Winds of winter SwaSan IK era OS #8 pg 13

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.FairyDust.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey Sakura!

I've always been a silent reader. A friend of mine suggested Ice King to me and I was bowled over with the very first part that I read. I went ahead and finished IK and SQ the same day and I must say they are THE BEST works that I have read on SwaSan, THE BEST.

You've created a completely different world and I'm in love with it!

I've also read another of your works, Elixir, and that is pure magic too. <3

And coming to the Winds, I'm so loving these stories of a younger SwaSan. Especially the last 3 that you've put up. Swara and Sanskaar's relation is such a joy to read about and seems like even in those old days, what they shared had been much deeper than friendship and closer to the love they finally found in the future. <3

It's sad that they had to go through so much to finally get there, but they found their spring and that's what's important. <3

Looking forward to reading more on SwaSan from you. xoxo

- Love, Yukthi.

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chemgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Girl u made my day...read these in bed...awesome...awesome...awesome...there seems to be a strong bond between sanskaar and swara...he is very protective of her...laksh on the other hand just wants to giv her what she asks

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NITI VYAS

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Sabhi bahut khubsoorat they.par snowwhite and wampire mein sochna aur muskurana nahin chod sakti. Aur haa snowwhite ko wampire tum aur sanskasr hi bana sakte ho. Thats y luv u both.

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JIDHNYASA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

read all the 6 parts in one go..

Wow they are so nic.e..

Swasan closed friend..

Lucky always seem to have some space of his between them,..

Poor lucky..

one question why does sheksar and his family hates swara??

Loved that swara can come in mm house though she is bengali and loved by Ap...

Continue soon..

And do PM me nxt time..

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

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that was so heartbreakingly emotional. that was right after he told bade papa he won't marry shona but kavita na...he is sorry for not choosing her, yet he is stuck in her. you have put it so beautifully that she recognised his silence and also that he wasn't going to Harvard but leaving the family and also her.

you are really good at subtly putting across strong emotional pieces. wonderfully done!!

👏 👏 👏

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Very poignant, Saku...so achingly, heartbreakingly poignant. A very moving piece.

I wonder though, whether Sanskaar realized what Swara was feeling for him. Their connection right through the winds of winter mini series you've given us, seems so very strong, so redolent of that indefinable "something more" than friendship. Wonder why Sanskaar chose Kavita at all...😕

As I understood this OS, it's set at the time when Sanskaar is thinking of leaving home to be with Kavita...just before the cataclysm that will start his journey into becoming the IK...

It speaks so much of his connection with Swara, that he wanted to call her, ask her forgiveness for leaving her, asking her to call home often and take care of Uttara...and 🤢 even Lakshya...

I wish he'd chosen her. 😉 But then we wouldn't have got IK and SQ, so I guess his decision was for the best at the time...😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Very poignant, Saku...so achingly, heartbreakingly poignant. A very moving piece.
I wonder though, whether Sanskaar realized what Swara was feeling for him. Their connection right through the winds of winter mini series you've given us, seems so very strong, so redolent of that indefinable "something more" than friendship. Wonder why Sanskaar chose Kavita at all...😕

As I understood this OS, it's set at the time when Sanskaar is thinking of leaving home to be with Kavita...just before the cataclysm that will start his journey into becoming the IK...
It speaks so much of his connection with Swara, that he wanted to call her, ask her forgiveness for leaving her, asking her to call home often and take care of Uttara...and 🤢 even Lakshya...

I wish he'd chosen her. 😉 But then we wouldn't have got IK and SQ, so I guess his decision was for the best at the time...😊

Very true Viji... After I had written the fully completed FF called frost souls (Which I broke in to two parts the ice king and the snow queen later😊) Even I wondered why he did choose Kavi. But then I realized that Sanskar always was tired of the winter land, he wanted to break free. He wanted to find some different existence for himself and choosing Kavi was one step towards that goal. Had he chosen Swara in that stage as he later claimed in his latter to her at the end of SQ, that would not have been a marriage of love, but rather a deal of business which he hated to commit. I agree he was foolish not to realize that they had so much between then other than Durga Prasad's throne, but Sanskar wanted to claim that he was not a chess piece, that is why I guess he choose Kavi.

I'm glad you loved the winds...we still have one last piece left to complete.😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: foresight
that was so heartbreakingly emotional. that was right after he told bade papa he won't marry shona but kavita na...he is sorry for not choosing her, yet he is stuck in her. you have put it so beautifully that she recognised his silence and also that he wasn't going to Harvard but leaving the family and also her.
you are really good at subtly putting across strong emotional pieces. wonderfully done!!

👏 👏 👏

Thanks Sapna. I'm glad you enjoyed the winds. Yes, they do share a strong bond, which is why they re-discoved love at the end😊

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maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Oooh woww...this last one was so painful. ...and alsoo so integral to IK...why did u leave it out saku??? Sanskaar calling swara when he needed her most and even tho she would hv had a million questions running in her head she accepted his words with such quietude. ... their compatibility was brilliant even then...wonder why sanskaar didnt notice it then??? Or was it coz he didnt want to be in tht relationship out of no choice???

Beautiful os sakura!

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