Poison & Wine - A (Lakshya / Ragini) one-shot

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StarshineHues

@StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: rbb1
exactly

Thank you so much my lovelies !!

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I'm glad it made some sense. Being a weird idea and all. 😆😆

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StarshineHues

@StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Shinning_AD
This was so good 👏 I felt like reading more 😉
The way you expressed their feelings and thoughts were wonderful😃

I liked your title ... Wine and Poision it's Nice😳

Thank you so much for reading Anjale !! 🤗🤗

And you felt like reading more ?

So do I. Ahem ahem. Its my turn to read missy.

So when will you oblige us next ? 😆😆

And I'm so glad you liked the way I expressed their thoughts and feelings...I thought it was a bit disjointed, but that's how my thinking process works...short and weird sentences. So I decided to write it that way. 😆😆

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Anamta

@Senoritaamor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Isn't it great that we blackmailed you adi😆. Or else we wouldn't have read something so amazing👏

It was super nice. I loved it so much. Big hug🤗

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Lovedd the os❤️

Beautifully penned👏

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@rbb1

Elite

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: StarshineHues

Awww !! Thank you for reading it Ray !!

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Aditi it was AWESOME 👏 I loved it never ever doubt yourself

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@rbb1

Elite

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: StarshineHues

Awww thank you so much Ray !!

You really liked it ?

I'm not sure if I like it myself.

But thank you so so so much !!

Love you !!

🤗🤗

I loved it you have no idea and I'm glad we forced you to write it, now I cannot wait to read more stories from you

I like the title as well 😃

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Dear Aditi,

That was simply brilliant - the title was what caught my attention - and I simply started reading - the way you matched Ragini and Lakshya's emotions to the lyrics of the song was beautiful - such a realisation for both of them.

I have not yet heard the song - will go back to do so now. Please continue to write.

Nyna

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Ardhanarishwara

@Ardhanarishwara

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Just one word.."BEAUTIFUL"..
can't believe its ur first story...u did write like a pro..
How old are u?..u have just wasted this talent of urs all these years..dnt repeat this mistake..do write more

Edited by jyothirgamaya - 9 years ago