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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#841

finished reading last 3 chapters amazing as always why why why??????? u killed Sanskar's Baba 😭that was sad so sad i loved his character I really wanted him to meet Shona but "sigh" cant say much poor Sanskar he was so broken but Swara is there to support him and as he says she is the wind under his wings and he is till on delusional mode and finally Apte realises there is more to the story then what meets the eyes hope he will try to investigate now before jumping to the gun

Maddy was a sweetheart as always and Sanskars plan was really insane but it did worked

P.S. in initial chapters when Gabby boy slept in pink room on tiny bed with winnie the pooh cover covering as also mentioned by him in that recorder of Maddy u also mentioned it would be someone else who would see him like that not Bozo hope it's Maddy😈 it would be fun to read his reaction🤣 or even better let Swara fulfill her threat then let him see Gabby boy 🤣

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#842

hey dear may it be 71th or 79th or the 100 chapter..

we will all love to read it...

so write as much chapters as you can...

Never get tired of reading...

Taking about the update...

woww...

hidden message...

finally dp is truely the god father who know how to use brains...

they code it.. and apte dp and trio is together hunting for the traitor...

amazing...

poor maddy...

and swara trying hard to cope up with the story and she managed well...

Intelligent girl...

loved it...

continue soon..

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Teddy94

@Teddy94

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#843

Wow.. Loved the update 😊
Apte n dp r on the side of Gabriel
Hope tht they vl catch rp soon
Missed sanskar n kitten scenes
Thanks for the pm 😊

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SIMI

@simsen23

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#844

Nimmi...

Unresed on page 123..😊

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 10 years ago

#845

Res ... Stalking mode activated

I was just writing my detailed comment and was about to unres the previous chapter and what do i see a new chapter... So Unres have to wait... i need to read this first . Love ya Nimmi and you are the sweetest since i didnt think you would update today🤗

Unres Nimmi,

Okay last Chapter i told you i just want my trio alive but this update i am liking Apte more so i just want him to stay alive too😉. Poor Maddy hope his over frinedliness doesnt make Apte too angry🤣.

Sanksar trusting Shona with Mav after the last event speaks volume about how far this two have come, first it was just an one sided adoration from Mav but now this two are really brother in all sense😎. I love it whenever Mav thinks of Shona and Sanskar has family .Too him they are the closest family. How can anyone not love this guy.

Apte stepped in to protect Swara. Shona trusts him since Angel trusts him. I love how there was hesistation from Gabriel side which is totally understandable. He can trust him with his life but not shona that too precious to gamble with😳... But no one can doubt Apte love for his Babu and his heartfelt promise that he would protect her.

Loved how both Mav and Sanskar asked quite a few times if Swara was okay with it before leaving . Mav would stay with his best friend then hunting. Aww he is so sweet❤️.

Gabreil and Mav fighting together side by side was my all time favourite but there interrogation is the highlight of this Chapter. Serious Gabriel question with Mav hilarious remarks was so good🤣. I know you are annoyed by your little brother antics Angel but we love him for those antics and hilarious remarks. 😉

Awesome update Nimmi, Do continue soon , Love ya and you are the Sweetest🤗 .

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#846

Ohres

Unres-
Oh My Magnificent Maverick!!😆😆 I'm in love with this guy. How can such a sporty guy be an assassin. I know Gabriel if for Kitten only, henceforth I'd love to borrow no scratch that, take Maddy for me. He's too good! And he agreed to take care of Swara even though he didn't want to miss the fun!!
Such a sweet guy. If not Gabriel, can't I please have Maddy for myself<3

Anyways, The SwaSan scene was too good. When he hugs her and she says come back to me, when he says where else would I go. How symbolic was that. It's Gabriel and his Kitten together forever and evaaa!! I loved it. Apte is trustworthy yeah! But Sanskaar can't risk his Swara with anyone, of course. I liked his insecurity here.

So Gabriel going Bang Bang way huh? I liked that line- Wham Bam Thank you Mam!😆 So the guy was doing ahem..ahem when our Assassin Duo enter! Poor lady. I feel so bad for her.
And then Maddy here😆😆. God! This guy killed me here, seriously. Each time he would interrupt Gabriel and then say Go ahead brother. Poor Gabriel! 😃

That slamming the table is an activity I used to do a lot in my class, you know, but with a pen. And then Maddy starts doing it on the other hand. Jeez. I was bursting with laughter here. Oh Maddy!!🤣🤣 And his continuous interruptions had me🤣ROFLING!

That threat of Gabriel to cut his private places with the knife and then Maddy's comment🤣😆Oh Jeez!! This guy is seriously gonna be the death of mine someday. Little girls in frocks and boys in shorts🤣 and that charming lady!!🤣😆

Oh God! How annoyed had Sanskaar been with Maddy. But trust me, I would have loved him instead. I do love him. Anyways, amazing update as usual and thanks you so much for the PM!
Love ya😳
Sakshi

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#847

Nimmi...🤗

I thought that you wouldn't be updating yesterday since there was no update till night. But I was so glad to see that you did update. Thank you! 😃

So Gabriel has started his hunt! Maddy! Poor guy! He really wanted to go for the hunt. But when it came to choosing between having fun and family, he chose his family. He chose to protect his Shona even if that will keep him deprived of the fun he badly wanted to have. Such a sweetheart! ❤️ But even Swara loves him to bits. So she chose to stay with Apte letting Maddy to accompany Gaby.

Loved to see the fatherly affection Apte felt for Swara. And of course, Swara trusted Sanskar's trust on him. But Sanky didn't want to trust anyone with his kitten sparing him and Maddy. But still his Kitten and Apte did manage to convince him. I'm looking forward to see a tender relation forming between Apte and Swara. The girl does evoke deep feelings within everyone she meets. She is becoming everyone's favorite!

The whole Gaby-Maddy-victim part was 🤣! Maddy! This guy will never change! And I don't want him to! 😆 He is testing the limit of Gabriel's patience. I bow down to him for his patience! Maddy dancing naked in front of Sanky! 😳

So they are one step closer to the traitor. Good going Sanky! 👍🏼

Loved the chapter Nimmi! Waiting for the next one. Thank you so much for the pm!

Lots of love, 🤗❤️

Ashi.

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#848

😲😆😲 IMAGINE MADDY DANCING NAKED IN FRONT OF GABRIEL/SANSKAAR!!!

😲 Errr...

RES:

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 10 years ago

#849

Unres on page 123 ... Whiie i said intially in previous post that i will read new chapter first before unres the previous one. it took my supreme effort to stop myself from doing so ... As i was already half way on the comment i thought i finish unres first ... So now this time i am surely off to read the new chapter .

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#850

Res for 65 and haven't unRes for 64😭

Promise (Cross my heart, hope to die) will unres for both togther and quickly

Nyna

Finally Unres😊

Chapter 64

So Gabriel's plan takes off as intended and without a hitch. He does know Durga Prasad quite well, he knew that both Durga Prasad and Apte would understand the hidden message in the oft-repeated line that Gabriel killed Lakshya for an obscene amount of money. Then he sets in motion, thesecond part in motion by calling Apte, which also paid off.

I totally agree with Maddy about being '' am one of those who read the ending of the suspense novel first'' so as to be spared ''from suspense and anxiety and all 😆😆.''(BTW - I also belong to the minor eccentric breed of readers who read the ending first - it is not that I do not have patience, I prefer to read the book a little peacefully, since I know how it ends - it also gives me chances to scream at the characters when they act rashly, trust the villains etc. Further, over the years, I can actually judge if the book would be good based on the ending - there are very few books I have found to be 'good' when the ending 'disappoints' me 😉).

Chapter 65

So Apte manages to track down the contact. (I am sure Maddy will get hurt one day - not everyone is happy with his OTT behaviour - even the tag of being Gabriel's brother might not be enough to save him, most likely it will in the hands of Gabriel himself 🤣).

The interrogation scene - in your trademark humour - somehow reminded me of the Asterix and Oblex series (Oblex is happiest when bashing the roman soldiers and is mightily disappointed that none of those soldiers put up much of a fight). Of course instead of good cop / bad cop we had cold devil/humourous imp which was scary in its own way.

(Maddy dancing naked...🤣🤣🤣.you cannot afford to give your readers nightmares😈

As usual, simply loved the whole thing. And now the question of prime importance! When is the next update?😃

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 10 years ago