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Saumya

@Sparklle801

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

Very nice concept and good start pm me if possible

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ritika52

@ritika52

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

its a vry nice start...plz continue...

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archana

@sarchanu

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

superb start

please update soon. waiting to see sanskar's reaction

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Saumya

@Saumya2102

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Cliffhanger! 😡!! Update soon and I want PMs!!

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome start!

You've described the intensity of Swara's pain & humiliation excellently.

Nice to see her acknowledging her need for Sanskaar. 😳

Her Sanskaar was there to catch her, like always.

Continue soon!

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Nice..pm me when u next update 😊

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928730

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

hi. Ur writing is beautiful nd is ry compelling.i wont say i loved the story coz i dnt like to see a girl waiting for her knight in shinning armour to defend nd protecr her while taking all the crap thrown at her...i love strong female characters nd i didnt like how swara was looking for sanskaar for her defence...how can she stay mute whn her character is being assasinated ?? I knw thr is logic b'hind she was betrayed by evr1 she loved etc..bt this doesnt sit well with me...apart frm that kudos to you for writing this piece... Im sorry for my rant. Sorry yet again if ur offended|:)

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cutegurlx

@cutegurlx

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

Nice concept
plzzz update soon
want to see what sanskaar gonna do

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Vianna

@BookWormV

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow! I love your concept. That was a very emotional Part 1. Really really liked it. Looking forward to reading more. Did not want this part to come to an end so soon.
Brilliantly written.
Please update soon. :)

-V