FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 10 years ago

#811

RES

Finally unres...

Wow i should have known you wont write a scene without having use for them later, so Apte scene with Gabreil paved way for Mav entry to the meeting. I loved it👏.

I knew there were going to be an insane plan but you literally made my jaw drop when you revealed it 😲. Poor Mav no wonder he wanted not to attend the meeting😆. His slip tongue where he called Gabriel brother was so awesome🤣. The way he covered it up after all he is Maverick the Assassin next to numero uno😎.

When Mav first let it know that Garbiel killed Lakshya eventhough i knew that not all but i never expected how cleverly he diverted the target on RP back👍🏼. But i am still worried about what if someone get lucky. I want Gabriel, kitten and Mav to be safe till the end.. You promised me a sequel with Mav Nimmi, for that he need to be alive, just letting you know😉.

Mav was the star of this Chapter, he saved Gabriel and his kitten so many times but I just loved him a whole lot more during this Chapter⭐️.

So know i am truly lost by the suspence you left me in the last scene😕, i was okay with last cliffhanger as i knew Mav and trusted him but this one who is the mystery person Gabreil is going to call, i sure hope it not RP and he thinks he loved Lakshya so will help him .. I wont handle it .. just saying.😉

But my most favourite part always remain when this three are together❤️ , however short it is, Garbeil is still in denial and thinking of letting Swara go when the war ends. While i am worried about that bit i am still looking forward to the next chapter as always.. See i unres all my comments .And i would definately love to get my hands on the new chapter.. Do update soon Nimmi. And you are the sweetest for making this week so special by your super fast updates🤗

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#812

Geez my adrenaline levels are too high...I might as well die of all excitement you see!!! So this spot is reserved( oh the dreaded word!!!)

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#813

Awesome update.

The plan of sanskar was really nice. He accepted the crime he never did and gave a message about the traitor.

And Maddy played the game very well.

What will be the next move of sanskar?

Waiting for your next update.

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jasw

@jasw

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#814

That was a great plan by Sanskar! Hunters became hunted! 😃 Good going Gaby and good support by Maddy! I am really glad that it was not only brawn but brain too! I love this Sanskar/Gaby!😳

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Richa

@navyasingh

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#815

Nimmi🤗

Sorry for my late latifi😳

It was a super awesome chapter.😃

Maddy just never disappoints. 😃He is such a goofball. Maddy's one liners are hilarious. Do we have assassins like that in real life?😆

Poor Apte was so much irked by the whole situation.😆

Sorry if it is cruel, but I just had this strong surge to laugh whenever anyone addresed Laksh as babu.😳😆

Maddy is a superstar⭐️. 😎This time he did have such an awesome large live audience sitting in front of him😆. All were like listening patiently an were giving apt reactions at the perfect time😆. I myself was shocked by the turn of events.😳

What an awesome plan did Sanskaar made👏. He is brilliant. Totally deserving the tittle of numero uno assassin. The whole plan was very impressive and mind blowing. He perfectly shoved the real murderers under the spotlight and turned the whole situation around. In your words now hunter has became a prey.😊

I just loved feared faces of Ramprasad and his partner. True they should have known who they have made there nemisis. The angel of death himself. It was such an eye opener for them. Now I am waiting for them to commit a single mistake. A person tends to take foolish steps to save themselves. It will directly lead them to their doom.

Whole underworld is in search of these two and moreover the devil cum angel of death is himself involved in their search. It is just too much of fun.😎😆

I was just silently praying like Let Maddy be safe... throughout the chapter. And thank god you kept him safe.😃

Swara toh is always ready to listen to a new story and Maddy is ever ready to tell a new one😆

Loved that brotherly banter between Sanky and Maddy. It was adorable in a funny sort of way.😳😆

Very glad that Sanskaar didn't wince at those 3 words uttered by Swara😊. Hope he confesses them soon. He is finally listening to his heart. And our Swara is such a beautiful person❤️. Her love for her angel is just absolute and unlimited😃.

The superstar of this chapter were both Maddy and Sanskaar.⭐️ Though the plan was of Sanskaar but I just loved how wonderfully Maddy executed that plan. How brilliantly he dropped the bombshell in the middle of a boring party.👏

You left us at another cliffhanger.😆 Too much suspense all around. Who is the person who Sanskaar is calling? What is second stage of the plan? 😕

You are just brilliant Nimmi⭐️. I was shocked by the turn of events. The plan was just brilliant and introduced a major twist in this story. I am eagerly waiting for the next update.😃

Thanks for this amazing chapter Nimmi😳

Take care😃
Lots of love.🤗

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#816

Nimmi..

How i love you and your work and specially this story.. It's gets beautiful and entertaining with every chapter..

The entire sequence between Viper, Swara and Sanskaar was so so so well written I felt repulsive thinking about Viper, Sanskaar's anger reaches me and Swara's fear and love also reached me so well written that was..

The teasing session between Swara and Sanskaar was ohh so hot they were burning with such intensity.. I'm so happy Sanskaar is not ignoring Swara and her feelings and is going to leave this to destiny..

My heart wrenched in pain when I read Rana's death sequence and Sanskaar's pain made me cry but before that the teasing fight sequence was so indulging to read I was smiling throughout that one..

Maddy and Sanskaar's bond is so so full of brotherly love and affection their banter is cute.. And I just love Maddy he is one cutieee I just absolutely adore his devil may care attitude and sense or humor just superb it is..

So now the hunters turn into the prey who are being hunted and that was one well planned and well played move of Gabriel..

Thank you so much for the pm Nimmi.. Keep updating and keep writing don't ever stop..

Love,

Kashmi

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manishasatpathy

@manishasatpathy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#817

amazing!!
sanskaar's plan was gr8 waiting for the nxt plan of sanskaar and the surprise but i think the person he was calling is apte
the first time apte attacked sanskaar after laksh's death, apte seemed to somewhat believe sanskaar that he did not kill laksh though ram prasad brain washed him later and now sanskaar declaring he killed laksh bcoz of contract and his meeting with sanskaar at the burial of rana i am sure apte is in this plan with sanskaar

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#818

Unres page..116

Machi... 🤗 ... First of all.. Sorry I totally forget about that res...

Awesome one as usual... Loved it ... I would say that was an brilliant plan... Hats of to Gaby.. Maddy for execute that plan... For you... A big fat hugg...

Loved itan how the brothers connecting RP and his partner.. Is rane.. I have a doubt ...

Lived it re...

Love you...

Lol...

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#819

awesome...

turn in the story is awesome...

Gabriel indeed did the great task in truning the story up side down..

I loved it so much...

Ohhh Maddy.. he is such a sweetheart...

the sheer pleasure he took in describing the meeting ...

surely boy.. you have that gut..

But indeed you should have them since you are a assassin..

Aww... swara is sweet..

and i surely like surprises..

continue soon..

thank u for the pm..

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nida

@mystery75

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#820

im still in shock

WTH i just read...it was FGYQRHWEHGKJ

MADDY ... MADDY ...MADDY... he is toh the bestest what an absolutely brilliant plan no no no insanely insane plan by our very own ANGEL marvellous

a complete game changer turned the tables unbelievably around... now ram prasad and that partner of his know that the whole underworld is gonna get them but but but before that THE DEVIL himself gonna rip them apart ... ohhh "isse kehte hain aik taraf kunwa aur doosre taraf khayi" ki perfect example😃

for me maddy is the hero of todays chapter although i know that the idea was of sanskar😆 but the way maddy executed it brilliantly with its own style

i just couldnot stop laughing for alteast 5min after maddy's first ever amazing declaration "GABRIEL KILLED LAKSH"🤣🤣 so tried to stop my laugh and even after 5min some weird sound were coming out of my mouth and it started now again

literally become a fan of maddy's humorous style and his over the dramatic way of telling stories oh god only he can turn the most dreaded meetings of underworld into a comedy one🤣

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