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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: Red.orchid
Hi shruti
I read all the parts all r awesome👏
I loved it😛

Sadhana😊

Thank you so much Sadhana 🤗

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: amimus
Brilliant what an update. Shruti I think is your name you are such a brilliant writer.
This is the first story I have read of yours and it's simply awesome.
I am desperately waiting for the next update.

Hey Amina! Wow- such nice words for me 😳. Thank you so much for this! I'll be back soon!

Best wishes,

Shru x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Res-

Unres!

Smoke and Mirrors - you are the magician here, Shru!👏
Ragini attempting to double cross Sanskaar - was a master stroke - that she failed was solely because she underestimated Sanskaar. Well, she presumed that Sanskaar would act as she would have - but however, dark and gone he appeared to be, he still had scruples. Unlike Ragini- darkness within and darkness without.
The contrast between the sisters - light and night - It was beautiful, especially since it meant that both the sisters did not have to pretend. Swara had nothing to hide so she could always be in the light and not worry; Ragini in the cover of darkness could stop hiding the darkness within her.
Sanskaar, forced to take Swara with him - well, Ragini did not give him much of chance there - in a way she did win this round without any bloodshed, not what she wanted,I am sure, but a victory for her nonetheless.
Sanskaar giving up so easily on not gaining access to Lakshya's chambers - seems to be more than meets the eye. Not hazarding any guess here.Smile
Regarding Ragini revealing her true self to Swara - an act of smugness with a tinge of overconfidence - guess she was elated at the thought of how Swara could be thoroughly maligned and that nothing could stop her from being Lakshya's wife.
Swara - can be as rigid as she wants for now, once the betrayal sinks in, Sanskaar would be the only one who comforts her!

All in all - an amazing update!

Nyna

My dear Nyna 🤗

Another fab set of comments! Thanks so much! I am glad the title appealed again to you 😃. Totally right on Ragini- she didn't expect the lateral thinking in that direction from Sanskaar! Love the line re darkness within and without 👏

So pleased to see you like those sections explaining the differences by preference and underlying the pretence Ragini dons each day to be someone she thinks people will love. Yes in a way Ragini sort of "won" as she got Swara away and the other person who knew her dark secrets- Sanskaar but it may well come as a Pyrihic victory for her and she may actively regret this! Ah re Sanskaar- he actually gave up as he needed to get away and he could not risk being found especially as Swara was so shaky already and of course he was bluffing her that he could hurt family! I'll explain soon what he wanted from Lakshya's rooms. You are correct re Ragini allowing herself to be revealed- those things yes but also shock at Sanskaar's unexpected decision not to do what she thought he would. And ahhh- whether the Princess will hold herself aloof for long remains to be seen 😉. Thanks so much for this Nyna x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: piccola1
Brilliant, Shruti ! 👏
I realized that I had been holding my breatg all thru Chapter 7, only when it finished ..what a stunner this was !
Res for now - Couldnt but rush to share my delight with it. But will wait to use my laptop for a "real" reply...

Look forward to the detailed take Pic- so pleased you liked this xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: amimus

Yes shruti I am an ArShi fan for sure. My name is Amina.
I am very much looking forward to reading this story.

Thanks Amina 🤗 Also just replied to your previous comment:)

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#436

Dear Sana, Sakiyyah, Uma, Sapna, Shivani, Geet, Tas, Mystery, Sanya and Priya- I have read your lovely comments with much pleasure and will do you proper replies soon. My eyes are shutting as had guests today after the past 2 nights of almost no sleep, plus a 5.30 am start tomorrow beckons so will do so when I feel more alert and can talk sense! Much love till then!

To all others who kindly commented- replies done and thank you again!

Have a lovely week ahead all! x

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maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Dear Sana, Sakiyyah, Uma, Sapna, Shivani, Geet, Tas, Mystery, Sanya and Priya- I have read your lovely comments with much pleasure and will do you proper replies soon. My eyes are shutting as had guests today after the past 2 nights of almost no sleep, plus a 5.30 am start tomorrow beckons so will do so when I feel more alert and can talk sense! Much love till then!
To all others who kindly commented- replies done and thank you again!

Have a lovely week ahead all! x

Rest well Shruti ...so tht u can have another mind blowing update up for us soon! Take care

Love Tas

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coolgal270

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Posted: 9 years ago

#438

So sorry dear Shruti...have been unable to respond...traveling plus a wedding at home...its been too hectic...will read ur updates soon...and reply..really dying to read this..

Lots of love, sumi

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#439

Chapter 6

Ragini is indeed turning villainous in this one..😡

she has started her games to manipulate lakshya against swara.

swara is also drawn by sanskaar's antics even though they are silly and funny she enjoys them and sometimes she is quick to notice his inborn intelligence too..😊 wow just wow..!!she is able to know him so much..

ragini's plan to defame swara was so lowly..😡😲 she paid a soldier for the task.

thank god sanskaar came in time to rescue her..😃

sanskaar even had a heated discussion with ragini about it..wow he cares for swara so much now😳 he even killed the soldier who tried to attack swara..😆too good man..!

I am loving this story..🤗 and love you Shru😊

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#440

Chapter 7

Ha ha..So ragini's prince laksh ji is not willing to believe that swara is at fault..he just believes her innocence..No wonder Ragini has turned so disastrous.

And the way you described Raginis jealousy and insecurities, is just mind blowing Shru👏

So our prince Sanskaar was watching mermaid princess secretly😉 and when Swara saw him turn away from her friendly greeting she felt hurt too..these two are really attracted to each other, unknowingly..😳

Ragini intended Sanskaar to kill Swara..so that her hands wont get dirty in the game..how sick😡

But thank god Sanskaar saw through her dirty plan and didnt even try to harm his mermaid princess..

He even took her away from Nagini's vileful plans

loved raginis reaction when he called her by that name😆😆

but who was watching them secretly is still a suspense

so the dark knight has now turned into a knight in the shining armour to the princess rescue..

i am eager to read the upcoming parts..😃

my swasan love story has started..