaking.. for swara.. for sanskar.. for reader.. and probably for you to write too... swara misunderstood it all.. sanskar had always wanted to make her his.. but it was not the right time for what he thought was the right step at that moment.. swara shrugged aside the sindoor held hand, outright rejecting him, though the both could see the intensity of each others love previously during the kiss... and then swara telling him that they will never get married...

plz plz plz jaldi se sab thik kar dena.. i wanna see the totally in love swar sanskar who always stay close to each other.. they fight, but never leave each other's side.. cant wait for the next part... update asap..

love
Jessica

Dearest Jessica 🤗

Sorry about my delay in replying to such lovely comments- hopefully you'll understand why 😳 but what you wrote made me feel so good, I heartily thank you!

I say the above despite reading how upsetting the chapter was for you! Ironically for a writer of course that is a test of having done justice to their story so even that pleases sadist me 😆

Yes indeed- a first for SwaSan and for us- Swara waking and staying within his arms very deliberately, not wanting the moment to end. Oh yes a lot of "that" sort of blushing was on 😳. I myself loved the idea of a tender Sanskaar gently kissing her hair whilst pretending it to be an accidental touch 😳😳, I wanted a sense of intimacy despite the innocence of the gestures. 😃

I am so happy to read your reaction to the scene that led up to the kiss. Exactly- it meant more than just returning the cloak, hidden undercurrents all about. It was the acknowledgement of what his love has done for her and now she too finally returns his feelings fully, not that either knows or will do immediately. Thank you so much for appreciating the writing for that kiss. First kisses to me are special and I wanted very badly to make this amazing couple's as perfect as I could.

And then as you say, it started to slowly unravel in a roller coster fashion. Ups and downs galore. Sanskaar finally free from blame and soon to be restored but then instead of enjoying kheer at Swara's hand, they get one jolt after another

That last scene was really really hard for me to write- as you can imagine I live and breathe the characters in this FF especially SwaSan so their pain is in effect mine and I really cannot separate it. It made me feel really low and took a lot of effort in that sense. I am glad you saw thought why it happened that way and also that the marriage with sindoor in that moment wouldn't have really been right. There is a lot more to cover here. I can't promise when things will resolve but hope the next update makes sense flowing from this one. I will reply to that comment in due course, please bear with me as am rather behind and working through.

So pleased your enjoying the story and thank you again for your support!

Love,

Shruti x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#486

Guys,

A big 🤗 for comments already in on 23. As you can see I am working my way through yet pending ones on 22 but it is rather time consuming so please continue with your patience. I read EACH comment and love and appreciate them all and will eventually also reply to each one, it will just not be instant. Hope you will understand. Your feedback does keep me going to update fast! I need a break now as am exhausted and still not well but will attack replies again later. Till then rest assured I haven't missed any comments- will deal with them all.

Loads of love xoxo

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Sanya17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#487

i hope at least ragini's truth comes out now it is high time things start setting back on their right place there have been too much mess and some more things are yet to come out I think there is someone from the family is involved with that leach devendra have you planned how many parts are left now actually on one side I don't want this story to end on the other side I want it to end without unnecessary draggings, confused me😆

Both of them are in pain because of the misunderstandings 😭 but swaras entry on maheshwari palace gave me grihaprabesh type of feeling😛 I want to ask you one thing can you read minds when slowly I have got convinced that pawan is positive and he is like a brother to sanskar he really cares for sanskar and ready to take any danger for sanskar I started to want pawan and uttara as a couple but haven't told you, in this part when I realised that you too have the same thought I was so surprised do you have mind reading power how did you manage to know my wish he too will not remain single for too long😭 what will happen to his admierers 😭😉😆 anyways I always wanted a sweet nice kind hearted good girl for him and in my mind I always imagined uttara to be that girl I will like them as a couple

How are you now see you in the next part

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#488

Res baby shruuu

Unres😉

Shruuu love...🤗

Firstly thank u for the update...you are still unwell but just for DK Family...u managed ur work n health n given us such an amazing update...muahhh😳😃

After an emotionally heavy chapter 22.😭..we get a light chapter.😊..sooo as title suggests homecoming...it was literally true..😃.the whole journey was moment of happiness for soo many people as they were returning...sansku's loyals...but it was not pleasant for two people...swasan...😭😭

Im happy they didnot talk after all the misunderstanding n confortation😉..they needed space...to understand each other...n hoping this longing n distance will clear everything...swara can live with the fact that what they both share is pure love...nothing else...😕

after having sleepless night n sitting sooo close to each other ..the whole journey was quite...😕both were not talking but understanding each other silences...loved the fact that everyone was understanding their situation...😃😆

Grand welcome of prince was sooo delightful...n the way sansku welcomed swara n pawan...explaining their role in completing his mission was proud moment...😳😊👏

The whole family reunion scene was awe worthy...sooo pawan n uttara...hmmm m i looking at new love story??😳😉wow wohooo

N finally the climax was wow...the way sansku grip ragini n ordered to stay away from swara was shocking...what a cliffhanger..waiting to see what happens next...everyone reaction would be worth watching...👏😲

Im looking for some crocodile tears from ragini 's side...hoping no one believes her...😲

Update when health allows...😊😉

Lots of love hugs n kisses...❤️

Talia...muahhh😳

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javeria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#489

awesome update

interesting end of the update, although i think Sanskaar will reveal all the ill doings of Ragini but i think no one will believe.

Can't wait to read more.

Get well soon and update at ease

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Hi Shru🤗

I just knew it when in chapter 21 we were riding the tides of exceptional joy, the abyss of angst is somewhere near-by. It was so well executed that I felt myself engulfed in a trance of the story. I'm not sure if you'd believe me or not, I read chapter 22 as soon as I woke up and then still lost in thoughts of the most recent obstacles went to freshen up...and almost (My senses return before that!) applied toothpaste on my face instead of face wash! 🤪

Coming back to chapter 21,

Can I love this guy more? He is living up to the title of prince charming isn't he?😳 The lengths to which Sanskar goes to make sure Swara comes out of her trauma is just...Wow!

So unlike in serial, Swara realizes her feelings! Good for her...bad for Sanskar...now that she thinks its her responsibility to worry about his name and fame!

Talking of chapter 21, how can someone not say anything about Pawan. Whatever his other qualities are this man reads his friend so well...and his lady to a certain level too. And that puppet show! my my...it was a pure bliss to read!

Mohan and Mohini😆 Just love them both!❤️\

Then comes chapter 22,

As I said before, I knew these are the last golden hours of happiness when that kiss happened. I knew it, when Sanskar didn't get the chance to voice his feelings then and there. Oh, couldn't Adarsh come a moment later?

Then, I'm glad Adarsh and Sanskar sorted out their misunderstanding. But then again...I hate those men! Did they have to go gossiping in the presence of Swara...thinking from that angle Sanskar's men are angels!

Then Swara, as I know she would ended up making a milkshake of her and his feelings. I loved how you played a parallel to that Sindoor marriage on the serial here...but did not let the actual thing happen. It was obvious Swara is now doubtful of Sanskar's actual feelings...whether it's love or guilt. She should be. But I wish she wouldn't.

Just hope this dark night of agony passes away soon and the misunderstandings are solved. I can't tolerate my favorite royal couple pining this way

Then coming back to Adarsh. I want to trust he is good natured, fair intention-ed at the moment. But I am unable to do so. For some reason I feel weary of him and then again he seems far too concerned about the whereabouts of that key. Please lord, don't make him a traitor, my prince has enough trouble to tackle at the moment.

All in all, please, please get well soon Shru. I will personally pray for your health. And do update the next part quickly. This anticipation is playing with my sanity. I might end up brushing my teeth with soap next time😆

Love you loads,
Saku

Hey Saku dear 🤗

Sorry for this late response Saku- feel like this is my anthem 😆. Ah well you know me too well huh! You knew that if I am being so generous, I am planning something angsty to break up the "mush"! OMG 😲😲 you put toothpaste on your face 😲😆😆. Bless you hon- but this set of comments literally made me float on cloud no whatever it was- it was high up and fever and all, I was super happy!

Ahhh our Prince Charming is so so easy to love no? No wonder Swara has fallen so hard and fast! Yes, I wanted Swara to know what she feels- I thought 20 chapters was enough time and I really didn't want the rubbish we had to go through in the show 🤢 Well for Swara, she cannot just take and if she feel she will hurt those she loves, she will always choose to hurt herself

Another Pawan fan- yayyy! He does indeed understand those two full well- bettie than they're doing in that one department especially. So glad you liked the puppet show.

I was so cruel in 22 na? I started with the rosy picture and even showed the carrot of a confession but at the last min snatched it all away 😈 I called Adarsh a necessary evil in a previous comment- if he came later there would be little left in this part of the story 😆 Urgh- Adarsh's men- typical sort of MCP thinking no? But to be honest women are worse for that sort of thing IMO Milkshake of her feelings is such a fab phrase 😆. I really didn't want a sindoor marriage here- too easy and much too like the show- which I don't like to do in DK.

How long the angst will last is a good question but whatever happens there hope it will still show the deep love between them and create some of its own memorable moments. That's the aim anyway! Ah you too are in the camp that gets the "jeebies" from Adarsh! The majority do so future chapters will show whether those doubts are founded or not 😉

Thanks so much Saku for your prayers, I am sure they are working as I am feeling slightly better although it seems some way to go before I can kick it off fully! 23 now up so hope sanity is being helped and no no please don't "eat" soap on account of DK 😆😆

Love you too xoxo

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