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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Thank you guys for encouraging me more n more..n thanx for. ...
Wait m not a politician..why m giving this speech?I wonder..neither I got an award..so...
Lol
Jokes apart guys..seriously thank u from the bottom of my heart. .look at me..m so shameless ..exam on monday n m busy writing this ff..

Chapter 4
ReCaP...
Ragini n Laksh missing each other. .both shedding tears ..Laksh in hatred n Ragini for betrayal..they wanna forget each other...Ragini with other banjaaras enter in MM..god and destiny welcome her with full rituals..no one knows she is Ragini cuz of her veil..

NOW...
Laksh is feeling her presence...his eyes are closed...n Swara..the one who loves her the most.. whom she loves the most..is just searching for her knowing that she is no more in the world.. .
Swara (whispers remembering her): Ragini..
Laksh hears her whisper...he slowly opens his eyelids. ..n turns towards the door...meanwhile Ragini goes from there..
Ragini goes n stands near the stage(DP prepared a stage for the function) ...Ragini looks first at her trust...her Swara...tears start falling off her eyes..then her papa..dadi maa..maa..AP..DP...sanskar..who was once her best friend..Chachi ji...chacha ji...n finally Laksh...who is with his business friends n talking to them with a smile. .
Ragini: yeh muskan hi toh chahte the hum aapke liye...dekhiye na humare jaane se aap kitne khush hai...abb hum sure ho gaye hain k humara faisla galat nahi tha..humne jaakar bilkul theek kiya..Laksh...
Laksh who is talking to his colleagues felt her words n looks towards her..Ragini immediately turns back so that he cannot see her..
Man(who was with Laksh) : mr maheshwari?
Laksh: hun??
N they start talking again...

Meanwhile a host comes to the stage n..
Host: mr. Durgaprasad Maheshwari..aaj inhone aap logo ke liye pooja ke baad ek function rakha hai..n uska host main...harrrman(harman)..toh sir aapne yeh shanti pooja, right? Kis liye rakhi? Of course shanti k liye..main bhi paagal hoon
Sujata to AP: jo us chhori ke jaane se mil gyi..
AP: chup karo sujata..
Laksh hears it and gives a smile to himself... but suddenly remembers her words "hum nhi.jaante ki dhoka kya hota hai Laksh? "
Host: so let's play a game first..this a game where I'll choose two persons randomly n they hv to do what I say...
All: yaay...
He choses DP and AP..
Host: toh aapko dance krna hoga. ..
DP: nhi hum nhi krenge ..
A random man: aap toh rules ke bohot pakke hai na toh ab aap mana nhi kr sakte...
All: haan haan aapko krna pdega...
Finally DP agrees..
They both come on stage n the song is played..
(janam janam janam saath chalna yanhi)
They both dance..ap's hand is on dp's shoulder..DP's hand is on her waist(😉)..n tge other in each other's hand..
(Kasam tumhe kasam aake milna yanhi)
Everyone including Laksh n Ragini smiles..
(Ek jaan hai bhale do badan hai judaa
Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna kbhi na kehna alwida)
DP: bas bas..bahut ho gya...ye kaam in bachcho se karwao..ab kahaan is umar mein hum dance wance krenge..
Everyone claps..Ragini giggles..Laksh too smiles...
AP goes to her place shying ..sujata teases her hitting her shoulder with hers..

Host: now mr. Sanskar Maheshwari..u and you..(points at Swara)..
Both look at each other. ..then come on stage..
Host: so you have to do acting. ..
Swara: what?
Sanskar: acting of what?
Ragini also is eager to know what they r gonna act..she wants something good for SwaSan..
Host: of lovers. ..
Ragini raises her brows..n smile. .
Host: like she is going forever n u hv to stop her..
SwaSan see in each other's eyes..n Ragini n Laksh remember the time when Ragini was going forever.. .
Act starts..but they aren't acting
Sanskar: Ruk jaao swara...
Swara: nahi sanskar tum par ab kisi aur ka haq hai...
Ragini understands her..tears fall from her eyes..
Sanskar: par Swara main us'se nhi tumse pyaar krta hoon ..
Swara: par uski aur tumhari shaadi hone wali hai..
Kavita too understands n all other maheshwaris n gadodias..kavita decides to leave sanskar..she wants to redeem..
Sanskar: Swara main tumhare bina jee nhi paaunga...
Swara: par sanskar.
He stops her by putting his hand on swara's mouth..
Sanskar: meri baat suno Swara...agar tum sachme mujhse pyaar krti ho...aa jaao mere paas..
Swara nods slowly.. sanskar smiles. ..n he takes a heart balloon n proposes swara..
Sanskar: will u marry me Swara?
Swara: yes...
N hall echoes with applause. ..n the hardest claps were of Ragini
Function continues n deepu comes to Ragini..
Deepu: Radha jiji..
Ragini: haan Deepu bolo..
Deepu: Sushila kaki bula rhi hai aapko..
Ragini: main chalti hoon..chalo. .

In their green room..(the guest room was given them as the green room)
Sushila: Radha beta..
Ragini: haan maa..
Sush: dekh toh saundarya ko kya ho gya...yeh behosh ho gyi...
Ragini: kya!!! Kahan hai Woh?
She goes to check saundarya..n she finds that saundarya is having fever..
Ragini,: maa ise bukhaar hai..
Sush: toh ab perform kaun krega?
Deepu: Radha jiji hai na..
Ragini: nhi nhi Deepu mujhse nhi hoga...
Sushila:Radha ..krde na beta..
Ragini: par maa...
Other back dancers: haan krdo na Radha ..(they were 5 back dancers. )
Ragini: theek hai...(but still nervous)

Party
Host: so ab time hai performance ka..so here we present the most special part of the function ..the dance performance...

Music starts..{other dancers will dance n only Ragini will sing}
She is still in the ghoonghat...
Music starts. .all of them face the audience

Ragini sings:Meri Wafayein Yaad Karoge
Meri Wafayein Yaad Karoge
RooOge ahaaan Fariyaad Karoge

Meri Wafayein..

She goes n takestakes round around laksh..


Ragini:Mujhko to barbad kiya hai
Mujhko to barbad kiya hai
Aur kise aye heeyy Barbaadd karoge ?
RooOge Fariyaad Karoge

Meri Wafayein..

She goes back to stage.. whereaswhereas laksh starts thinking that Ragini is singing this(he doesn't know that she is Ragini) ...

Ragini:Kaise bhoologe tum mujhko
Kaise bhoologe tum mujhko
Yaad mujhe mere baad karoge
RooOge ahaaan Fariyaad Karoge

Meri Wafayein..

Here he starts missing her again..swara starts crying after listening to the line"yaad mujhe mere baad karoge"..sanskar too feels like crying bcuz he wants to marry Swara..kavita sees him that way..


Ragini:Meri Mohabbat yaad karoge
Meri Mohabbat yaad karoge
RooOge Fariyaad Karoge

Meri Mohabbat.

Now she turns to sanskar..n brings Swara to sanskar by holding her hand..

As Laksh thinking her Ragini..he starts singing unwilling..

Laksh:Apno ko to bhool chuke ho
Apno ko to bhool chuke ho
Aur kise tum yaaad karoge
RooOge Fariyaad Karoge

Meri Mohabbat..

Now she remembers that night.. the same night she was pushed in the darkness by her love..

Ragini(crying):Loot ke meri duniya dilbar
Loot ke meri duniya dilbar
Kaise khud ko abaad karoge
Roooge Fariyaad Karoge

Laksh too remembers the night..

Ragini:Meri Mohabbat yaad karoge
Laksh:Meri Wafayein Yaad Karoge
Meri Wafayein...

Everyone applauses for them..

PreCaP..
RagLak moments..

That's it guys.. hope u liked it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Wow what do I very emotional update I feel bad for them hope they will be happy soon, all the best for the exams you are gonna do great
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Beautiful n emotional update
Loved it
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
This is fantastic Neha. I love ragini singing.
BTW you're going to give exams
In SRK style
All the best nehaaa..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Eager for RagLak meet nd moment..
Update was mesmerising..
lubd de song choosen.
Thnkww for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
It was a nice and Emotional Update 👏
Waiting to see what happens next 😳

And best of luck for your exams 😆

Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Liked z choice of songs
It depicted z current situation
loved the update
fanx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
you are just a nice writer.. loved it.. waiting for next..

PS: like button is not working :(
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
plzzz update next prt
waiting... for it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: ShirishaTeddy

you are just a nice writer.. loved it.. waiting for next..

PS: like button is not working :(

when are you going to update your story

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