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Originally posted by: Red.orchid

Hi shruti

I read all the parts all r awesome👏

I loved it😛

Sadhana😊

Originally posted by: amimus

Brilliant what an update. Shruti I think is your name you are such a brilliant writer.

This is the first story I have read of yours and it's simply awesome.

I am desperately waiting for the next update.

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res-

Unres!

Smoke and Mirrors - you are the magician here, Shru!👏

Ragini attempting to double cross Sanskaar - was a master stroke - that she failed was solely because she underestimated Sanskaar. Well, she presumed that Sanskaar would act as she would have - but however, dark and gone he appeared to be, he still had scruples. Unlike Ragini- darkness within and darkness without.

The contrast between the sisters - light and night - It was beautiful, especially since it meant that both the sisters did not have to pretend. Swara had nothing to hide so she could always be in the light and not worry; Ragini in the cover of darkness could stop hiding the darkness within her.

Sanskaar, forced to take Swara with him - well, Ragini did not give him much of chance there - in a way she did win this round without any bloodshed, not what she wanted,I am sure, but a victory for her nonetheless.

Sanskaar giving up so easily on not gaining access to Lakshya's chambers - seems to be more than meets the eye. Not hazarding any guess here.Smile

Regarding Ragini revealing her true self to Swara - an act of smugness with a tinge of overconfidence - guess she was elated at the thought of how Swara could be thoroughly maligned and that nothing could stop her from being Lakshya's wife.

Swara - can be as rigid as she wants for now, once the betrayal sinks in, Sanskaar would be the only one who comforts her!

All in all - an amazing update!

Nyna

Originally posted by: piccola1

Brilliant, Shruti ! 👏

I realized that I had been holding my breatg all thru Chapter 7, only when it finished ..what a stunner this was !

Res for now - Couldnt but rush to share my delight with it. But will wait to use my laptop for a "real" reply...

Originally posted by: amimus

Yes shruti I am an ArShi fan for sure. My name is Amina.

I am very much looking forward to reading this story.

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Dear Sana, Sakiyyah, Uma, Sapna, Shivani, Geet, Tas, Mystery, Sanya and Priya- I have read your lovely comments with much pleasure and will do you proper replies soon. My eyes are shutting as had guests today after the past 2 nights of almost no sleep, plus a 5.30 am start tomorrow beckons so will do so when I feel more alert and can talk sense! Much love till then!</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">To all others who kindly commented- replies done and thank you again!</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Have a lovely week ahead all! x</font>