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Originally posted by: Tapathi

Very nice...tochy...😭

Thanks...glad you like..

Originally posted by: rayab_rajpoot

its my pleasure...
Eagarly waiting for more
i m sending u a buddy request plz add me and plz pm me for the next part.

Thanks for waiting dear...
added u and will send pm from next time..

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Nice..

Too much drama..

Sujata slaps swara!!!

Continue soon..

Yes too much...but thats what will happen when sujata is there...
glad u find it intresting

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

<font size="2">Hey Mukta

This was a wonderful first part. Felt so very bad for Swara, undergoing so much of humiliation and contempt from Annapurna and Sujata. She was trying to explain the truth, but no one was willing to listen to her. It was so harsh, and the way Sujata actually held her arm hurtfully tight and even slapped her, was heart rending.

The most touching part of the chapter, was where <font size="2">Swara felt partly relieved that Sanskaar was not present, so that he
didn't have to face any humiliation because of her; but another part of her was ardently craving his presence. She was craving his support and his
unconditional love. Very nicely described.

And just when she falls in a faint, Sanskaar comes in time to protect and shield her, as he always does. 😊

Waiting for the next parts, Mukta. 🤗 🤗 This is as interesting and tantalizing as the other 2 works of yours I've read: Its your right, and New Beginning. I liked them a lot, too.

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Thank you so much viji...your feedback means alot...
Sorry for replying late..
Coming to your reply thank you once again if u feels this was good and mine other work too...That means alot...

Yes what sujata did was extremely hurtful...but that's what sujata is sometimes keep her rational mind far away and acts impulsively...but her son is there for swara...

Swara has started feeling for him but yet unaware of that on one part she was relieved that he didn't face any humiliation bcoz of her and at another side she wanted him to hold her...

At the end Sanskar had to come how can he stay away when his mate needs him???
That's how our sanskar is...
I'm posting next part now and by the end of this weak I'll try to complete this...
thank you so much once again for your lovely words..
- mukta

Superb update..beautifully written 👍🏼

Originally posted by: sneharay

Superb update..beautifully written 👍🏼

thanks dear..

amazing plz continue soon waiting for next part

It was awesome...i am imagining them in their blue room with only some dimlights are on...this is too cool and intensely romantic...too good

Originally posted by: nikhathfatima

amazing plz continue soon waiting for next part

thanks dear...will try to post next part soon..