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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Hey Saku...

You certainly have raised a lot of new questions with this chapter. 😊 Swara is the girl Lakshya seems to have fallen for, but she seems to also want to visit India to find out the fate of her "phoenix". Is that Sanskaar? Was he the one playing the violin in that wing of the house? So was Swara the girl who had to leave on that train in the prologue? Somehow I had a feeling it would be Kavita...

You have also described the Maheshwari mansion, its inhabitants and their history so well, in a couple of succinct paragraphs. Evoked the setting very well. 😊

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TRPS

@TRPS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

hey dear, you know, I could capture the first spot of commenting on the update but don't know what to say!!!😳 so mysterious, so confused!!! 😆 will say something after some chapters.. 🤣

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Awesome update Sakura

Your stories keep me on the edge with me biting my nails I front of my mobile screen

It was awesome... Is Lakshya in love with Swara??????

The description of Maheshwari house was awesome

Was Sanskar playing the violin????

I have a feeling that the Phoenix is Swara's father's truth as you said Sharmista is a single mother???????

Please please continue soon

Thank you for the pm

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piccola1

@piccola1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Love this Sakura ! I come back to the forum, after aeons, and find this story on the 1st page and what a start ! It literally shook me, the menace and the trauma of the scene...

As intriguing as ever a tale that you tell, can be.😛

This 2nd part..Annapurna comes across as manipulative, Durgaprasad too, but less viciously so. Lakshya, ..again a prince, doted and cossetted despite this current censure.

Shomi and Swara..well bonded and yet the babe has flown free? Reaching out to a darkness beyond, that is still to be fathomed, or one well traversed?

But who is that solo violinist you introduced in the end? Can I hope for who I wish it to be?

So many questions, so many beginnings..and so many threads that need to mesh..lovely start to what shows promise to be another masterpiece.😃

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--Anna--

@--Anna--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Hey there!

I have been following your stories silently. Be it the Ice King, the Snow Queen or the Elixir or Poison. I could not resist myself this time, you really do have a talent of making the most ordinary of things to extraordinary. All your stories are refreshing and very different from what I have read on this forum till now.

Coming to Phoenix, Love the title and love the beginning. Love the interaction between Durgaprasad and Annapurna and also the one with Laksh. I like that Laksh is shown to be strong here unlike the real show.

If I am to guess, Swara is the girl, Laksh is talking about but is she the girl also in the introduction? Or is it Kavita? Or is it in between the story when Sanskaar too falls in love with Swara and he is punished for it too? Needless to say, I have enough questions in my mind to ask you to please continue soon.

Anna

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chemgirl

@chemgirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

My favourite writer is back...i love this...so mysterious...so good n dark a n aura

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moonstonespirit

@moonstonespirit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Hi 😊 I loved the introductions.

I adore your Swara. Her words in the letter- "I am a bad girl, I know" are struck with me for some reason. Didnt girl on the train say the same too? I thought it will be someone from the past and not Swara 🤔 So she went to seek the phoenix. Will she give the burning phoenix a reason to revive itself or will she burn herself in the process? But this time will she be able to recover from the burns?

Update soon!! All the mystery is making me impatient for more.

Also is Sanskaar the guy on the violin 😳

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Okay so is that swara to whom Lakshya had promised to marry??
And also both DurgaPrasad and Annapoorna are scarier in here...
And in Swara's letter to her mother she said she had to find the fate of her pheonix... So who is this pheonix??!
And does she really like Lakshya or is he just a mode to return back to India...
And the guy playing violin was he Sanskaar??

You are so right Sakura you did clear many of my doubts while confusing me all the more😆

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Woww...ur stories are always mesmerising. ..and the beginning chapters make one feel completely lost...but yet compelled to read further n further in order to get more answers till everything starts making sense. So here u reveal another masterpiece in the making! Hats off to u...ur mind is the king or queen of storytellers. ...cant wait fr the subsequent parts

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dimaag

@dimaag

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Sakura, the first part is good. You mentioned about the mansion and its history etc. You have casted light upon your characters as well .As a whole the first part is some what not fully like the show with slight changes with your beautiful words here and there 😉
Nice update sakura...looking for more to come soon. And thanks for the PM.. 😛
Love,
Navneeta 👏

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