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Brilliant what an update. Shruti I think is your name you are such a brilliant writer.

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Shru before I comment on the chapter let me just say that you are a lovely person to actually care so much about your online readers. 🤗 Not many are so bothered about their readers that they will actually slog through the night so that they can get a chapter out just because their readers wanted it. And while doing that you never ever compromise on the quality of your work. That shows that not only do you care for the people who read your work but also you have a great deal of love & respect for your own writing👏 Love this quality of yours XOXOX

Chapter 7:

Personally I have always had a problem trusting the cheerful cherubs around me. So here I could understand where Ragini was coming from when she thinks badly of her naive sister who loves playing happy families. Most of the times these people turn out to be back stabbers but then it doesn't do to be dogmatic about human nature. So yes, Swara is truly what she seems but if Ragini cannot believe it I for some reason cannot blame her completely. It must surely hurt, especially at her age, to see all the men being drawn to Swara without her even trying. It must hurt her to always be the good & preferred DIL but never the chosen wife IDK if Ragini truly wants to stop doing this to Swara or if its her delusion at work where she is the victim of circumstances & forced to do things she would never do otherwise because no sooner does an opportunity present itself & Ragini is back to her plotting & planning🤢 You cannot help but be impressed by this woman though. She is on another level completely & no it isn't because those around her are stupid like in the show😆 Far from it.

I loved that entire scene of Sanskaar taking Swara captive, the cogs in his brains turning as he quickly understood Ragini's true intentions & the need to spoil her plans even if it meant compromising his! And seeing Ragini attempt to double cross this man elevates her to a completely new level in my eyes. To actually dare to fool him in any way & even succeed partially?! What a woman! Take a bow Ragini👏 What was it that Sanskaar collected from the Gadodia's vault other than the map? Even the scene of him in the Samvant's chambers was very well written👏 So he knows the combination of the Gadodia's safe? Smart man. He has done his homework quite well 😎 So, Sanskaar could not go to Laksh's chambers then? Hmm! Was the skirmish at the border a part of his plan with Pawan maybe since Pawan too is an outlaw now right?! I doubt Sanskaar would wait for a chance fight to break out to time his escape. My boy is very smart😳

Swara is such a poor baby! The sort who would naively say that if I am good, the world will be good to me. How heartbroken was she when Sanskaar didn't wave back at her Her hurt makes his simple rejection sound more brutal than it actually was😆 Even in a drugged state Swara had more sense in her than everyone around her later. The girl is definitely smart. And then she proves it yet again when she recognizes Sanskaar as the man who saved her earlier. But what was Swara doing in Sanskaar's chambers? What lie did Ragini tell her to send here there at that time of the night? I could actually feel her going numb seeing this side of her sister. It must have come as a huge shock, so much so, that she is rendered speechless by everything that is unfolding in front of her. You have given her no dialogues after she voices her concern for her sister. Her silence hurts & conveys a lot more than her shouting or screaming at Ragini every could😭

Princess Nagini😆 😆 😆 Have a string of successes made Ragini rash? She did not have to reveal to Swara her true face. She could have pretended to be shocked at what Sanskaar was doing, thus damning him further in Swara's eyes & keeping Swara hopeful that Ragini will send help, so that even if Swara does come back she cannot be 100% sure that Ragini is truly a naagin like Sanskaar called her. Or is she sure that Swara cannot come back ever? When Swara is over the initial shock she will realize that Sanskaar in fact saved her from her sister. Ragini could have so easily prevented this by playing along with Swara's naive assumption for a little while longer. Maybe she just wanted to gloat seeing her sister in shock? Not a very smart move Ragini!

This chapter is by far the best piece of work I have read from you Shru, not only of this FF but of everything you have written so far. Loved it like anything XOXOXO

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Lovely chapter Shru dear. I shall un res my earlier comment for a comprehensive reply, but in meantime, this chapter was awesome in the sense of completely departing from the serial plotline. The earlier chaps all of course had that stamp of redefining the serial events and plot to suit your setting, this one reinvented events altogether! 👏 👏

And I am doing a celebratory jig right now...I knew it! I knew it!! I knew Sanskaar would have to take Swara along as a hostage in his dash for freedom, Ragini having connived to create a Web of circumstance which forced this. 😃 I mentioned that in my last comment on chap 6 I guess. 😉

Ohhh now for a greedy re reading or two. 😉

Lots of Love

Viji

Originally posted by: anu91

Nice plot dear. ...

It was nice to read...

Loved it...

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome 👏
Very well written

Wow Shruti darling...u have completely outdone yourself in chapter 7...what an amazing twist tho frankly speaking I knew tht if Sanskaar was going anywhere then he would be taking Swara with him...how and when it would happen I had no clue but there can't be a swasan story if they are apart from each other right

Ragini is a hard core evil witch..and smarter than the one in the show even...tht one pushed Swara herself from the bridge but this one didn't even attempt to get her hands bloody...she simply contrived tht Sanskaar would do her job for her!!

Swara is the epitome of innocence...she truly has no clue of any negativity spreading around her ... Sometimes such navet is endearing but when one has such sisters as Ragini one would be expected to be sharper...tho I think Ragini had never felt the need to show her hatred towards Swara before now ...

Really liked how u distinguished the 2 sisters with respect to their personal likes...Swara loving water and being carefree when she is in it whereas Ragini always conscious of doing the right thing and unconsciously just emulating Swara with the hope of being admired ...
Also their personal liking for day and night...Swara is day...full of sunlight and brightness and cheerfulness and straightforward with no pretense and no need to hide...Ragini with her preference for night shows she has much to hide and the main thing being her true nature...even the fact tht she hides her liking for night making others think she is something she isn't...ppl who try to Mould themselves to someone they feel they should be rather than just be who they r have a really tough time keeping up with the pretense.

Swara innocent soul that she is ... What a double shocker for her tht the seemingly mad Sanskaar is actually probably the sharpest man she will have ever encountered and tht the sister that she loves more than. Herself has plotted to kill her??? Tht is going to take a while for her to digest and I think initially she is just not going to accept it and believe it a misunderstanding on her part...

Really liked the scene where Sanskaar picks up Swara and mounts her with him on his horse...can it get any dreamier...sigh...like some highwayman kidnapping a damsel in distress...but I don't think it is going to be anywhere near as romantic yet...

I'm still clueless as to what Sanskaar's mission is and why did he escape and where is he off to? What did he want from laksh's room and since he didn't get it wasn't it very important??

I'm happy Swara at least realized tht it was Sanskaar who had rescued her from tht guard so he couldn't be all bad tho obviously she isn't going to trust him now tht she is aware that even her sister can plot against her how can she trust the so called state traitor

Swasan days will start and really looking forward to those...Ragini overdose was really making me nauseous

Hope chapter 8 is ready soon too. Take care and do rest urself too Shruti

Love Tasneem

ohhh god what ashocker this is???????

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hi there! Thank you so much! A new reader is always such a nice surprise:). I am so glad you like it! I'll try and write Chapter 7 soon too so hope you will keep reading:). What is your name btw? I see you are an ArShi fan like me too?

Best wishes,

Shruti

omg wht jst hpnd u r right this ws a shck fr me i didnt expected this i thought sanskar will be out fr his work fr sm day ragini wd be instigating every1 against swara n sanskar will return whn ragini will try to kill swara bt princess nagini as sanskar calls her 🤣 is too sharp she plnd to kill swara using sanskar
bt sanskar took her with him i thot sanskar will go fr a shrt tym n gonna return soon didnt expctd tht he will tak her with him bt i jst realized its impact swara with sanskar away means we wont hv to tolerate swalak n swara will be away n prtctd frm her dear sis nagini at d sm tym sanskar mission too gt sv n along with all of tht a lot of dreamy swasan scenes a big hug to u fr this wndrful twist n sparing us frm swalak sanskars one mv of tkng swara wid him slvd mny prblms
whtever hpnd hd md swara cnfused bt i think the rlztn tht sanskar svd her tht day n sanskar raginis cnfrntn hd made her realise tht there is more to wht meets the eye
prt 7 its truly amazing hats off to u 👏

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

Loved the updates...omg ragini did a master stroke...