FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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Teddy94

@Teddy94

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#821

Amazing update 😊
Loved Maddy..
Waiting for level 2.. Continue soon
Thnx for the pm 😊

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TRPS

@TRPS

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#822

:D RES
Many times I had the choice of being first one to comment on your ff Nimmi! but refrained thinking that people better with words should give the comments ahead of me. :P but don't know why , Aaj res karne kaa Mann kiyaa! :D
Unres!
After an hectic journey and test , finally got the chance of unres! :P
I told you naa Gaby has a plan of him coming out clean from this mess!! Isn't it?? I am so ishmaart! :D 😳
finally, Durga prasad acted like a king! to the point and wiise talk between him and Apte! I guess, ram prasad is wrong if he thinks that he is the deserving one !
I can imagine, Maddy's condition after knowing there was something hidden in the message! though Maddy loves Sanskaar but here goes the point why Swara is numero uno of Gaby/Sanskaar's life. her love, trust, faith in him is unquestionable. so pure! she knows him inside out. winds beneath his wings!*so dreamy*
by the way, after reading the conversation between Apte and Durga I knew it was Apte whom Gaby was calling! so hunt has started! eagerly waiting what unfolds now!
PS- I don't have any problem if you write another thread of angel! ;) waiting for lovely moments between Swasan. :D

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#823

Wow Nimmi!! Amazing update..
So that money thing was a message. Very smart. And Apte and DP caught it. Amazing. Hats off man.
Durga Prasad realised that Gabriel was never wrong, The discussion between Apte and Durga Prasad was very good!
Defintiely the points put forth by Apte were so true! Gabriel never kills for money and always kills CLEAN! Of course some loopholes that were missed. Great!

Maddy, this guy is gonna be the death of mine someday🤣The humour elements that he puts in our too good! I mean I can't help ROFLing at his comments. So he would read the suspense before and just put it on the front page. OMG!! This guy is seriously amazinggg.
Love him too much<3

I had thought that the man might be DP first, but then it was Apte. No probs. This is going way too good! Sanskaar and DP together with Apte! Ram Prasad is dead now! Thank you so much for the PM! Loved it<3

Sakshi

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SIMI

@simsen23

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#824

Res...because of pathetic internet...

Unres...finally some speed to my phone and life...😆

Nimmi...😉

I was waiting for this update.Well that Gabriel killing for money did not go well last time. Yehhh...smart and coded message..

Superb...👏

Durgaprashad and apte's conversations was very nice,but it was too late.If it had been a little earlier,sanskar's Baba had been there.Apte's change of attitude towards Gabriel started after that moment in funeral. All the 3 reasons ,his Clean killing style,his strong no nonsense attitude ,coded message and pain of loosing a father is enough to justify his innocence. Durgaprashad forgot to recognise his own Gabriel in a sense of revenge. But finally ...its clear .Ya still the underworld is against Gaby,but our man wants that too...😊

Swara and Maddy's reaction to sanskar's telephonic conversation was funny.Then that bro bro talk was awesome.Maddy writes the suspense in the first page...lol😆.haha...kitten is a silent listener now a days...😊.She knowns her man and now supporting him in every sense.

Then maddy-sona's reaction to apte's visit ,Maddy's never ending questions,Gabriel's answer,Maddy's hilarious reaction...

Oh man this guy is damn funny ...🤣

Then Gabriel's plan ...but this time with The God of underworld on his side...Ramprashad...count your last days...😊

Update soon sweety

Love,

Simi😊

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 10 years ago

#825

Res Nimmi. off to read now.

Short Unres...If you think you are the only one obsessed with Angel you are wrong , i am way too obsessed😉 . And i dont want to get over this obsession ever.. When you say this series is running longer than anticipated you made my day😆... More chapters = Me very Happy. I loved this chapter dear and will give my detailed comments soon. just letting you know here since your PM is Kaput . Thanks for the PM, Read it and loved it... You are the sweetest for this super fast updates that make my day😃

Finally Unres Nimmi ,

So Sorry for the late unres ,Had an busy weekend. Only 76 why i wanted 100 chapter minimum 😆. Just kidding, i still dont like to be reminded about Angel ending anytime soon . But i know i cant live in denial so i still have more or less ten chapters .😊..

Finally Durgaprsadji brain started working in the right direction, While i was blown away by Garbeil plan in the last chapter, now i was way too surprised by the hidden message he left for DP😲 . Loved the whole heart (Apte) and Brain (DP) conversation, and how they finally deduced Gabreil was innocent. His disappointment that Apte hid so many important info that could have made him solve this sooner and if it did Rana would be still alive. The realization and the guilt they both shared on his demise was too good👏. But they still left the target active on Gabriel since they dont want the traitor to catch up . While i dont like it i can understand Angel would want the same too.

So happy that phone call was to Apte not RP , i dont know why i was worried that Gabreil would make such a dumb move, i just thought maybe he would also fall for RP oh so innocent act. Mav is back and poor guy cant handle suspence and Gabreil is not keen on freeing from the misery. He read the last page and helps all the other by writing it in the first page. What an thoughtful person🤣 . Loved how Gabreil showed trust by giving the safe house address . And i am so thankful that Apte and DP already cracked the message or else my God it would have been bloodbath in Mav bachelor pad.😆

Loved Apte and Gabriel conversation, atfirst i was not so fond of Apte but slowly he is growing on me, Dont kill him too Nimmi on further thinking just spare my awesome trio and i can handle the rest.. i think.😆.. And then Mav strikes again his reaction to not being fully let into the plan when he was risking his life . That was so good🤣. So finally all the Good guys well all the upfront Assassins😎 are back together and now it times to hunt the shadow player and his mystery partner .

Awesome update Nimmi, Sorry for the late Unres... Love ya and you are the Sweetest 🤗...

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manishasatpathy

@manishasatpathy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#826

amazing!
so finally durga prasad and apte know abt the truth good
waiting for more continue soon
by d way if u hv difficulty over sending pms its absolutely ok if u dont do it, i always check all the stories i read in this forum whnever i am onl9 first so i wud easily know, though i like that u send the pms but if it is difficult for u then u dont need to do it
:)

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#827

Nimmi...🤗

Woah! A perfectly set plan executed perfectly! 👏 So the people for whom the message was sent, understood it and reached the right conclusion at last. And they realized their follies. Now Durga Prasad Maheshwari and Damodar Apte are in team Gabriel. Great! 👍🏼

I have to give it to you for creating such diabolical mazes. Such a twisted mind you have! 😈 I love the Swara understands Sanskar. She kknows him like no one else. I'm waiting for the day Sanskar will acknowledge his feelings and let her in to his life completely.

I'm sorry for not for editing my previous comment. Will do that later. I'm a bit busy right now.

Love you, 🤗❤️

Ashi.

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#828

Hi dear

sorry for being late

was busy with studies so could not catch up

Chapter 60

a entire chapter dedicated to sansky and his kitten

aww loved it

swara made sanskar shut up

the threat living in a room of pink with Disney princess around only swara can give such a threat

the tending of wounds

her family is indeed crazy

kissing the hurt away

both taking revenge for each other's sweet torture

sanskar is absolutely confused

his monologues make me Roll with laughter

awesome

thanks for pm

ritika

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#829

CAN I SERIOUSLY LIKE, ADMIRE, ADORE, LOVE GABRIEL + SANSKAAR = ANGEL MORE?!

Nimmi, I'm tired of saying how amazingly brilliant you are sis :)

I'm short of words!

What an absolutely mind blowing chapter!

RP & his partner (Who I think Rane) are gone...like seriously gone AND after Rana/Baba's death - bcoz of them - I have no pity for them! I want them to be punished in a horrible way!

Finally, Apte & DP chose to open their eyes...too late Bt still. Better late than never! Chalo der aye durust aye!

Now two groups - (Swara-Sanskaar-Maddy) & (DP-Apte) - joined their hands to find the traitor!

This game is going better and better AND I'm loving it! Too much fun!

Nimmi, your obsession with Angel is indeed a blessing for me! Keep writing AND TRUST ME I DON'T MIND AT ALL!

You know how much greedy I'm when it comes to ANGEL ;)

Update soon :)