SwaSan SS: Enemy Within - DELETED - Page 2

Originally posted by: foresight

what can I say about you saku...you have a sense about the charachters 😳 🤗

i hope you like the next set of cards 😳 😃

Originally posted by: -Ros-

Yay another one from you! Sounds very very intriguing.

I'm loving the persona of that first man. He sounds completely on the ball & very mysterious.

The second man sounds quite arrogant though- like the sort who throws himself in the deep end before testing the water.

The woman reminds me of Sujata 🤣.. please don't kill me for writing that comment. 😆 Just because she was being kinda superstitious.. So I made out the second man to be Ram Prasad 😲

I can't wait to unravel this. Ignore my stupid predictions. 😆

Originally posted by: hurrom

seems interesting...a silent member...waiting for the next part...

Originally posted by: ChoclateLover

It is intriguing. Please continue soon :)

Originally posted by: meghaashvikian

Sounds interesting ...
Written awesomelyy 👏
Do continue soon
Ps-do pm me 😉

Originally posted by: manasie23

Add me to the pm list please

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Sapna...

A very intriguing prologue. The man who is planning something in such meticulous detail, with a backup plan in place as well, reminds me of Sanskaar as he was when he entered the serial. Bitter, bent on revenge, and with a steely determination to see his plan through.

The couple you described later could be Durga Prasad and Annapurna? Durga Prasad having exiled the prodigal son, so to speak, only to find him return, stronger than ever?

😊 I hope my guesses aren't making you roll around in laughter! Anyway I am eagerly waiting for the 1st chapter. Thanks for the pm.