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Superb start dr...

awesome start dear..very touching update...do continue and pls pm me also...

Originally posted by: sameer24

hi. Ur writing is beautiful nd is ry compelling.i wont say i loved the story coz i dnt like to see a girl waiting for her knight in shinning armour to defend nd protecr her while taking all the crap thrown at her...i love strong female characters nd i didnt like how swara was looking for sanskaar for her defence...how can she stay mute whn her character is being assasinated ?? I knw thr is logic b'hind she was betrayed by evr1 she loved etc..bt this doesnt sit well with me...apart frm that kudos to you for writing this piece... Im sorry for my rant. Sorry yet again if ur offended|:)

Hi...Thanks for your honest opinion..U don't have to be sorry for anything...
I agree to you that girls should be independent , they should stand for their self respect...
Here as u said there was logic behind I will like to tell u my take behind her behaviour...Till end she was not wishing for his presence...she didn't replied to anything bcoz she was shocked...her senses were numb bcoz of all pain she endured till now ...
At the end she wanted him but it was in her subconscious mind ...
She is very strong character u will see as the story progressed there was something which is responsible for her current state...
This was my point of view on this...
Once again thank you for such a wonderful comment..
If u wish u can go through my completed work...link is in my signature

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Wow! I love your concept. That was a very emotional Part 1. Really really liked it. Looking forward to reading more. Did not want this part to come to an end so soon.
Brilliantly written.
Please update soon. :)

-V

Thank you so much dear for your wonderful reply..Next part will be up till friday

Originally posted by: -Ros-

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Awesome start!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">You've described the intensity of Swara's pain &humiliationexcellently.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Nice to see her acknowledging her need for Sanskaar.😳</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Her Sanskaar was there to catch her, like always.
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Continue soon!</font>

Thank you so much dear...I was actually waiting for your feedback ...It's really motivating...You have always been the appreciating and encouraging...Thank u!
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mukta

Originally posted by: mridulakrishnan

awesome start dear..very touching update...do continue and pls pm me also...

Thank you so much dear...I'm glad u liked it...U will receive Pm from next update...If u like u can read mine completed work...link is in signature

Really nice start... love to have more
update soon.

Felt very sad for swara😭 Everyone s blaming her and swara atlash needs him his love his support. So she realised. Hate ragini. Pls continue soon

now this is a master piece 😃

Originally posted by: muktai

Hi...Thanks for your honest opinion..U don't have to be sorry for anything...
I agree to you that girls should be independent , they should stand for their self respect...
Here as u said there was logic behind I will like to tell u my take behind her behaviour...Till end she was not wishing for his presence...she didn't replied to anything bcoz she was shocked...her senses were numb bcoz of all pain she endured till now ...
At the end she wanted him but it was in her subconscious mind ...
She is very strong character u will see as the story progressed there was something which is responsible for her current state...
This was my point of view on this...
Once again thank you for such a wonderful comment..
If u wish u can go through my completed work...link is in my signature

thank you for clearing my doubt..now im more eager to read the story pls update soon