Poison & Wine - A (Lakshya / Ragini) one-shot

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: ck1234
Nice one...

Thank you so much !! 😃😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: StarshineHues

Awww !! 🤗🤗

My Senoritaaa !! 😆😆

I'm so so so glad you liked it...and yes you guys are the best !! 😆😆

Whether it was nice or not IDK. 😆😆

Big hugs right back !! 🤗🤗

Aww don't thank me sweetie. Your story is wonderful. I loved every bit of it.

Update soon😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Aditi,
That was simply brilliant - the title was what caught my attention - and I simply started reading - the way you matched Ragini and Lakshya's emotions to the lyrics of the song was beautiful - such a realisation for both of them.

I have not yet heard the song - will go back to do so now. Please continue to write.

Nyna

Thank you so much for your comments Nyna, I'm so glad you liked it !!

And I'm glad the realization came out okay, I was the most worried about that.

And let me know your views once you've heard the song, its a personal favourite.

And thank you for reading and commenting once more !!

😳😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
Beautiful...heart touching...poetic...loved it...

Thank you so much Ana !! 🤗🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: jyothirgamaya
Just one word.."BEAUTIFUL"..
can't believe its ur first story...u did write like a pro..
How old are u?..u have just wasted this talent of urs all these years..dnt repeat this mistake..do write more

Thank you so so much !! You're so sweet !! 😃😃

I'm 27 years old, and yes this is my first story, a bit late in the day I know. 😆😆

And thank you so much for your encouragement, I'll def try and come up with something else !! 😃😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Aayushi15
Aww this is so beautiful. ..

Thank you so much Aayushi !! 😃😃

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StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: soapbubble
Oh how poignantly romantic!
And so well written!! Beautiful! 👏👏

That line from this song I don't have a choice but I still choose you

I might just steal it 😳😛

Awww !! I'm so glad you liked it Bubble !! Thank you for reading !! 😃😃

And yeah...that line is a personal favourite, along with "I don't love you, but I always will." 😳😳

And you're most welcome to steal anything you like !! 😆😆

Do listen to the song once and let me know how you like it.

😳😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: mansinarang95
omg aditi that beyond beautiful..👏😳
speechless.😉.
that laksh confession hayee..
brilliant u are..👏👏

Awww !! 🤗🤗

Thank you so much Mansi !! 😃😃

I'm so so glad you liked it !! And thank you for your sweet comments !! 🤗🤗

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StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove
Di!!! Wow

Its just so beautiful...
How u penned down the emotions..was superb...

My fav was how u compared the yes's n no's...
They said something n meant something...

Plz m waiting for more...either make it a ff or bring out a new ..

Bas aap jaldi kijiye...I can't wait..

Awww !! My sweet, sweet Neha !! 🤗🤗

Thank you so much for reading it and liking it...I only write this because of you guys !! 🤗🤗

And I'll try my best to come up with something...till then missy you'd better update your FF too !!

Love you !!

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