FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149) - Page 84

I am a real big fan of ur ff...infact Angel is my fav of all fan fictions over the internet...i must say hats off to ur writing and creativity👏

Well, this is for the first time i m commenting on your ff as i joined IF two days back just so that i could read Angel... I had been a regular reader of Angel till part 27 but then due to some reasons, i lost track of it...after hunting for it for over 2 months i finally came to know about you posting it here ( didnt know about it earlier) and so i created an IF account and after looking for Angel for hours i finally found the updates and crazy it may sound, i read parts 28-62 in one single night...yeah maybe that defines how very much obsessed i am with this ff of yours

Now back to your writing, i must say that you r really an excellent writer...👏👏 i really fell in love with the character of Gabriel since the initial parts... he literally became my favourite fictional character replacing Edward (from the Twilight saga) and Igor (from The Winner Stands Alone) ...(yeah im a real big reading freak)

Since the two days i have signed in IF, i have been waiting for the update in my email and whenever i get a mail related to the same, i feel myself grinning from side to side...😃😃 every line u write is soo perfect...i think u should carry forward this talent of yours...

Before you started this chap, u declared that this ff will only go on till chap 76 including epilouge...well, im seriously crying now...😭😭 i seriously wanted to read this forever...but anyways, a really want to appreciate your skills whole heartedly...KEEP IT UP DEAR😛

sanskar knows his father and knows him too well

RP he is true evil and too prepared

father and son meeting

it indeed took sanskar few words to convince his innocence to his father

both realized the trick played on Gabriel

and both realized the danger

rana gave his life for sanskar

saved him

the way sanskar wept and begged indeed described hos immense love for his father

waiting for the rage of sanskar

thanks for pm

ritika

interesting

poor maddy no one taking his side

Sanskar at the mourning

apte saw him

but even realized that something is not right

durgaprasad requested entire underworld to hunt for sanskar

waiting to see what next

Awesomely written

Thanks for the pm

Heya Nimmi🤗
Sorry for being so late.😳

You said there are 76 chapters in total. So there are like 12 chapters remaining😊. Cant say about everyone but I do get this mixed fuzzy feeling in my head whenever a good book/story is close to its end.😔

But really a big Thanks for writing such an amazing story Nimmi. 😃

Regardless of all other things, Apte and Durgaprasad do share a very good bond⭐️. Damu is a cute nickname😆. I just loved their conversation. Indeed they were both playing each others devil's advocate.

I am so glad that Apte shared all the suspicions to his Saabji.😃 It is good that Durgaprasad now finally considers the fact that Gabriel didn't kill his son and moreover the fact that he would not even dream to harm Rana . And above all they were feeling guilty of targeting a completely innocent man.😊

You did joined few broken ends in this chapter. Especially Durgaprasad point of view. I did mentioned previously that I didn't really understood Durgaprasad beleiving the news that Sanskaar killed Rana, his very own father and mentor. As Durgaprasad was Rana's close friends he must be knowing about the relation that these bith share😕. So yeah you cleared that whole point.😃

Sanskaar is just brilliant and moreover a very great perfectionist⭐️. He didn't tell Maddy about hidden msg to carry out his plan perfectley without a hitch. That secret message thing was very just brilliant.👏 Sanskaar is not an all muscle guy, he is terrifically brainy too.😃 Its just one of the many things that set apart Sanskaar/Gabriel/devil/angel from others.

I am so happy that the Dammu-Sabbji duo caught on the hidden message sent by Gabriel and succesfully decoded it.😳

Maddy is so Maddy-a perfect goofball😆. Loved the funny banter between the bro duo- Sanky and Maddy. Some parts of their conversation were really hilarious. Kitten, maddy and Sanskaar are the best trio ever.⭐️

I really didn't expected Apte to be the secret visitor😲. He was truly apologetic for the whole situation. How perfectly they joined all the missing dots. 😊Poor Swara and Maddy were so shocked by the whole scenario. 😆

So now Durgaprasad, the underground god himself is involved in the investigation.😃

Ramprasad and this secret guy are in a big big trouble😉. Sanskaar just turned the whole situation around and broke down almost all the defences of the other side. This whole situation somewhat reminds me of chess. The whole game/situation just changed with a brilliant move played by Sanskaar.

But I don't think finding about Ram Prasad is easily possible🤔. He must also have few dirty tricks up in his sleeves😳. I just want him to suffer terribly for all the crimes he commited. Call me sadistic, but I was feeling very happy by reading how scared was he in the previous chapter.😆

Thanks for this wonderful chapter. I really enjoyed reading it.😃

And you know I am waiting eagerly for the next one.😳

Take care😃
Lots of love🤗

P.S.- Hope your swatch inbox abhiyaan becomes a success😃😆

P.P.S- Do we have any nick names for Durgaprasad and Ramprasad.🤓 They have too long names.😆

It is a awesome update.

Really loved the conversation between apte and Durgaprasad. They find the hidden message from the words.

The observation of apte was also nice.

I also really excited to know about the new guest in the house of sanskar, who sanskar addressed him as a person they can trust.

Apte is a genius. And they will find the real traitor in the group.

Maddy was also nice with his nature.

Waiting for your next update