DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF- T2- DELETED- AN- PG 1 - Page 68

Originally posted by: Shikha022

Last part was shocking !!! Means shocking in fantastic n superb way !! What a twist u bought !!

Swara did she really sd that.. But I believe she is just playing..

Well at least I hope.. N which is BTW a very smart move.!!

But unpredictable as well..

Means I wasn't accepting:

"Hi prince.. M princess swara n kinda love him !! So if u want to hurt him hurt me n he will tell u all the secret !!"

But something like what she sd that he has kidnapped me was jaw dropping !!

Poor sanskar.. He must be feeling heart broken.. But wait he he is sanskar so I guess he might have understood her game !!

But whatever from here the story begins for me !!

I always wonder when I Rd ur story how can laksh I mean no offense !! But how. Can he be so smart.. That he can be the traitor !!

N this new prince !! What a character.. Entered with a bang !!

M so curiously waiting for ur next update/thread !!

Tc

Originally posted by: lucky.m

wow ..shruthi ..what a twist 👏..👏

Swara is playing along because she knows using her that devendar would force sanskaar to blurt out the secret of key and we know how sanskaar is when it comes to swara

smart move but I just hope sanskaar gets her point though initially he may be heart broken

so we have real culprit now ...Laksh framing up such plan🤣 not possible , sanskaar gave him more credit than he deserves😆😆

Oh I loved when sanskaar said she is mine ..dil khush hogaya😳

waiting for next part , cant wait to see how this game of swara plays out

👏👏👏

Lucky

Originally posted by: Sanya17

I always had a feeling that laksh is not the traitor it needs brain😉 poor laksh ji dont have it😆 the real traitor is definitely smone intelligent but expctd smone from maheshwari family not the prince of other country that was unexpctd but a great twist 👏 so I guess its pawan who works for this prince 😕😭 hp i am wrong it better be sushena BT its better that real traitor is not any maheshwari though definitely someone from the family has helped this new prince I cnt help bt agree with this dvendra dat laksh is incapable of doing smthing of this calibre

Swara she is intelligent it is the best option she had otherwise that leach had bad intention n sanskar will had to tell the secret of key BT if this leach prince thinks swara is on his side then she will be able to do smithing to bring them out from this mess I hope sanskar understands what she is trying to do or else he will be heartbroken HP he figure out this soon he may get sad BT I think he has gt to knw swara that much to undrstnd her real intention n what she is trying to do swara may fool devendra BT even if she is able to fool him that is not gonna last long that's the thing making me highly worried this devendra is dangerous and if the friend whom he was talking about turns out pawan then this devendra and pawan will indeed be a deadly combination as per the little we gt to knw about pawan I feel he as enemy is nt gonna be very easy to handle what we gt to knw about him he is more intelligent than devendra this devendra may have brain BT he is too egoistic to accept that others can be intelligent too that will be a thing which swasan can use against him bt if pawan is with him its gonna be really hard that's one of the reason I don't want pawan to be negative it better be sushena bt I feel the direction this story is going it WD turnout pawan aftrfall every perfect hero needs a perfect villain

Hope u will tone down sanskars tortures he has tolerated so much tortures he is really strong that's why he has been able to take all these but i dnt think my sanu shipper heart will be able to take anymore😭

The way this part ended how will we be able waaaiiittt😕 update soon

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome update

I think swara was acting in the end.

looking forward to read more.

Originally posted by: foresight

this was an interesting part...and totally logical. made so much sense. though i am sure there is some insider from Sanskar's camp with Devendra, besides kavita and kaveri. who...i am sure you will reveal. right now sushena (he could be alive for all i know) and adarsh on that list of suspects...pawan just based on devendra's dialogues i can think to exclude. after all he thinks he is going to kill sanskar...no need for him to lie now. though then the question is who saw swasan from the tower the night they left...a friend or a foe. if it is a foe...i feel it has to be adarsh...and if a friend it can only be ram who didnt want to raise alarm over their son's escape and weren't too bothered about the girl that would be bound to laksh...feeling they could deal with it later. i don't think AP would have let that happen despite sanskar being her soul son, she won't sacrifice laksh for him.

loved the way you portrayed sanskar's protective instincts...they way he says she is mine. and swara feeling extremely uncomfortable with the man. i am sure when sanskar was tied up, he would not have been bothered about himself...only about swara and about his people. if his death ensured their safety he would have been happy about it. but right now when swara is in danger...he cannot stand by and not feel the need to act.

devendra knows laksh well..he is impulsive and not someone who really thinks or is skilled...but then he seems to have trained with all of them...not unlike what you would expect in those times.

so swara comes up with a plan...i don't know if devendra will fall for it...he might pretend to in the beginning...i hope that pretending can still give sanskar enough time to get them out of there to the safety of his troops temporarily.

eagerly waiting for the next part. loving your story a lot.

Originally posted by: bones123

*Updated*

As I read the first paragraph and the description of his appearance, I was still mulling..friend or foe...maybe friend pretending to be foe...and towards the end of the chapter I was like eeeyuk foe foe foe foe !!!

His voice made me giggle, shriller when agitated 😆

So basically Sanskaar's actions to save that poor man landed him in a toughie !! Sigh, the burdens of being a saviour ! I guess seeing Veer, gave DSR an inkling of Sanskaar's identity ! Hate that the trio are in such a fix...and even worse that Sanskaar is against so many ! These bleddy gaaonwale are also of no help... ! As always his thoughts rest only with Swara's safety. Loved how his protective streak flared in that conversation regarding who Swara will ride with.

Despite Swara's dodge with Maithili and (vik)RAM, DSR already identified (atleast Sanskaar) them. He definitely seems intelligent although utterly vile and lecherous. Sanskaar's ire is palpable. Ugh, what's with this royal landscape and there not being any worthy adversaries to contend with. It's like bechara Sanskaar has taken that burden for all four kingdoms !

So he's got Sanskaar's weapons, the map, the horse and the girl L Not good news at all. I can't tell you how much I look forward to Sanskaar wiping the floor with DSR and especially obliterating that smug expression off his face !! All these princes were clearly bested by Sanskaar in the past and are still carrying that grudge !! The sadistic pleasure he derives in showing Sanskaar his helplessness is making me cringe !

Lakshya not the traitor...well I didn't expect him to be...like I said, don't credit him with too much intelligence 😆...but didn't expect to be an entirely new clan (i thought the traitor might have been Adarsh in cahoots with someone else), the whole of which is out to get the other kingdoms. So the plan is to torture Sanskaar and revel in making him suffer. Beta, you are better off trying to finish him off, because obviously you don't know Sanskaar and the fact that he'll use exactly that time to annihilate you ! Na key milega, na supply treasures, na kuch !! He best pray that he get an easy death, because Sanskaar is going to making him pay hell for all past crimes as well as for Swara !! I am completely hopefully J...yes S will go through some pain, but that will only make him stronger and better. I'm not sure if Sanskaar is giving him the upper hand here in terms of gleaning more information, or if his tiredness and exhaustion is making him not see the big picture, but have full faith in his return to awesomeness !

Who is this old friend, tsk..really Sanskaar was just surrounded by the worst people !! Seriously hope it is not PKJ *please no..no...no...I'll go into denial* But given DSR used an expletive (whether he meant it literally...which would be an interesting angle) to address PKJ...I'm guessing it's not him *heart still holding out*

Applause for Swara's plan...I hope it throws him off if only slightly. While I do think Devendra is very shrewd, he might just do stupidity if bewitched by Swara *though that might be more DDD's strengths !!*. Nevertheless good try Swara (you can see Sanskaar almost hit his head with his palm, but for now he can only despair)...but who knows maybe she holds out until the merry men come *okay where are theyyy ??*

Loved the update Shru...some answers...more questions...more suspense :) Keep up the brilliance ! Will wait for the next part eagerly ! mmmwwaaah *still continuing with Veer style*

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res

Unres

Perilous Revelations indeed. So the traitor is Devendra Singh Rathore! And this revelation is quite stunning to Sanskaar because he also comes to know that Lakshya was never involved in the 'treachery', which truly disrupts his best laid plans.

But then Devendra is not acting alone, cannot be- for when Sanskaar was 'found', the fourth map, the key code and the Maheshwari heirloom sword were missing. And when Sanskaar escapes with Swara, he only had the Maheshwari portion of the map - which is what Devendra retrieves from Sanskaar's belongings.

But he believes that Sanskaar is in possession of the key code??? Further, he is confident of the Gadodia portion, which is still, presumably, in the safe keeping of the Maheswaris.

And Devendra's reference to "as an old friend of yours, who will be delighted to see you again and he will use his powers of persuasion," is it Surendra Bagri (purely guessing).

The ending - Swara steps up - getting in her word before Sanskaar can speak one. She is surely following her guts and attempting to buy time but does she have the gumption to carry it out to its conclusion?

Sanskaar shutting his eyes in despair - no, not because he believes Swara's words, I think it is because he is aware that she is trying to buy time and is actually worried about the consequences such an act would lead to (more so for her especially if he is unable to assist her).

I am tired - your revelations have actually raised so many questions, my mind is in a whirl! I am going to wait for the next chapter, as patiently as I can.😉

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Guys, despite best efforts and sitting flat for more than 3 hours, I haven't been able to finish each and every reply and same story on Thread 3 . Nita, Talia and Geet- much love for your kind comments, I will respond to you guys tomorrow, hope that is ok. I must crash now as I barely slept all night yesterday. Sorry!

Lots of love xoxo

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Shuru baby muahhh...🤗

Chapter 16 is par excellence...👏

I was waiting for something like swasan close escape from riders coming towards them...but what a nail bitting twist...my heart was racing like a steam engine...my one hand on my mouth...trying to calm my nerves...what an amazing chapter...👏⭐️

That leech .🤢.cheapster🤬 Devendra came..ahhh...n he recognized sansku... n started acting ...ahhh i hate him aready...he is the traitor... but he cant function alone..???.someone is helping him...???😡

Because of him sanku had to suffer sooo much pain..humilation...tag of traitor... 😭God i hate him already...devendra...that pervert was eyeing swara...making sansku blood boils...mine too...😡😡

And that brute captured sansku n even hit him..😡.well sanku retailiation was terrific...👏😆kiss worthy...love u sansku...(kill him whenever u get a chance...)😉😲

And the magnificent swara...she may appears to be timid n innocent...but has good observation..n brain too...how smartly she handled question of devendra...👏😊

All that make up story about vikram n maitilli...hehehe good one...😃

But that devendra recognised sansku earlier..n was quick to add 2plus 2...n understdnd the girl is gadodia's girl swara...conversation regarding map was soo apt...swara was soo shocked to react...😕😕

The shocking twist was the last part...swara dumbfound devendra by acting all needy for help...😉

Hope sanskaar understand her sudden change...😕

one good thing happened

Because of swara smartness... it has bought sanku some time...hope sanskaar can think of a plan to escape...hope they both help each other to escape or pawan n team may be...😆😃😊

I dont want lakshya n adarsh to be hero...to rescue swasan...😲😕

Dying to read next chapter...🤪

Loads of love muahhh🤗

Talia❤️