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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#651

Originally posted by: sneharay
Mindblowing Update..
So Laksh is innocent..Swara has a plan..its a smart move..hope swasan will come out from this problem soon 😊

Thank you Sneha 😃. Yes it never was Lakshya! Swara- let's see whether she can manage to help or not 😉. SwaSan are in soup for sure so it will be hair raising!

Love, S x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Amazing update 👏
Laksh is innocent
I hope swasan will come out from this problem soon 😃
Post next part super soon please

Thanks so much Sujay 😃. Yes, it never was Lakshya. As for SwaSan- they have some testing times before they can emerge from this . I will start working on 17 soon. I keep endlessly fighting the clock at the moment 😊

Best wishes,

Shruti

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#653

Originally posted by: dilwali
nice update but now scary too continue soon dear n thanks for pm Shruti loads of love

Thank you so much Ami, I will try to write 17 asap. Lots of love to you too xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#654

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written update...

Thank you Mystic 😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#655

Dearest friends,

I believe I have now caught up with all comments on 15 and have made a start on 16 but am going to revert to a lot of you tomorrow onwards as I want to make a start on 17 as I am not around much this weekend and after Wednesday, my work commitments are quite severe. I hope you will all understand like aways! So sorry about this every time- it's harder than I thought to write an on-going FF as there is always the next chapter pending 😆

Love you all xoxo

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bones123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#656

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Dearest friends,
I believe I have now caught up with all comments on 15 and have made a start on 16 but am going to revert to a lot of you tomorrow onwards as I want to make a start on 17 as I am not around much this weekend and after Wednesday, my work commitments are quite severe. I hope you will all understand like aways! So sorry about this every time- it's harder than I thought to write an on-going FF as there is always the next chapter pending 😆

Love you all xoxo

Have a break, have a Kit-Kat ! :-*

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#657

Originally posted by: bones123

Have a break, have a Kit-Kat ! :-*

😆😆 I need to stay off the chocolate as have already had more than I should! Also reminded me of one of my favourite barristers I work with- he is commonly called KitKat (has a Polish name and is one of the top in his field). Even the judges call him that and once in the High Court one of the Bench said that to him as a joke- it was so funny! Reminded me so I am rambling!

PS: loved your comment like always 😃

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#658

Shuru baby muahhh...🤗

Chapter 16 is par excellence...👏

I was waiting for something like swasan close escape from riders coming towards them...but what a nail bitting twist...my heart was racing like a steam engine...my one hand on my mouth...trying to calm my nerves...what an amazing chapter...👏⭐️

That leech .🤢.cheapster🤬 Devendra came..ahhh...n he recognized sansku... n started acting ...ahhh i hate him aready...he is the traitor... but he cant function alone..???.someone is helping him...???😡

Because of him sanku had to suffer sooo much pain..humilation...tag of traitor... 😭God i hate him already...devendra...that pervert was eyeing swara...making sansku blood boils...mine too...😡😡

And that brute captured sansku n even hit him..😡.well sanku retailiation was terrific...👏😆kiss worthy...love u sansku...(kill him whenever u get a chance...)😉😲

And the magnificent swara...she may appears to be timid n innocent...but has good observation..n brain too...how smartly she handled question of devendra...👏😊

All that make up story about vikram n maitilli...hehehe good one...😃

But that devendra recognised sansku earlier..n was quick to add 2plus 2...n understdnd the girl is gadodia's girl swara...conversation regarding map was soo apt...swara was soo shocked to react...😕😕

The shocking twist was the last part...swara dumbfound devendra by acting all needy for help...😉

Hope sanskaar understand her sudden change...😕

one good thing happened

Because of swara smartness... it has bought sanku some time...hope sanskaar can think of a plan to escape...hope they both help each other to escape or pawan n team may be...😆😃😊

I dont want lakshya n adarsh to be hero...to rescue swasan...😲😕

Dying to read next chapter...🤪

Loads of love muahhh🤗

Talia❤️

Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 9 years ago

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NITI VYAS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#659

Ab aapne last main hi aisa kuch likha hai ki mujhe us baare mein bak bak kiye bina reh sakti aur phir pure chapter k baare main bhi tho batana hai tho ab aaapko bahut saari bak bak sunni padegi. Tho abhi last se ab pata hai tho k swara juth bol rahi hai.ya tho kuch chal raha hai uske dimaag mein jo swasan ko baacha saktta hai.par kya yeh idea kaam karjayega.kya who dono bachenge ya unka saath yahi tak ka hai.kya devendra uski baatoon mein aa jyga.kya sanky swara ke mansube samajh payega. Kya swara mahesh mahal pahunch bhi gayi tho sanky ko sahi saabit kar payegi.apne aap ko behguna saabit kar payegi.kitne saare sawal .aur ab ek darkhwast swasan ko plz saath mein rakhiye .koi bhi mushkil dono saath mein hal karke ek dusre ka sahra banenge.ab sach kahu tho devendra ek jhatka tha maine kitne jaan ke option soche the.yaha tak k bagri bhi mere dimaag mein aaya tha.aur kuch bhi bolo devendra bhi intelligent hai who samjh gaya par tamasha na ho isiliye aur sanskaar key code de isliye who use aapne base camp le gaya. Aur swara ka dev ke saath ride.sanky par kya biti hogi.aur sanky ka sach pata chalne baad un dono ki baatein sahi thi yaar.ab sanky ko pata chala k lucky galat nahin tha.ab kya who swara se aurr dur chala jayega. And person near by village and persuasion skill who kya tha kaun tha kahi pawan jaiswal tho nahin..sorry bahut bak bak ho gayi aur bahut saate sawaal bhi.

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#660

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Dearest Nyna 🤗

In reverse order, first take a bow as the deduction you made at the end was so superbly reasoned out, from all the replies (and some others came close too) yours really picked up on the crux of why it wasn't Adarsh. I just loved the way you processed that 👏👏.

I started my next chapter with a very similar quote Nyna- what a connect 😃

I like this type of greedy 😊.

The first point - one of the reasons for the late unres, coming from you, I was in ninth heaven and coming back to terra firma was a little difficult task.

I had Res'ed immediately and when I read the starting quote, I wanted to partly unres and ask - coincidence? Unbelievably so!🤗

And I love being this type of greedy.😃

Finally, Unres for Chapter 16 - page 85.

Love,

Nyna