Nimmi...🤗
Awesome update as usual dear! 👏 But missed Swara badly throughout the chapter. 😔
So the Sanskar inside Gabriel finally let Laksh free. He let him live. I'm happy that his human side won over the devil inside him!
The action sequence was splendid. You are excellent at it. You know that, right? I won't go into the details. Because I will fall short of praises for you. I never really liked action genre. But you made me love it! So all the credit goes to you!
Ramprasad shot Lucky??! That totally knocked me off! Never once did I see that coming. But yeah, I did wonder why he was supporting all those dull-witted plans of Lucky. Now I got an answer. But, to be honest, I felt bad for Lucky. Betrayal from your loved one hurts far more deeply than any physical wound would. So I did feel bad for him. My heart ached for the first time for him in this story.
Continue soon dear. Will be waiting! Thanks for the pm.
Lots of love,
Ashi.
Edited by Cinderella3 - 10 years ago