Poison & Wine - A (Lakshya / Ragini) one-shot

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StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Aww don't thank me sweetie. Your story is wonderful. I loved every bit of it.
Update soon😳

Thank you so so much once again my Senorita !! 🤗🤗

I'll try my best to come up with something new !!

😃😃

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Anamta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: StarshineHues

Thank you so so much once again my Senorita !! 🤗🤗

I'll try my best to come up with something new !!

😃😃

I am waaitingg

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Shinning_AD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

You should Definitely write more 😉

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Vianna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Aditi,
Fabulous work! The song had the lyrics but you have given them a whole new meaning with this OS. It is so captivating.! The emotions swirling around RagYa and the brilliance with which you have directed them in this OS is worthy of a bow! 👏 I don't think anyone could have portrayed what sort of RagYa everyone was waiting for better than this. It shows the complete hatred Lakshya has for Ragini, how she knows it and still hopes & wishes that the slight moments of laughter between them would wipe out his hatred and loathing for her and her actions, how Lakshya has gotten used to her presence, the way (despite his hatred) he has fallen for her, how she has stolen everything from him including his heart, how he is in her every breath and she in his every thought.
This OS is a beautifully written piece of writing. :)

Keep writing! :)

-V

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clarity

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Aditi, what wizardry is this?

I come back to the forum and you guys almost kill me with your writing.

THis is GOLD!

What the hell.

I'm swooning.

The writing in this was brilliant. So evocative.

⭐️

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: StarshineHues

Thank you so much for your comments Nyna, I'm so glad you liked it !!

And I'm glad the realization came out okay, I was the most worried about that.

And let me know your views once you've heard the song, its a personal favourite.

And thank you for reading and commenting once more !!

😳😳

Dear Aditi,

I heard the song (actually I have downloaded it and saved it to my playlist).

You know that some songs can give you goosebumps - not the horror type - no the goosebumps you get when you hear something which is tragic and surprisingly the tragedy is what renders it beautiful. That is what this song is - tragically beautiful and slightly haunting as if it lingers in your mind long after you have heard it - and your writing makes it even more memorable.

So I should be thanking you - for giving us such a beautiful OS.

Nyna

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StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

I am waaitingg

Awww !! 🤗🤗

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StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Shinning_AD
You should Definitely write more 😉

Of course Anjale. Very smart. 🤗

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StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: bwvianna
Aditi,
Fabulous work! The song had the lyrics but you have given them a whole new meaning with this OS. It is so captivating.! The emotions swirling around RagYa and the brilliance with which you have directed them in this OS is worthy of a bow! 👏 I don't think anyone could have portrayed what sort of RagYa everyone was waiting for better than this. It shows the complete hatred Lakshya has for Ragini, how she knows it and still hopes & wishes that the slight moments of laughter between them would wipe out his hatred and loathing for her and her actions, how Lakshya has gotten used to her presence, the way (despite his hatred) he has fallen for her, how she has stolen everything from him including his heart, how he is in her every breath and she in his every thought.
This OS is a beautifully written piece of writing. :)

Keep writing! :)

-V

Thank you so much for reading it, and for your amazingly sweet comment, V !! 😃😃

This is how we see RagYa, but unfortunately the CVs don't I guess. Sigh.

Honestly, these are literally just my feelings for them, and you're being far too complimentary, but thank you so so so much for it !! 😃😃

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StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: clarity
Aditi, what wizardry is this?

I come back to the forum and you guys almost kill me with your writing.

THis is GOLD!

What the hell.

I'm swooning.

The writing in this was brilliant. So evocative.

⭐️

OMG finally I get to speak to you Appu !! 😆😆

I've wanted to talk to you for ages, but you've not been around recently, and I'm so glad at least this way I get to meet you !! 😆😆

Thank you so so much for reading and commenting, it means the world to me !! 😃😃