DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF- T2- DELETED- AN- PG 1 - Page 65

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Shruuu baby...muahhh😊

What a terrific chapter...👏🥳

Annapo*na ...the ferious tigeress...confronted rana...n what n amazing reply...full women power...

How truly she defended sanskaar...n believed her soul son is not a traitor...some one else is.😡..but who???????😕

Loved whole scene...👏 ram n sujju plzzz fight for ur kid tooo.m😕

But my swasan maniac mind was eager to read second part...😳😃😉

N what a part... swara smile when she woke up..thinking about him...her shock to witness a stranger but quickly realized it was him...those eyes...😃😳

( even i love those eyes) blush...😳

Her confusion , n pain for seperating from him... i was emotional...awww shona you both will be together...soon...haina shuru?????😕🥱

N that to be whipping part of an innocent man..😭.glad sankaar intervined.😊..but felt horrible imagining him being whipped..😭. i hate u brute.. cruel leader...😡🤬

Was soo happy when he taste the wrath of sansku..but baby why one whipp...u got 5... he deserved more...😡 ...loved swara..her pain n desperation...her sobs for sansku...

N that cliffhanger moment...👏who arrived???hope not lakhshya n adarsh...n if the are...they dont recognize sansku n swara...😲👏

Waiting for swara n sanskaar love confession...shona just take one step n sanku will take the remaining one...😳😊😃

Waiting madly for next chapter...when ur updating darling???? Want swasan oriented update..(im greedy for them)...🤗

Lots of love ..kissy n huggy...❤️

Talia

Originally posted by: --Anna--

Shru 🤗

Leaving a small comment for you here before I need to do justice to this FF by posting a longer comment later.

As you are well aware, I am not coming to the forum, I however, could not resist myself after reading Chapter 15. I knew, I had to comment - HERE! 😉

Shru, Thank you so much for giving us a strong Annapurna. You know how much I love Sanskaar and he is the reason I watch the show, but Annapurna is slowly becoming the reason for me to read this FF. I love her man!! 👏👏👏 Since the beginning I have been awed by her characterisation and you describe her strong character so beautifully! Her interaction and Kaveri and the confrontation with DP - Woowww!! 👏👏 This woman knows what family means and I love how she stands up and protects Sanskaar no matter what. She tries and shields him from everyone who can hurt him and that is so commendable! 👏👏👏 Please let her always support Sanskaar - because she is such a treat to read! 😳

I am delighted how Swara and Sanskaar's story is developing, as I told you. I wont go in detail but I am glad that both of them are becoming aware of each other and are now comfortable in each other's presence. The part where Swara tends to Sanskaar's wounds is very heartwarming and so beautifully written. Chapter 15 - loved that Swara does not want to go back to the mansion without Sanskaar and she wants him to take her back is clearly because she feels much more safer with him than she has ever felt in her life. I know Sanskaar is being a jerk at the moment - being all indifferent and cold - but he is doing this for her and her alone. Sanskaar cannot hurt Swara - and if he is breaking his promise to her - I am 110% sure its for Swara's own good only.

I wonder who are these intruders. Sanskaar's friend/friends? or Adarsh? 😉

Eagerly waiting.

Love

Anna

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Res

Unres:

Shruti,
You love giving heart attacks don't you? 😆 My heart is in my mouth with all that I have just read. Suddenly I wish it was Lakshya instead of Devendra. You really have got another character much more hatable than Lakshya. I have a question - Is Adarsh in league with Devendra? From everything you mentioned Pawan is the friend Devendra is referring to, but why do I feel Adarsh could be in league with Devendra?? Pawan is definitely loyal to Sanskaar. There is no way he has changed sides. He probably must have realised who the real traitor is and must have staged his own death to take Devendra down and help his best friend!!
(Am I guessing/imagining too much? I cant help it. Your story takes me to another world and I start imagining sooo much more!!!) 😛
Shruti, you have taken this story to another level. I swear with each update I think it cannot get better than this and then you go and outdo yourself. Hats off.! 👏
We finally know who the real traitor is. What an amazing way to unfold it all. Your quote at the start was ao apt for this chapter. I have to say you really know how to hook your readers to this story. All the secrets that have been revealed along with the SwaSan captivity just makes this chapter enthralling and so gripping. Its a warrior thing that they can take any amount of harm and pain to themselves but the moment their loved one/their woman is threatened, they go berserk. You have shown Sanskaar's thoughts on that so well. He is trying to find ways to distract Devendra from Swara and realising its futile and Swara has ingeniously come up with the plan to sweet talk Devendra. She is truly a wonder really! I have enjoyed this chapter immensely.
Eager for the next update. :)
-V
P.S.: Sorry for the double post. My phone has turned against me. *sigh*

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Shruti,
Since I double posted here is a quote for you:

'The greatest compliment a writer can be given is that a story and character hold a reader spellbound.' -Iris Johansen

My feelings on your writing and story. 😊
Cheers,
V

Originally posted by: Vini224

Shruti🤗

So the traitor has been revealed.

Prince Devendra, oh how I would love to punch him for causing all this trouble for Sanskar.

And that creep is eyeing Swara😡

I just wish Sanskar is freed quickly so that he could beat him black and blue.

So Swara is trying to free Sanskar by acting helpless .

But will Devendra believe her?

And hope Sanskar realizes she's just acting.But I'm sure he'll quickly catch on to her act.

The story is getting more and more interesting with every update but you leave me on tenterhooks when you end it at a cliffhanger.

Thank you so much Shruti, for such an amazing story.

Originally posted by: amimus

Chapter 16 is brilliant. Never expected the leader to be a prince of another clan. But nonetheless sanskaar has found the traitor and I am sure he will find a way out to escape and prove himself innocent.

Now coming to Swara I am impressed with her, she is playing a very nice game with devendra. I am sure she has said the kidnapping part so that devendra trusts her on she not liking sanskaar at all and wants to get away from him as soon as possible.

Now have to wait and see whether devendra believes her and how is sanskaar going to react. Will he understand her or not.

Originally posted by: piccola1

Shruti !!!!!!!!!😊

My heart will be in my mouth until your next update ! You've left this brilliant story ( and our nerves)😃 on a knife's edge 😲

Res for now..couldn't not respond and give a big THANK YOU for this!

A big 🤗 for treating us with it to beat the Monday blues!

Originally posted by: soumi93

hiii shruti...well i hv one thing to cnfess dear...
after entering this forum i just used to b a very silent reader and moreover a very inactive person.
bt as time grows i started get into ccs ats ffs etc...
when u send me the link for the first time i didnt cmmnt cz i was busy in reading ghe t1 section just to get the plot...now i am done with it so now i will comment here.

welll The bnd btween swasan is truely commandable.
Their frndship and bond is awesome
no comment about ragini total wastage of time.
do update and pm me
u descrideb the era in a best possible way!!!!
i am loving it...
With Love

Soumi.

Originally posted by: Zephyr8

Chapter 16 is amazing. The story is unravelling and it's getting very interesting. I'm sure Swara will use her with well to get them out of this mess. Thank you for the unexpected update.