FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#801

Res

UnRes:

And I was the first to res

(though hopefully not the last to Unres😉)

That was a sheer brilliance - a completely lunatic idea but brilliant nonetheless.👏👏👏

After all if you cannot convince them confuse them, which is exactly what Sanskaar has done - and Maddy (simply love this mad hatter😉) executed it with his trademark hilarity. Of course, he was not to0 pleased to learn that what he had done was just the first phase and knowing Sanskaar what comes next would be even more of a lunatic idea (as per Maddy).

Cannot wait for the next part.

Love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 10 years ago

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dundumol96

@dundumol96

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#802

Angel I don't like surprise...

Pls update soon

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#803

Woah.. what a chapter!!
I knew Maddy would rock it. Maddy is just amazing. This plan was really insane I must say but totally amazing. Gabriel literally hit the center of the bull's eye. I was praying that Maddy would try to know everyone's reaction and feel suspicious about RP and his partner on seeing their terrified faces. But never mind.
That contract tale was too good! I was laughing at this and when Maddy thought about the sheer brilliance and stylish plan of his bro, I couldn't help agreeing and grinning. Gabriel is too good! And so is Maddy. Nimmi, please never make Maddy negative. I'll have a heart attack if this happens as I love Maverick tooo much just second to my love for Numero Uno!
Typically hit the nail! Awesome!
And then, RP's expressions and face, dang it! He's sooo scared. Oh he should know that he's really become the enemy of a wrong guy. He and Gabriel are no match huh!
And who is Sanskaar calling?? Oh God!! This surprise?!! Will be waiting so eagerly both for the next update and ILU from Gabriel's mouth!!
Sanskaar loves her irrevocably but Gabriel needs to acknowledge the same! Then the Kitten has one the battle. Anyways now, it's time for an amazing twist and this cliffhanger is having me restless! So plss do update AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!

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SIMI

@simsen23

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#804

Nimmi..😊

Superb chapter. Maddy is amazing.

Ya sanskar's plan was insane.. But it worked..

He accepted that he was the murderer,but after grabbing all attention to the shadow player...yuhu Go man...

The game is more dirty now...

Ram prashad and his friend messed up with the wrong person..

Now its time to pay

Apte is still doubtful about Gabriel.. That's good...

Maddy and his meeting was planned by sanskar.so heay play an important role in this..and most probably Gabriel's second stage includes Apte.

Family of Maddy..He loves swasan a lot.that was superb.He is crazy and funny ,but he Can take risk for them...lovely man

Swara loves him so much .and expresses again and again..

But still he is not reciprocating ...he is happy to hear that she loves him but not expressing it...this guy is thinking that he can change the destiny... Nays..seems like he has to sleep in that pink room with Disney princess wallpaper for his entire life.😆

Waiting for the next update

Love

Simi

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TRPS

@TRPS

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#805

Nimmi! 🤗
My God!!!! What a plan , Gaby boy!!!!! sane or insane, whatever be it, you nailed it!
here,
"Maddy felt sheer pride in his elder
brother and his mind of a Devil.
Maybe Maddy should try for insane
too. He already is imbibing crazy
streaks from his family; his friend
Shona and brother Sanskaar."
I can imagine how much pride Maddy would be feeling after plan being successful! 😃 😃 (me too feeling the same, all thanks to your awesome writing! 😉 )
pat on the back Gaby boy!
err! well done Maddy too! (he never forgets to take credit of Sanskaar' plans. 🤣 ) and monologues of Maddy were awesome Nimmi! and hilarious too. 🤣
and the conversation between family!!!! 😆 More to this plan!! stage 2 and I guess, there will be stage 3 also!! 😳 and I believe, Gaby has a plan to come out clean from this mess! :)
and I just love this line , Nimmi!
"Every time Kitten says she loves him;
this Angel feels like he is flying."
so, heart-soothing it sounds! 😊

and forgot to mention in previous comment that this line where Gaby acknowledges "her being wind beneath his wings" was so good! 😊
Terrific writing Nimmi! and eagerly waiting for the next one! 😊
PS- I have stopped thinking for some time about Gaby's acceptance of his love for his kitten. :P

Edited by TRPS - 10 years ago

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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#806

No words to tell

How awesome the update is

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950660

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#807

Superb chapter in once again !!

Maddy he is the hero this time !! Loved this character !!

Waiting for ur next update n the surprise person :))

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#808

What an amazingly insane plan was that.
Gabriel turned the tables on the shadow boxer and how. Grt man.
Nimmi u r really grt to think of such a solution. Hats off to u.
Nd do publish our Angel story. I wld love to have a copy.
Coming back to story, whose is the new entry nw?
Plz continue soon

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jess_27

@jess_27

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#809

wondeful update...

the Sanskar within Gabriel is a bigger player, and he played his move damn well... he took the traitor by surprise, and his trick was absolutely bang on...

sanskar says that he cant love swara the way she does, but within his own heart, i feel the infinite love he has for her.. he says he will write the end of this story, not destiny, and i wish its a happy one..

swara's love is so unconditional, and she is by his side in any situation..

and the bond between maddy and his elder brother is awesome.. they are a family, and are together in thick and thin..

nimmiii... i have become your fan... i stock the forum everyday, to make sure that i dont miss out on your update...

waiting for next chapter...

love

Jessica