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Originally posted by: NitaReid
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UnresHi Shruti .Chapter 22 was awesome as always. Only you can make me fly in the part 1 and cry in the part 2. I was literally so happy at the kiss and when Sanskar was stopped from speaking his heartout and i heard about Adarsh entry, i thought a battle might happen . Instead i got SwaSan suffering even when Sanskar traitor tag is gone.I loved the part 1 and i totally understand the need for Part 2. But my heart cant take them Suffering. Hope it resolves soon and i get my Happy SwaSan back.Still i dont trust Adarsh, is he the Villian. I am pretty sure the explanation he gave made sense but it looked far too easy for Sanskar that a miracle like it happened easily ,plus Lucky missing adds to the mystery.I totally loved the opening scene where Sanskar finally saw that may be Swara likes him too but was too scared to confirm it as it might make Swara find out about him too. Then Swara finally taking courage to wear the dress he brought and the bangles he carefully made her wear yesterday and went to meet him, i so loved that scene when she says she dont want to go, Giving Sanskar the final confirmation about the miracle right in front of him and the kiss was so beautiful .I am going to assume that where this chapter ended till i get the next one. I like living in denial.I already told about my take on Adarsh, and now about SwaSan i totally get Swara fear especially after hearing what others might think about her. Sanskar rushing to her after knowing the she witnessed his conversation with Adarsh and the way he shut up Adarsh when he spoke against Swara was awesome. His marriage proposal was out of the blue but i get why he decided to go through with it since after the kiss he knew she likes him too and marriage seems like a good idea and i was hoping it would go through but i get why it didnt happen either. So now at the end we have two heart broken people whom i am crazy about .I would have filled this page with Do update soon as i want to get over this sad phase in SwaSan life and get to the next part. But i knew you are still Sick , so i pretend the FF is on hiatus just like my English shows till you recover . Take Rest shruti .Dont overwork yourself. Hope to see you better soon.Love,Nita
Dear Nita 🤗
Thanks so much for liking 22 angst and all! Haha- I like how you said I made you soar and crash all in one chapter- as a writer of course that is a huge compliment so I receive it gratefully 😳. I wanted everyone to think of another fight but intended that it would be a slightly different form of meeting:)
Yes it was hard- writing it was rather painful as you can imagine. But yet I felt that this has to be dealt with between them- it does in one way or the other stand and they to pass this test as per cruel me 😆
Ah yes it seems literally almost everyone is suspecting Adarsh. Future chapters will shed more light I guess. I wanted the start to be blissful and continuing their lovely end of the night before. I also wanted them both to have some form of declaration before trouble hit and also to have the underlying sense they both did that there is something tangible and powerful between them. I love you saying you'll live in denial- that is often the best survival tactic 😆
I wanted to show that Sanskaar will not hear ill of Swara be it well meant or otherwise. As for the sindoor- I wanted to stop it as I really don't want an immediate forced marriage for them. I loved the sindoor scene in the show- one of my faves but I personally dislike this whole forced to do this to please others and whilst this yet might come to that I didn't want them to get married in mad reaction like that and then have Swara blame him. Thanks so much for understanding about updates, this is really taking it out to me, am still not well. I meant to start on 23 today but had to work too so it now looks unlikely
Lots of love,
Shruti xoxo
