Poison & Wine - A (Lakshya / Ragini) one-shot

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StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Aditi,

I heard the song (actually I have downloaded it and saved it to my playlist).

You know that some songs can give you goosebumps - not the horror type - no the goosebumps you get when you hear something which is tragic and surprisingly the tragedy is what renders it beautiful. That is what this song is - tragically beautiful and slightly haunting as if it lingers in your mind long after you have heard it - and your writing makes it even more memorable.

So I should be thanking you - for giving us such a beautiful OS.

Nyna

Thank YOU Nyna, for your lovely comments !! Honestly, I'm so happy that you liked the story and the song, it means a lot to me.

And yay !! You have the song on your playlist now...I know what you mean about it being haunting, you'll end up listening to it again and again !!

Once again, thank you so so much !! 😃😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

I don't belong to the forum neither am I a watcher of the show.
What I am though, is some one know knows well written work when she sees it.
The song is delightfully complementary to your words.
I'd like to read more from you!

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isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Hey aditi

It was really so nice to read it...

...loved it so so much

..write more

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_Sapphire_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Great Os 👏

Love the way you have explored both lucky and Ragini's emotions.

Ragini is my favourite character in this series so thanks for making this O

Not sure if Lakysh deserve her after what he done. They make a great pairing in terms of looks but their characters have become damaged and being togther will remind them of the damage they cause each other so there is still a long way to go to repair if the makers are still keen on making this pairing

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StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: AshReeSha
I don't belong to the forum neither am I a watcher of the show.
What I am though, is some one know knows well written work when she sees it.
The song is delightfully complementary to your words.
I'd like to read more from you!

OMG...that's such an amazing compliment !! Thank you so so much for your kind words...will def try and write more !! 😃😃

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StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: ishanita
Hey aditi
It was really so nice to read it...
...loved it so so much
..write more

Thank you so much Ishanita !! I'm so glad you liked it !! 😃😃

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StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: CharmGal
Great Os 👏

Love the way you have explored both lucky and Ragini's emotions.

Ragini is my favourite character in this series so thanks for making this O

Not sure if Lakysh deserve her after what he done. They make a great pairing in terms of looks but their characters have become damaged and being togther will remind them of the damage they cause each other so there is still a long way to go to repair if the makers are still keen on making this pairing

Thank you so much !! 😃😃 Yeah I love Ragini too...and I agree with you about the damage inflicted by the CVs to RagLak's characters and their story. But kya karein, damaged r broken, their is something so compelling about them, that I can't stop hoping for them...sigh. Thanks so much once again !! 😃😃

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-Claptrap-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Aditi 🤗

I was just going through the index and I got this and I fastly started reading the OS 😃

First I couldn't understand.. 😕 This happened with me in your "Loving him was Red" 😆 That's my favorite OS 😳

Then I read it again and this is beautiful.. I have no words to say the way you expressed Ragini's feelings her hopes and Laksh's feelings, his heart which fell for her unknowingly 😳

Loved every part.. And the way you write your OS is lovely.. Everytime I read this it gives me more feelings makes me like "dil maange more"

More the times I read your works more I gets the RagLak feel 😳

Keep writing more... Exams ke baad I'll expect more like this from you . 😃