FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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jasw

@jasw

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

"Stop taking deep breath. You will pass out of sheer oxygen overload soon." 😆😆😆

Awesome Nimmi! So the villain is becoming hero! Could not kill the man because of Swara! Gave Swara's phone call priority over the bullet! Picked up the lady and not the potato sack! (Though I liked the potato sack carrying mode too 😉). Having delicate thoughts! Oh Gaby, you will definitely pass out of sheer love overload soon! 😃

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prathiksha

@prathi3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

wow kya baath hai
love u swt heart
keep updating

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hrni

@hrni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Awesome...hope dp reaches him fast n he ends up sparing laksh's life n also swara makes him leave this profession... 😆 👏

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SIMI

@simsen23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Nimmi... 😊
it was a treat...
Wow swasan scenes were so romantic..
Swara saving sanskar from falling...the closeup..their monolouges...awww 😊
physical tension between them is described perfectly as natural as possible...
Swara is falling for the sanskar inside gabriel.. 😳
And sanskar inside gabriel has already fallen for his kitten
the care for her ,feeding her is so amusing
and the beutiful indirect kiss...awww chooo cute and hot.. 😳
Then the back hug...wow..lovely
i hope gabriel will protect swara's sanskar ...and his kitten will be safe too 😊
waiting for your next update
love
simi 😊

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kamila.

@Seriously.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Machi... 🤗 FANTABULOUS UPDATE...
Loved it...ah ha...swasans...happening...( Eee...my mouth)

Wobble stool...no one use it right...but... I'm.like Gaby...its on mind control...try it re...

First romance awww...goddd...he distracted himself from this web...

Missed you...

Gaby on level 3...there may be a surprise waiting for...him...

Lol...kamila...

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Anglaise

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Nimmie🤗🤗
Aww!❤️ Such an Amazing Update! AWW!! It was too sweet.. Loving this small pace throughout. Oh god It was just Awesome! Loved swaras concern. poor lady broked up her hand too.. Dont worry kiddo ur Man is on d way! Aww how he helped her eating.. And those lil gestures! . Aww Im loving d fighing between hus heart and Brain! lol. Im with his heart!❤️😆. Hmm seems Sanskar back to action Gabreil. Hop he ll b fine! And swara alone.! Hpe evrythn ll go well. oh dear Nimmo cant wait. ! And the last backhug❤️.That was amazing! Ik IK he cant push her back😆. Their was pure concern between dem. Gabreil s such a gentleman!😆. hmm cant guess Whats cooking in ur mind lady😆. Plz Update soon.Lob yah! Oh god what happens next??!! is anythin fishy over here!!!
Nimmo Awesome Update dear! Loved It! TC😳🤗

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

omg...so cute...that scene was so intimate...loved it...i cant wait for laksh fear now and sanskar's action.

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TRPS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Nimmi! 🤗 and yeah, Sanskaar is slowly mingling in Gaby's psych.
Gaby and kitten!! they both are so caring for each other! and now-a-days started to notice so keenly. Ahmm...
you are right Swara, barring the assassin part, he is perfect companion of life. and you also a darling soul.
Ahha! first feeding Swara and then that gesture of Gaby, wiping off that speck from her mouth then sucking it from his thumb.. So intimate and intense!!
for me, it was the ending paras which stole the show. quite emotional it was in the end.
And have you heard the song " Main laut aaoongaa"!!! situation reminded me of that song . Gaby's fur Ball and hug made the scene so emotional!
Nice update Nimmi and continue soon. 😊
by the way, seems like Gaby loves to give Swara sweet names! Kitten ,kiddo ,Sunshine, whats next!!
and right now! Swara is on Angle *so sweet*. let's see if she name him more in future!

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anuja

@princess2791

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

hello dear. first congrats on new thread. read all three parts in one go. love the way feelings of swara and sanskar aka our gabriels changeing slowely for each other. keep updateing. waiting for next update. take care. thanks for pm.

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Ayushi Saxena

@ay2703

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Awww do sanskar fed swara...both of them are falling deeply Fir each other and the last part was the best. I have a feeling something bad will happen now maybe . but I hope not.

Update soon...

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