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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: soumi93
It was awesome...i am imagining them in their blue room with only some dimlights are on...this is too cool and intensely romantic...too good

Glad u like it...may be in last part your imagination can be reality...lets wait till last part.

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: pearl.16
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Brilliant, please do continue soon...😊</font>

thanks dear...will try to post next part soon..

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Esha

@_Esha_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Amazing Mukta 👏
I loved sanskar's behaviour towards his wife and his family respectively
😆
Its sad to read about swara's condition
😭
Sujata has turned into a vamp now
😡
I hate Ragini 😡
Laksh will remain laksh 😲
Mukta do update it soon dear 😳
- EsHa 😃

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divya

@princydivya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Superb
Nice to see sanskaar care
Please update soonnn

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mridulakrishnan

@mridulakrishnan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

emotional update dear..loved to see sanskar's care...&& when u r updating hthe next chapter...pls jaldi update karona ...

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1025621

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Nice work hope to have earlier update than last time. I must say u have a great grip on your writting. You wrote it very beautifully and its so touchy and emotional. Keep writing more stories.
update more soon 😊

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Goldie

@Goldie93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Awsum yaar..loved the Concept..continue soon plzzz

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: eshat.k
Amazing Mukta 👏
I loved sanskar's behaviour towards his wife and his family respectively
😆
Its sad to read about swara's condition
😭
Sujata has turned into a vamp now
😡
I hate Ragini 😡
Laksh will remain laksh 😲
Mukta do update it soon dear 😳
- EsHa 😃

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Snow crystle

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Thanks esha..
glad u like it ...
I was missing your feedback from long time...u'r reply on my os left me with so much happiness...
hope to receive your lovely words on mine work...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Hey Mukta 😊

A very interesting and tantalizing 2nd part.

Firstly, it was so touching seeing Sanskaar feeling so much pain seeing Swara hurt. The way he took care of her; and got furious at his family for treating her this way, was awesome.

So there seems to be some bad memory in Swara's past, that has made her completely break down at this cruel treatment from Annapurna and Sujata? What was the nightmare she was experiencing, when she was saying "Ma, let her go..."

Very interesting twist and you have maintained the pace and suspense well.

Hope the doctor is able to guide Sanskaar properly on what is troubling Swara and how to bring her out of it. 😊 And also dearly hope that the MM folks realize how conniving and deceitful Ragini is, and that she has framed Swara.

Look forward to chapter 3 dear!