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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#491

Originally posted by: simsen23
Shruti dear,

I hope you are fine.Take rest dear and be fit soon.😊
I had finished both chapter 21 and 22 in one go.
Extremely sorry,for late reply.I just love both the chapters.

Sanskar was so caring for swara😊.He tried his best to heal swara and yes he got success in the end.That scenes in fair,admiring each other, buying dresses, bangles,...the whole scene was so perfect😳. I definitely like pawan,he is a swasan jodi maker after all😆.The surprise of sanskar,his men collecting all items from shop,and most importantly the puppet show,how cute.😊.Finally swara laughed,and she requested him not to leave her.😊

Chapter 22 started with a beautiful scene and😊 ended with a painful one.😕.So she confessed that she had no interest to leave him,how happy he was and that kiss was ao blissful just like the morning gesture from sanskar.But their happiness did not last long.Adarsh came with a surprising twist,I still doubt his intention. Crown prince status is not a joke after all. I find it fishy.
But I felt too bad for swara,really...why why a girl has to bear the ugliest side always,how people can accuse someone easily, and Adash ,he did the worst,oh Girl,I truly felt bad for swara.I loved the way sanskar wanted to fill her maang and make her his wife...but swara accused herself and pretended that she had no feelings for him.Sanskar misunderstood her!!!!No sanskar ,how could he forgot,she was the girl,who fought with a beast ignoring her own respect,she😭 was the girl,who was broken after looking at his injuries, she was the girl who told him that she had no interest to leave him and most importantly she was the girl who was healed by him only him.😭
waiting for your next update,

Love,
Simi

Hey Simi 🤗

Thanks so much for asking after me. I am slowly getting better but am so tired and fed up of the symptoms it doesn't feel too good- am ignoring that and focussing on thinking I am better 😃.

Please don't apologise- you can see how late I am with responses .

Sanskaar really is the idea man no? Tough but super sensitive at the same time and totally devoted to his love . He would genuinely do ANYTHING to keep his Swara happy and hope she will go on to prove that she is the same 😳. So glad you liked the gestures in 21- shopping plus entertainment were all rolled out to make the Princess smile 😆.

22- yes indeed a mixed bag. A soaring start to come crashing to the ground - cruel writer that I am! I so wanted them to have a really tender moment before things went awry and what better way than their first kiss 😳, especially after their start in each other's arms. But then reality had to intrude as this has to be something they deal with. I see you doubt Adarsh too- you'll have to tell me in later chapters what you think 😉

That is the tragedy of this world- the women do bear the brunt of loss of reputation. What makes a man a stud does the exact opposite for the woman- this is respective in some ways of era or country See Sanskaar knows that Swara has some feelings for him but as she herself has only just realised it is love and he himself is so so involved, he was bound to MU what she did and said, just as she did him Save them saying very bluntly- I love you I cannot see another way and even that at this point could be misunderstood as Swara would still see that as his attempt to make things right for her! So it must be this way for now- sorry!! I hope you will enjoy 23.

Loads of love,

Shruti x

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Posted: 9 years ago

#492

di di this was amazing...loved it to the core...omg can't wait for next part now...upcoming dhamakha wow...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#493

Aap thodi thik ho rahi hai achi baat hai.pray karungi ki aap jaldi thik ho jaye.aur shruti aapko kya kahu pehli baar kisi couple ki misunderstanding achi aur bahut achi lagrahi hai.aapke likhne mein kya jaadu hai bata nahin sakkti aapko mujhe couple ki mu padni achi lagbrahi hai.halaki main chahti hoon k yeh mu clear ho jaye jald se jald.swara ka who sindoir ko pujniya manna swara ki achai aur pyaar dono dikhata hai.phir who veer pe ride acha hua mere stupid ifea ki tarah sanky ne swara ko ghodi nahin di varna veer upar romantic ride nahin milti sanky ka grand welcome acha laga.aur who kitna acha hai na saath meun swara aur pawan ko bhi maan dilwaya.aur pawan aur uttara .aapne kaha tha na idhar hi puri lyn lagi hai pawan ke liye par uttara.main aap par naraz hoon bol nhin sakti par khush bhi nahin hoon.mein swara aur pawan ke liue tym machine k liye bhi taiyaar thi na
Aur phir swara ka transformation from silly girl to princess ap ko bhi dikha.iss baare mein hamne baat bhi ki thi na.aur ab dekhna hai ragini k magar mach ke aansoo par kaun vishwas karta hai.chalo ab bye. Haan pawan ki luv iahtory padne layak hogi uttara ke saath main mazak kar rahi thi naraz hone ka.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: Swasanian
Shruti,
I know its been a gap of three chapters since I commented. But trust me, I have been reading and loving all the chapters.
But this particular one was such, that I am having to steal time from my merciless schedule to give you my views.
It was simultaneously the most awaited, cherished, lovely and the most dreadful chapter of mine in this beloved story. I am literally shaking. My, my what a roller coaster!
I was indeed on seventh heaven with Sanskar finally giving in to his long held desire. Poor soul, he waited sooo long to even feel rightful to touch her in the ways he wanted-and when he finally did, it was a dream so short lived that it broke off in the blink of an eye. The particular scene was so beautifully described, his feeling etched in just the right words, that the entire ensemble was right in front of my eyes. I personally applaud you for that.
And then it began. The reality of their world, crashing into their bubble ruthlessly. Though I am personally heart broken with what has happened to my Sanskar, I know Swara is utterly and completely justified in both her decisions and action. It is absolutely believable for her to think in the direction that she is, given that she has absolutely no inkling as to how helplessly our hero is in love with her, all thanks to how skilfully he has managed to hide both his bursting desire and his love for her beneath the mask of benevolence and friendly concern.
As i progressed with reading the chapter, first the display of their love for each other and then the much awaited realisation from the Maheshwaris about Sanskar's innocence, I was at first scared whether you wanted to turn this chapter into a happy ending or something. 😆
My heart almost dropped.
But then it came. The most powerful anticlimax that I have ever witnessed. It told me that things are not going to get resolved anytime soon. And I breathed a sigh of relief as well as told my mind to calm down and not over-bother about how things have suddenly spilled out of Sanskar's hands. My poor baby. I literally want to go out there and console him. I can't even imagine just how gravely Swara's words might have hurt him-given the immeasurable magnitude of his love for her.
The Princess is not an easy conquest, it seems. She slipped through his fingers like sand, before he could even realise that he was holding her.
And what Swara is going through, it is absolutely predictable and so vehemently unfair. I love it that you're subtly highlighting the attitude of those day Indians towards women. Though it is understood to think of a woman in numerous ways if she has spent so many days in the company of a man who has no biological or marital relation with her, I know Swara is not going to be believed even when she gives explainations, or even if others give it on her behalf for that matter.
I am personally dreading Swara's return to her house. Amongst people who will do nothing but shun her. And of course, her serpent of a sister who must still want her sister's blood to suck on even after what she has already done.
But I want Sanskar to not stop trying, Shruti. If he abandons his pursuit of her, then I don't know if there is a chance in a million that they will ever get together again. I want him to keep trying to convince her of his irrevocable feelings so that in the meantime he can also get to know that she loves him too, squashing the misunderstanding quelling in him of her rejection.
For the first time ever, I am dreading the next chapter of your story. I am already not able to bear their pain, specially my Sanskar's, I don't know how I will be able to survive their separation.
Lol, you must think I am a complete retard, but I told you, its all thanks to SwaSan and DK.
And lastly, I loved how aptly you named the chapter. The Winds of Change. You indeed turned the story up and then sent it to the burning bowels deep down in one chapter itself.
And I am so sorry to hear about your condition, Shru darling. Get will soon, hon. You'll emerge stronger after having battled flu, trust me.
Thankyou for updating even in such a condition. Look after yourself.
Love,
Anu

Dearest Anu 🤗

Once more you truly humbled and touched me with your wonderful and detailed comments! I am so grateful Anu that you made the time and took such effort in leaving such comments- I am mega late in replying due to ill health and wanting to keep updating but I read this so many times:) A massive thanks!

Ah yes, very apt to say it was the most awaited and the most dreadful of all chapters- I packed all those doses in one huh? I started with a major high and made it all crash and burn by the end I just felt that I needed the story to go in a certain way and the angst was part of it that cannot be avoided IMO.

So so pleased you loved the moments between SwaSan and yes finally the Prince could not hold back anymore 😳- only so much temptation a man can take, even if the man is the legendary knight our Prince is 😃. Thank you for finding the scene beautiful 😳

I could have hugged you for your next part and for finding Swara perfectly justified! I have tried from the start to show a young and innocent girl yes but one who is a true Queen at heart and totally worthy of the sort of man she loves and who loves her. I really cannot stand a lack of self respect. I have myself made decisions in life that have been incredibly hard but I felt them totally justified as if you lose your own respect, what else is there? I see no "love" without that. I said in another comment that to me, self respect in a sense is more important than love, only the former can make the latter worthy in my opinion.

Haha- no no I won't give a happy ending that easily if ever 😈. Slipped through like sand is quite the right example here I think and yes, it was never going to be easy, not that it has been so far. But love like this is always tested and has to come through that to be deemed worthy so here is their test - this time for each other not just with external forces. I knew the chapter would be anti climatic and yes there is a fair bit of the story left to tell. I totally think it is true and not just then but even in many ways now that the woman has to be answerable in a way the man never does- sad but true! The return- hmmm, yes it won't be easy at all but hopefully having Sanskaar there offers some hope although no denying that Swara has a lot to face. You will see what Sanskaar does and try or not hope you won't be disappointed in our hero 😉 See what you think of 23- might not be as bad as you fear 😉

I love the DK obsession so pls don't stop!!! It keeps me going! Thank you so much for the well wishes sweetheart- really appreciate it! Keep reading and talk to you soon!

Loads of love,

Shruti x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
My friend Shruti 🤗
The update is really heart touching. While reading the second part really felt bad for swara.
The first part really nice. The morning of swasan was good. They were really happy. The love was mutual feeling. It was pure and selfless.
Swara remembered the memories she shared with sanskar and she was loving him madly.
And the kiss between swasan, you beautifully wrote it.
They were lost in each other. But the soldiers voice spoiled the beautiful moment.
But again there was a hope for me.
The Adarsh's entry was unexpected in the picture. He realized the real traitor. But I think there is some hidden motive behind his entry.
Swara was again confused about sanskar's feeling for her. And the soldiers words were painful to swara.
She was heart broken. She was trying to start a new life with sanskar. The life she always dreamed. But the fate again had different plans. At the end moment her dreams were broken into pieces. The story of Sita was really suit for the situation. The epic which beautifully portrayed the pain of a woman who sacrificed her life. It was not her fault. And she was a pativrata. But whole society questioned her.
Swara was also in a similar situation. She was a victim.
But the family never realized her situation. She always loved them. But she was betrayed by her own sister. She tried to kill her. But all blamed swara. She was a characterless girl for the society and family.
Sanskar swara ka maang bharne keliye sindoor box udaya. But swara stopped him.
Really heart touching sequence. While reading my eyes were filled with tears 😭😭
You are amazing writer. In this update you beautifully portrayed all the emotions. 👏
Eagerly waiting for your next update

Dear Sakkiyah 🤗

I'm finally replying, forgive the lateness, I know from our PMs that you understand 😊.

I am so glad you found this update moving despite the ups and downs it brought. It was indeed a total split between parts 1 and 2 to the extremes. Now that they both love each other its bound to be difficult to be controlled so no wonder that moment between them happened in the morning but as you say they got interrupted first and from then on it was a roller coster leading to a hopefully understandable MU. So pleased you found the kiss beautiful 😳. The majority of you feel Adarsh is hiding something 😉. Poor Swara- her dreams got dashed just as soon as she saw them . I feel that the Sita example does sum up the unfairness and hypocrisy of society towards women in such a situation- they have to literally walk through fire but here it will remain to see what this Ram does- does he behave very differently from the legend? 😉 I built up the sindoor sequence as whilst I saw why Sanskaar would try to do what he did, but at the same time- there was no way I wanted them to walk back in like that- almost proving that they had run off together to be together like that. And I really wanted Swara to make a choice based on the right reasons not force. Thank you so much for the kind words on my writing, am humbled 😳. Hope you will enjoy 23!

Love and wishes,

Shruti x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Hey Shruthi🤗🤗
Hope you are feeling better ..Get well soon

Two Lovers cruelly separated by circumstances😭😭😭 Swasan are going to be heart broken💔

And now coming to the chapter not fair yaar, not at all fair .One moment you give us the much awaited kiss😳 and once we start floating in la la land singing my dil goes hmmm..tadaaa ..you drop a bomb😕

OK I am done with complaining ..because I know next part is going to be full of pain and angst which you will bring out beautifully in your words .i am so looking forward for that long miserable night. say Sadist heart 😆but whats a love story without pain and angst ..I am so in for such stories

Gossip mongers have done enough damage and adarsh words were like last nail in the coffin😡😡 and sasnkaar's act though his intentions were right but swara got it totally wrong owing it to situations I thought he filled her maang for a moment but Then I realized she stopped him and I am ok with it..they deserve to get married in much better circumstances

Are we going to get a proper wedding? Too early to ask I guess..

Awesome update 👏👏👏 Loved it like always and hope you get well soon

🤗

Lucky

PS ; Kiss was😳☺️

Dearest Lucky 🤗

Thank you for the comments and asking about my health too, am getting there slowly 😃

There is heartbreak here for sure . I have to totally fess up to being cruel- no denying it- I did build it all up, delivered everyone's demanded kiss and then brought it all crashing back but after great highs there are lows to make way for highs again at some point I guess 😊.

Hmm- you might find yourself surprised by the next part- you will have to read and tell me. But thank you so much for the vote of confidence in saying I'll express it well and that's the spirit- there is beauty in such pain too!! *hi5* from one such sadist to another! I cannot see an overwhelming love story without any pain especially in such a setting.

Gossip mongers - unavoidable in any era! And yes, Adarsh's words were the final straw as Swara didn't just believe the soldiers blindly. I couldn't agree more - I am not saying there is no chance of a forced marriage but not in this way 😉

I cannot say about a proper wedding - sorry but lots more to come so read on!

Thank you so much for loving this one and talk to you on the next one hopefully.

And thanks for loving the kiss too 😳

Love,

Shruti x

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Posted: 9 years ago

#497

Originally posted by: Sree8410
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Will unres as soon as I can.

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Shruti,🤗

I owe you a big huge apology. You were giving me an epic love story and I was treating it as a perfect or rather normal love story. You know where the hero heroine meets, falls in love and unite all happy around.It really dawned on me now that I misunderstood the whole thing. I mean Why set the whole story centuries behind? Why go through this extensive sketching? My final conclusion is that I'm an idiot. What people knew from chapter 1 I realised after reading chapter 22.

And about the PM I send, it was my initial reaction. I now get why there is a need for this new misunderstanding. You are cutting and polishing the rock to turn it into a diamond. Its not going to be one of those happily ever after so soon. They have to go through hell and forth to prove their love story worthy of being called an epic or at least close to an epic.

About Chapter 22. I love both the parts. First for obvious reasons. And second as this starts their test for their love for each other.

Waking up was just sweet. This time Swara woke up first and she was also hugging him. I really love their sleeping arrangement. Since the were in Ehsaas Nagar they had spent every waking and sleeping hour with each other. And I really wanted it to continue, but now its of no use usless they clear the issues.

The kiss ☺️- Thanks you for that one🤗. I did want it in this chapter because unlike Sanskar Swara might not hold her emotions well. I expected her to give a small peck on his cheeks in the morning while he pretends to sleep. But this was way better. They kissed in full consciousness and with their whole heart and soul.

I so wished he had told her what is in his heart after the kiss. That way the confusion will not have arised. But that was not the intend here. He didn't say because its not the right time yet. There are mile to go before they reach that stage for you, am I right? I just hope those miles get covered in the next chapter.

Adarsh and his pathetic army had to march in and spoil their happy day to the worst day in their life. I'm really sad at this.

You know they both have not told each other how much they love the other person and what he/she means to him/her. Just a kiss will not be enough they have to use words here He has shown in his action and so has she but they can easily be misunderstood just like here. He is still not sure whether/if she loves him like he does. She feels he still loves kavita.

I'm a bit sad for the sindoor marriage not happening. A little bit force from him and it would have happened. But its okay, we will get a big fat Indian wedding now. So I'm happy with that thought. Also I don't want crying marriage from them. I want happy marriage with celebrations all around for them.

And sindoor falling down is an apshagun. Sanskar's life in danger? Who knows what is happening in your brain and what you have planned( makes me wish again if I could by some miracle see the rest of the story). But one thing is sure - the events that will follow will be heart-wrenching yet it will bring them closer than before. I'm positive about it.

As for Swara's reputation being ruined, it still happens in India. So can imagine what it must have been back in those days.

I really don't want genie to help them any more now. They both know their own feelings and somewhat of what other person feels like, let them find out the rest of the story themselves. Swara thinks he is showing sympathy in her defense he didn't confess, all his actions throughout he has made sure to tell her how much bad he feels for ruining her life and never even what he feels for her. Then again neither did she. For him he is unsure about her feelings, when she refused to accept the proposal. He should know better than after hearing all that she would react this way. He should have given her some space and then told what he feels for her and then propose marriage. Saying I'll restore you by marrying you will sound like sympathy and for her she can bare anything but not pity or sympathy from him. Both are fools.

"You dare cheapen it by talking like this? I wanted to kiss you Swara! And I refuse to be sorry about it! I want to marry you, I am not being forced by anything! We need to discuss this Swara, there is much I have to say but I need you to listen calmly and give us a chance and..."
@ underlined :This should have been his first words to her. Not the last.
@red I love this outburst.

I'm waiting for 23 to unfold more drama here.

Love

Sree

P.S. You took your day off and used it to write chapter 22 didn't you? Falling sick had this added merit I didn't not know that.😉 How is your health? Are you better or is it getting worst. I'm not sure how I'm. Just that I can sit up is a great relief now. I'm forgetting something that I wanted to let you know. Can't remember now.

Love your description of that beautiful kiss. It was like rain meeting the desert sands.👏

My dearest Sree 🤗

Haha, your opening para made me chuckle 😆. I am not good with (and this is a failing) very simple and cute - I wish I could be but my heart and mind usually gravitate to layers and once you build those in, the angst is an unavoidable part. BUT I don't like pointless angst either so hope here its not that 😆. I don't know if I AM giving you epic but my aim has always been with DK to aspire to epic heights. I am not arrogant enough to say it is but I try endlessly to model it on what I think an epic story should have but without making it so abstract that I myself stop reacting to it. Sorry for rambling about this! Pet subject 😳 And you are not an idiot - mmmwah.

Absolutely spot on about the honing of the story to make the ultimate end what it should be. And no happily ever after too easily to me sort of spoils things for such a story so this is NEVER going to be that. Parts like Susanna's death were meant to heavily highlight that as was the sequence with Devendra and him getting away.

I knew you would love part 1 and the bliss they enjoyed culminated in the sweetest way I could think of 😳. I knew you were one of those so anxious for the kiss so I am glad to read you think I managed that well. And yes, now of course the MU stands between them but at least that foundation is laid of them both know they love (i.e. in their own minds) and they have also had that unforgettable moment between them which I really think will stand for much:) There are miles yet and unfortunately one chapter cannot cover them- the next chapter as you've already read had much more to deal with so this will take its time but hopefully with DK things don't drag so the wait will make sense!

Yes Adarsh's timing was terrible as were the words used by the soldiers and Adarsh himself later- but such is life and they need to find themselves despite that or they shouldn't be together 😉. My logic is rather blunt in that way 😆 Of course they need to tell each other but it was all too much there and then so it didn't happen- all in good time 😉. See I totally would never make Sanskaar use any force to do anything- including putting sindoor on her. In every SwaSan story I have ever written I have endlessly highlighted that he always gives her that choice . I don't mean choices like - eat this or drink this or rest but important choices- e.g. the opiate. So here if he thought it was not her will I feel he would have to honour that 😃 I too really didn't want them married at this moment and then Swara crying and blaming him- I had enough of that crap on the show 😆Hmmm as for portents and all- I personally avoid over common ones like sindoor falls- life in danger type things but you never know- cannot disclose but you will see soon enough if those fears are groundless or not 😉

And totally agree about the double standards when it comes to women 🤢. As for genies helping, there is help of sorts but I myself subscribe to the theory of self help and so far I feel that they have had interventions now and then but the real leaps they have made themselves, with of course circumstances playing a part. The mix of fate and free will which I personally find very fascinating is much more the way I like to go. Absolutely the point with the proposal- Swara could not help but MU that given what has happened so far and the same applies for him. But we are not rational when we are so involved with something.

Will wait to talk about 23 😳.

Haha, guilty as charged on the PS! and mmmwah for the appreciation for the kiss scene 😳

Loads of love,

Shru xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: geetkumar
'Love' Such a wonderful feeling!!! It fills you with so much of strength but it also makes you weak. It makes you feel as if you are at the top of the world but it also makes you insecure and think illogical. So Swara and Sanskar both misunderstood each other. She thought he is pitying her and he thought she is rejecting him. They still have a long way to go.
The day started so blissfully but ended with such despair.
"Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation" (by Kahil Gibran) Some how I felt that this line fits here. I had a feeling that we are slowly and steadily heading towards separation. In a way I was relieved that Sanskar did not or I should rather say could not fill Swara's maang with sindoor. I did not want such a marriage for them ( though it is very dramatic ). In fact I want, no not want but wish a clear understanding between these two, that how much they love each other without an iota of doubt in anyone's mind or heart when they get married. They should be so in sink with each other's psych that they could read each other's thought without uttering a word; and also with the blessing of the entire family. A joyous event not a compromising one.
Overhearing those soldiers and Adarsh was a reality check for Swara, wasn't it? Poor Swara !!! And poor Sanskar!!!
Aur waise bhi, hume agar koi cheez aasaani se mill jaaye to hume uski kadar nahi hoti,lekin agar hume use kismat se, samaaj se aur pariwar se lad jhagad kar hasil ho to hum use zindagi bhar sambhaal kar rakhten hain, yaa shayad zindagi ke baad bhi...
So yes!!!! Let them fight for each other. Bring it on Shruti . I am absolutely loving this!!!!!!!!!!
Would like to end with this -
Yeh Ishq Nahi Aasan
Poet:
By: Fazee, Karachi

Masoom Mohabbat Ka Bus Itna Fasana Hai
Kaghaz Ki Haveli Hai Barish Ka Zamana Hai

Kya Shart-E-Mohabbat Hai Kya Shart-E-Zamana Hai
Awaaz Bhi Zakhmi Hai Aur Geet Bhi Gaana Hai

Us Per Utarnay Ki Umeed Bohat Kum Hai
Kashti Bhi Puraani Hai Aur Toofan Ko Bhi Aana Hai

Samjhay Ya Na Samjhay Wo Andaaz Mohabbat Ka
Aik Shakhs Ko Aankho Se Aik Shair Sunana Hai

Yeh Ishq Nahi Aasan Bus Itna Samajh Lijiye
Aik Aag Ka Darya Hai Aur Doob Kar Jana Hai

(*Note- Shruti, nothing is more important than your health. So please take rest and get well. We all will understand if you do not reply to each and every comment. We all love you no matter what. And we all can wait for the next update however long it takes. So no need to compromise your health. Take your time)
Love ❤️
Geet

Dearest Geet 🤗

I am so sorry for my late rely to your lovely comments, there were various that I needed to put some thought into my responses, hence the delay combined with current pressures.

👏 for your opening para- that is indeed the crux of it and what I have been saying in different guises amongst other comments. When you are so madly in love, some of what you could see and do as an impartial observer goes out of the window. I have always loved that Gibran quote and vaguely toyed with using it too but as this separation is going a slightly different way than the traditional, I didn't:) You might see when you read 23 that the separation that everyone is dreading is rather different from what you would first expect.

I am so pleased you are on the same page as me re the stopped sindoor marriage. I just didn't want that here- same sort of reasons as you although I cannot promise that a marriage with full understanding is on the cards asap 😉

Reality check is absolutely the right term, she was going to have this and there will probably be more to come. As much as we may hate it the reality of their situation is that this was bound to happen. Massive *hi5* on the next sentiment. Exactly my logic!!! I see absolutely no point in them being handed their love and a marriage on a plate! You are totally right- easy come is never appreciated. I sort of feel in the show Swara took way longer to appreciate Sanskaar as he loved her and she knew it and that was it. If they both cannot and do not want to battle everything that the world throws at them- then they don't deserve to be together as a legendary couple. I said to someone else too that I am rather blunt in that respect on my idea of epic love is and if it fails at these hurdles- it was either not epic or not meant to be.

I am a huge fan of Urdu and poetry too (have lots of my ramblings which are not often shared 😆) but I have always loved that poem and those immortal lines of

Yeh Ishq Nahi Aasan Bus Itna Samajh Lijiye
Aik Aag Ka Darya Hai Aur Doob Kar Jana Hai ⭐️

I am so touched by your kind words about my health and especially saying you understand a lack of individual replies. I feel terribly guilty if I cannot reply but at the moment it is proving to be an incredible struggle despite the enjoyment I truly get from replying. Thank you so much Geet!

Will look forward to your views on 23 whenever you get time.

Love,

Shruti x

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie
Well hello!! Forgot to introduce myself.. :P
I'm Geetha.. Geethu and sweetie are my nick names.. You can call me by any name you are comfortable with..😊

Oh! I love tootie frooties.. Your username is first thing that caught my attention and hooked me up.Then your candies made their way..Every single candy is my favourite. :)

Well the pleasure is all mine to meet such an awesome writer like you..Shruti,the way you write every single detail is out of the world and i admire you a lot for that.👍🏼

Coming back to DK, Sanskar may be disappointed by the way Swara said "NO" to him for the marriage but he is perceptive,isn't he? He will figure out errors in this equation and get back to her..
Besides that he also have responsibilities to complete being a General.

Hope everything turns to light from dark soon..😃

Thanks,
Geetha.

Hey there Geetha 🤗

So nice to "meet" you on this and 😆😆 re footie frooties. People often joked about that since my uni days due to my name being Shruti and my niece when she was a baby used to call me Aunty Tootie 😃. You are making me 😳😳 with your words and I am so thankful! I like how you want to keep trust in our amazing Prince 😉- perfect attitude to have 😉. Hope you will like how things unfold next!

Love again,

Shruti x

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Posted: 9 years ago

#500

Originally posted by: mayasingh
Hi,
Loved chapter 22...
I have a feeling somehow Adarsh was involved ...
Because in absence of Sanskar, benefit would have gone to adarsh..
He is sending Laksh away so that Sanskar does not get to know that Laksh informed Adarsh about Sanskar and Kavita marriage plans...
But still not sure... As Sanskar was supposed to be dead by the poisioned drink...
Somehow Kavita mom was also involved...

It was really sad when both are not realizing their love for each other...
I hope so before reaching mahes... Both of them realize they cannot live without each other..
I have a feeling Sanskar will decline to become the crown prince so that Swara is ready to be his wife...
Just guessing... Waiting for chapter 23 eagerly

Hey Maya 🤗

Thank you so much! So glad you love 22. There is a huge contingent who suspect Adarsh so you are not alone . Let's see how the story progresses. You are of course right in that there is a perfect motive for it to be Adarsh. As for what happened with Kavita and her mom being involved - I promise to unfold that mystery before the end 😃. Hmm, not sure if you have read 23 but the clearing of the MU between them might take slightly longer than a chapter but hope you won't have cause for complaint despite that 😃. Hope 23 doesn't disappoint.

Love,

Shruti x

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