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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Wohooo I'm officially in love with this story now, I dont think I could go without reading your daily updates.. Dear God these were some updates you had written.. Firstly I'm extremely sorry for not writing my feedback cz I had been busy like crazy with guests flocking at my place every now and then..
Okay so coming back to the chapters they were pure entertainment.. So well written so beautifully written must say.. I'm loving this equation between Gabriel and Swara day by day.. I so love it when Gabriel looks after Swara like she is his one and only and the selfless care which Swara gives..

I loved Gabriel's selfless dedication towards Swara, he left his avenging moment for Swara, just shows how much of a passionate single minded lover Gabriel would be.. And Swara's selflessness is something I'm coming to adore.. Inspite of her broken hand and leg she ran to his rescue when he was falling off the stool..

Then the amazing back hug awwweee I went weak in my knees picturizing Swara and Gabriel in the back hug.. I felt so so happy reading that portion and Gabriel's parting promise that he would come back to her eventually.. Just loved it..

And what action you've portrayed Gabriel perfect to the T.. Complete hero style action that man has done.. Loved loved loved the whole action sequence.. Then comes the surprise elements Gabriel spared Laksh and why that is the biggest mystery.. And Ram Prasad shot Laksh fish beyond belief that was can't wait to read the next update update soon Nimmi..

Love,
Kashmi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
wow... great chapter...
so the game is still on... Now DP will be behind Gabriel for killing his son...
Ram prasad was a very smart hidden player...

completely hooked...
do continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Awesome..
RP shot Lucky???
Why!!

Does he hates his brother DP??
or he wants to be the king??
or does he want to make DP against Gabriel??

Who is Sanskar/Gabriel's BABA???

Continue soon...
Thank u for the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
beautiful...fantastic...amazing
loved the way you described it in detail. it was like watching an action packed movie. so ram prasad killed his nephew. i guess that is why he planned the entire thing. he is going to make DP weak now. make him believe gabriel hit laksh. and while they fight each other, try to take over the empire. DP will be a weak man with Laksh's death. i wonder if RP always planned for this...destruction of DP. the question is since when, was it when DP announced Gabriel as the successor or was it long before when DP destroyed RP's life and stopped him from having his position or may be his happiness.

he never did love laksh did he. he hated him but he brainwashed laksh. made him incapable of taking over with pampering. was he kept away from his love and his child?

i am speculating a lot a lot here...most i am sure are likely to miss the mark...

but amazing part and amazing writing 👏 👏 👏
Edited by foresight - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Hi Nimmi, sorry for the late comment , last update shocked me that i decide to comment later😆

The whole action packed entry of Gabriel into the Fortress created to protect Laksh was awesome, this guy surely plans way ahead. Poor guys who ever signed up for Lakshya security🤣


Lakshya vs Gabreil was so good, i would have enjoyed it much more hadnt Lakshyaji in the show turned to be a good brother for now😆. But everyone of us can only think about the ending of your RP killed Lakshya, well i should have guessed it but nope i didnt .😆. That was an awesome twist dear👏


Once i finished reading it all i did was think about Angel, so yeah as i said it did take my mind of the show. What will be DP reaction, what going to happen to our temporary roommates, so much questions on my mind dear, Do update soon.


Edited by NitaMikealson - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY?!
OH STUPID RAMPRASAD! HELL NO!
OH how I wish laksh should survive. Its not.. WTH!! What happened.?! Seems like Durgaprasad will not believe Gabreil. Did Ram needed any position or what?! Did he used Laksh for it?! He a big crap! Hate U. Oh my Gabreil again proved he is a such a MANH!! Proud of U !! Is Ramprasad trying to defame Gabreil by claiming of laksh death to Durgaprasad and Baba. Oh NO.! Hop Baba wont believe him! Seems everthing changed upside down! What just happened.?!!
BTW this was an POWERPACKED update.! just BREATHTAKING! Fight wer just above xpectation! Discribed every penny thing so well.🤗🤗.It was damn INTERESTING! Dont take away laksh Easily. I mean he shud know truth and only Gabreil has right to it! Ram U😡..
Now I hav to wait for another 24hour to catch another update😒. plz plz update soon. Hey Nimmi dont even forget to update tomarrow plz plz! JustAMAZING!
LOb Yah! TC.. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Kk now i got the entire picture sanskar can't be the son of rp coz had he been rp wouldn't have ploted against gaby n would have been the happiest when dp asked gaby to take over him...so since the v.beginning e1 before the arrival of gaby rp was planning against laksh...he purposely over pampered him n understood his weak links and used it time and again...he created communication gap between dp and laksh n made laksh dependent on him for smallest of things...he knew his nephew well that's yy he narrated gaby's story in such a way to evoke laksh's insecure nerve n turned him revengeful against gaby...he very well knew dp is gonna hand over his authority to gaby in that meeting that's yy he took laksh along with him...n supported laksh in front of everyone so that know one could read his intentions...later on when laksh wanted to kill gaby it was rp who supported him even after repeated pleadings and warnings of apte...later on when on the cruise laksh wanted to kill gaby when gaby was trapped by them though apte tried to make laksh understand but it was rp again who supported laksh not out of love but coz he knew very well laksh won't be able to kill gaby he knew either gaby will escape or he will kill laksh ...he knew if gaby escapes then he will make sure that he will kill laksh when he returns n that will turn dp against gaby n then for sure rp will be the next successor...So rp's strategy is v.clear now he wanted to kill 2 birds with one stone...He knew gaby will kill laksh n that will make dp against gaby n also he knew in the process of saving laksh apte won't survive n that Will make dp loose his loyal guard n he will fall prey to rp so his field will be clear in either ways...superb so rp is the master mind in this entire scheming he is the one who will be benefited the most...that's yy while rescuing laksh he v.smartly escaped death n left laksh all alone in front of the lion...n v.cleverly saved himself... 👏 😆 superb mindblowing... 😃
Edited by hrni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
WOWW!!

No words for you Nimmi!!!!!
You r such an outstanding writer, the way you write action scenes are amazing!!!!👏 👏 👏

The fight between Sanskaar and Laksh was awesome, and the Sanskaar in our Gabriel showed his goodness by forgiving him and let him live.. ⭐️

Ram Prasad Maheshwari 😡 showed what he really intended to do, he always pretended to love Lucky but I think he never did, how can you kill someone you claim to love...

Hope that Durga Prasad Maheshwari doesn't believe that Gabriel did that...
May be that's what Ram wanted to do, create a misunderstanding between Saabji and Gabriel as he always put him first than his family...😡

Missed his Kitten and Swasan ❤️but still loved it!!

Continue soon...

Thanks for the pm...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
omg that was just thrilling but its double shock at the change of events with gaby sparing laksh's life and ram's changed behaviour/betrayal. eager to read the next chapter nw..cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Nimmie
Terrific update I must say. Just like watching a film. You deserves a round of applause for this update.👏👏.

I thought Laksh got lucky but no destiny chose something else for him.Happy to see the old Sanskaar,baba' s son in Gabby. Ram Prasad killed Laksh. How will DP react now? Kitten will be happy I think.
Waiting for the next update Nimmie🤗

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