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Shruti, I'd almost reached the end of the post when the battery went away and now I have to rewrite it all again. Oh God!! So as I'd mentioned in my earlier post. I was in the city bus while reading this chapter and I tell you I'd gone mad! I mean this was a totally blood boiling chapter and in the fury I was giving such expressions that the passengers thought I'm a lunatic who has come from a mental asylum and is now giving peculiarly hilarious expressions to her phone! Seriously
Swara was being a true idiot I tell ya! She realised the threat this Devendra was posing to her virtue and dignity, yet for Sanskaar she was ready to do anything, Oh God! When she was yelling in pain I swear I could have crucio this Devendra till death!!
Devendra- This bas***d, this wretch this filthy cheap animal, he laid his hands on Swara!! You bl***y swine!! He doesn't have a heart or what?? Filthy stuff that he's made up off and when he touched played with his horrible words, I was gritting my teeth and could have flexed my muscles to punch my phone if not in a city bus, whose passengers were considering me to be a gone case!! And what the hell was Bagri doing there? That Moron, that wretch, who whipped my Sanskaar day and night!! Ugh... this was truly a phone todu chapter😡😡. When this shitty man, touched Swara's neck on the pretext of cleaning the alcohol and then yanked and bit her (writing it disgusts me. Hats off Shruti for writing this piece! It ain't easy...seriously I applaud you) I wanted to howl with rage, but in a city bus?? But I swear I jumped and then 2-3 literally started giggling at me. Ruddy kids!! Anyways, But this, I could have crucioed this man to death if given the chance!
Sanskaar! Aww..my poor Prince. How helpless he must be feeling when he is seeing Swara mistreated and almost molested in front of his own eyes and he can't do anything. The fact that this cheap man, laid his dirty hands on his lady love and he couldn't do anything! Oh my poor Sanskaar! But you don't worry Prince! She's only yours to lay hands upon.
The way she fought like a brave queen and then finally opened Sanskaar's ropes, it was as if somebody poured chilled ice water on my already burning hot heart! I was sure now, Sanskaar gonna payback for everything!! And that brutal animal touched his Swara! Sanskaar is NOT GONNA LEAVE HIM. Shru, please just for me, punish this brute so severely that he forgets to even think about touching a lady!!
When Sanskaar kissed her forehead, I seriously felt the warmth spreading inside me. (Not that to ignite the fire again course) It felt so beautiful and so full of concern just like in the show!! Oh God. SwaSan can even make a forehead kiss so intimate and beautiful<3
Just loved the update and waiting for the next one!
Love ya loads
Sakshi
P.S.- Shruti, don't feel bad about the harsh words that I used. They were not for your piece of work but for that Devendra okayy. In fact, the fact that I hate him to this extent itself is a compliment for you okay?? And here hate is an understatement or cold modesty in the words of Julius Caesar. I seriously, tell you, writing such a piece is very tough and requires lotsa talent. So please don't take my harsh words personally. It was just for the character and standing ovation to you for writing this chapter!
Unresing-
Shruti, I'd almost reached the end of the post when the battery went away and now I have to rewrite it all again. Oh God!! So as I'd mentioned in my earlier post. I was in the city bus while reading this chapter and I tell you I'd gone mad! I mean this was a totally blood boiling chapter and in the fury I was giving such expressions that the passengers thought I'm a lunatic who has come from a mental asylum and is now giving peculiarly hilarious expressions to her phone! Seriously
Swara was being a true idiot I tell ya! She realised the threat this Devendra was posing to her virtue and dignity, yet for Sanskaar she was ready to do anything, Oh God! When she was yelling in pain I swear I could have crucio this Devendra till death!!
Devendra- This bas***d, this wretch this filthy cheap animal, he laid his hands on Swara!! You bl***y swine!! He doesn't have a heart or what?? Filthy stuff that he's made up off and when he touched played with his horrible words, I was gritting my teeth and could have flexed my muscles to punch my phone if not in a city bus, whose passengers were considering me to be a gone case!! And what the hell was Bagri doing there? That Moron, that wretch, who whipped my Sanskaar day and night!! Ugh... this was truly a phone todu chapter😡😡. When this shitty man, touched Swara's neck on the pretext of cleaning the alcohol and then yanked and bit her (writing it disgusts me. Hats off Shruti for writing this piece! It ain't easy...seriously I applaud you) I wanted to howl with rage, but in a city bus?? But I swear I jumped and then 2-3 literally started giggling at me. Ruddy kids!! Anyways, But this, I could have crucioed this man to death if given the chance!
Sanskaar! Aww..my poor Prince. How helpless he must be feeling when he is seeing Swara mistreated and almost molested in front of his own eyes and he can't do anything. The fact that this cheap man, laid his dirty hands on his lady love and he couldn't do anything! Oh my poor Sanskaar! But you don't worry Prince! She's only yours to lay hands upon.
The way she fought like a brave queen and then finally opened Sanskaar's ropes, it was as if somebody poured chilled ice water on my already burning hot heart! I was sure now, Sanskaar gonna payback for everything!! And that brutal animal touched his Swara! Sanskaar is NOT GONNA LEAVE HIM. Shru, please just for me, punish this brute so severely that he forgets to even think about touching a lady!!
When Sanskaar kissed her forehead, I seriously felt the warmth spreading inside me. (Not that to ignite the fire again course) It felt so beautiful and so full of concern just like in the show!! Oh God. SwaSan can even make a forehead kiss so intimate and beautiful<3
Just loved the update and waiting for the next one!
Love ya loads
Sakshi
P.S.- Shruti, don't feel bad about the harsh words that I used. They were not for your piece of work but for that Devendra okayy. In fact, the fact that I hate him to this extent itself is a compliment for you okay?? And here hate is an understatement or cold modesty in the words of Julius Caesar. I seriously, tell you, writing such a piece is very tough and requires lotsa talent. So please don't take my harsh words personally. It was just for the character and standing ovation to you for writing this chapter!
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