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Avneet kaur

@avihothi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Nice update.

Plzzz pm me about update.

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: rayab_rajpoot
Really nice start... love to have more
update soon.

Thanks for ur feedback

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: prerulalli
now this is a master piece😃

Thanks dear...welcome to the forum...
u can check mine completed work...link in the signature ..let me know your take on it .

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: avihothi
Nice update.
Plzzz pm me about update.

thanks dear...will pm u from next time..

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: gayu6
Felt very sad for swara😭 Everyone s blaming her and swara atlash needs him his love his support. So she realised. Hate ragini. Pls continue soon

Thanks for your feedback dear!

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1025621

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: muktai

Thanks for ur feedback

its my pleasure...
Eagarly waiting for more
i m sending u a buddy request plz add me and plz pm me for the next part.

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Nice..

Too much drama..

Sujata slaps swara!!!

Continue soon..

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Very interesting ,loved it a lot dear👏👏👏

Pls continue soon😃😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Hey Mukta

This was a wonderful first part. Felt so very bad for Swara, undergoing so much of humiliation and contempt from Annapurna and Sujata. She was trying to explain the truth, but no one was willing to listen to her. It was so harsh, and the way Sujata actually held her arm hurtfully tight and even slapped her, was heart rending.

The most touching part of the chapter, was where Swara felt partly relieved that Sanskaar was not present, so that he didn't have to face any humiliation because of her; but another part of her was ardently craving his presence. She was craving his support and his unconditional love. Very nicely described.

And just when she falls in a faint, Sanskaar comes in time to protect and shield her, as he always does. 😊

Waiting for the next parts, Mukta. 🤗 🤗 This is as interesting and tantalizing as the other 2 works of yours I've read: Its your right, and New Beginning. I liked them a lot, too.

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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1025621

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Waiting
waiting
waiting
update more soon plz

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