Phoenix SwaSan SS Finale pg40 - Page 7

Hmmm.. This seems really interesting to me.. So if I am not wrong, Shona n lucky wants to keep there promises made to each other n Sanskar was the one playing the violin.. but what about that propogue thing?? Its yet to take place?? What incomplete song?? Sanskar fell in love with Swara only kya.. Phoenix here is who.. So many of question are yet not answered.. Sakura.. Update super soon plz :D

Btw,M used to it now but still u have your words leave such deep impact that thr hav not been a moment when I was not looking into the screen with all my mind present while reading !

Kaash aisa hota aap puri kahani ek hi baar mein likh deti aur main apni jagah se hile bina woh puri pad .khair chodo yeh srrial mein bhi hum swasan scene k khwab dekhte hai aur milta hai patali devi ka bhoot. Waise aap k har din ka update hume bhooto se kai guna pyaara lagta hai. Toh lucky aur swara apne waade nibhane par tule hai. Aur y violin sanskaar hai na. kaash kabhi swara k guitar and swara k guotar ki jugalbandi padhme miil jayee. Kuch bhi ho aapki kahaniya hamesha se pasand aayi hai aur rahengi.

Superb update...many questions but I'm going to hang onto them and let your story unravel itself. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hmmm.

Hey,
Fantastic prologue and first chapter. Lots and lots of questions in my head. Going to wait patiently for your updates for them to be answered. Loved your setting for the story, orthodoxish in mordern times. Writing style is as usual awesome. Descriptions of environment and character portrayal of Durga Prasad and Annapurna was wow!. Looking forward to your next update.

Please update soon. :)

-V

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Saku...

You certainly have raised a lot of new questions with this chapter. 😊 Swara is the girl Lakshya seems to have fallen for, but she seems to also want to visit India to find out the fate of her "phoenix". Is that Sanskaar? Was he the one playing the violin in that wing of the house? So was Swara the girl who had to leave on that train in the prologue? Somehow I had a feeling it would be Kavita...

You have also described the Maheshwari mansion, its inhabitants and their history so well, in a couple of succinct paragraphs. Evoked the setting very well. 😊

Originally posted by: TRPS

hey dear, you know, I could capture the first spot of commenting on the update but don't know what to say!!!😳 so mysterious, so confused!!! 😆 will say something after some chapters.. 🤣

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awesome update Sakura

Your stories keep me on the edge with me biting my nails I front of my mobile screen

It was awesome... Is Lakshya in love with Swara??????

The description of Maheshwari house was awesome

Was Sanskar playing the violin????

I have a feeling that the Phoenix is Swara's father's truth as you said Sharmista is a single mother???????

Please please continue soon

Thank you for the pm

Originally posted by: piccola1

Love this Sakura ! I come back to the forum, after aeons, and find this story on the 1st page and what a start ! It literally shook me, the menace and the trauma of the scene...

As intriguing as ever a tale that you tell, can be.😛

This 2nd part..Annapurna comes across as manipulative, Durgaprasad too, but less viciously so. Lakshya, ..again a prince, doted and cossetted despite this current censure.

Shomi and Swara..well bonded and yet the babe has flown free? Reaching out to a darkness beyond, that is still to be fathomed, or one well traversed?

But who is that solo violinist you introduced in the end? Can I hope for who I wish it to be?

So many questions, so many beginnings..and so many threads that need to mesh..lovely start to what shows promise to be another masterpiece.😃

Originally posted by: --Anna--

Hey there!

I have been following your stories silently. Be it the Ice King, the Snow Queen or the Elixir or Poison. I could not resist myself this time, you really do have a talent of making the most ordinary of things to extraordinary. All your stories are refreshing and very different from what I have read on this forum till now.

Coming to Phoenix, Love the title and love the beginning. Love the interaction between Durgaprasad and Annapurna and also the one with Laksh. I like that Laksh is shown to be strong here unlike the real show.

If I am to guess, Swara is the girl, Laksh is talking about but is she the girl also in the introduction? Or is it Kavita? Or is it in between the story when Sanskaar too falls in love with Swara and he is punished for it too? Needless to say, I have enough questions in my mind to ask you to please continue soon.

Anna