FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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jasw

@jasw

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Oh Gosh! So many What The .. moments, Nimmi! 😆

So Gaby has made peace with his name Sanskar but honestly I am enjoying this story more with Gaby and his Kitten. "Sanskar" is losing his enchantment and lustre in my mind going by the current engagement with first love track.. actually it started with previous MU track!

Loved how both of them crashed together with their faces few inches apart! How the lip-thumb-lip indirect kiss happened!😳 I thought Swara will be more affected in that scene 😆 but it was our dear Gaby!😳 And the back hug ... my dil goes hmmm! 😊

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Tamanna Khan

@TamyLuvsWahi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

hey...sorry was so busy reading ur beautiful story called Angel didn't notice ur name hope u wont mind my name is Tamanna u can call me tamy that's what frndz call me 😳 anyway coming back to ur story damn it's amazing awesome gorgeous ❤️ really 34 chapters i read all of them in one go different kind of story line but amazing 😃 update soon i'll be waiting...😉😛

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Part 35

What the😲😲 wait ..Ram Prasad shooted laksh ..why ???..gosh nimmi that was one hell of the description you gave , I can imagine each and every move of gaby.. its like story unfolding just before my eyes

,.though I missed angel's Kitten ..awesome girl👏

Part 34 & 33

What Can I say, I absolutely love the equation b/w angel and his kitten, she topping his priority list and when swara sprained her leg , I thought now he will scoop her in his arms . but gaby ka style is hatke na 😆😆, swara trying save him from falling off stool,😆 and whoa did I forget to mention spoon feeding and that not so but very intimate act by gaby😳😳 and that back hug gives me feels like in the SR ,swasan back hug and his promise ..hayee both in process of falling hard for each other...cant wait for confession though guessing its long way to go..when you said okKadu ..bhoomika mahesh ..I drifted to imagine gaby and angel in that airport scene ..lol😆

and like always I never get tired of saying what an awesome writer you are⭐️darlin🤗

waiting for the next part😊

love

lucky😊

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SIMI

@simsen23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Nimmi...
Wow bro...it was just mindblowing(really blew my mind) 😊
The action packed chapter was awesome
the way gaby hunt his enemies ,the scuba dive,the wire cut,moving his head around neck...
Full of style as u said like a true ace 😊
the shoot in gas pipe...
I was enjoying the ride...amazing
then the fight with laksh
but at the end the son inside gaby paid his respect to his father. 😊
there was sanskar inside the devil,the gabriel
but again ram prashad has shown his true colour...
He always want to kill laksh...(against saabji..he was the main culprit)
I am waiting for saabji's reaction (but am confident that he knows sanskar cant kill laksh)
And ya waiting for my kitten's expression,concern and care for her Angle 😊
waiting for next ride ...
Love
simi 😊

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Ananna Islam

@M_Annu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

OMG!! It was thrilling...i just stayed back at last..Ram shot laksh..his lovely laksh..i think sanskar is ram's son..thats why sanskar spared laksh's life because he know his father ram loved his niece..but ram shot laksh..why ??

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

That was beyond shocking, so Ram isn't a beloved uncle huh? He is now trying to make G and Durga enemies by showcasing that it was G who shot Lakshya. What a plan...indeed I wondered why this man was helping Lakshya in his stupid plans, making a mockery of his own wit, but now I know, it was a bigger plan...a better plan. He was using everyone around him.

Now the real game would begin.

Continue soon!

lots of love,

sakura

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Pearl

@pearl.16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

OMG !!! A cliffhanger !!!

I so much want to know what is gonna happen or otherwise I will die !!!

Please update soon...

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anuja

@princess2791

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Awesome update. What a wonderful chapter it is. Action pack i m under in full of gabriels spell. Why did lakshas beloved uncle shoot him. What he is thinking. Please update soon next part. Thanks for pm. Take care. Update soon please. Waiting.

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

What the hell? What was the ending about?
I liked the whole thing. Cld visualise it. Gabriel scuba diving, cutting off the wires, overcoming the obstacles nd all.
But I am not able to reason out RP' S act. Why?
U left at a cliff hanger.
Update soon dear

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hrni

@hrni

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

i hope gaby or apte either of them saves laksh's life... 😲 waise i thought yy ramu wants laksh to take over dp's place yy isn't he trying to grab that for himself... 😡 ...but awesome strategy loved sanskar for sparing laksh's life at same time showing him mirror his true reflection that was v.much required ... 👏

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