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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Wow!hw much i lv sanskar.
Awsm updt.Cnt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Aw loved it!😳
Their trust in each other is the most wonderful thing. 😊
Please continue soon, can't wait to see how Sanskaar brings RagYa down! ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Grt. Want this to happen.
Plz update soon. Can't wait more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2 A
Ragini and lakshay were smiling. They knew why sanskar took swara to his room. They knew this would happen, they knew sanskar would try to clear the air with swara because he truly loved her but they were also confident that he would not believe her explanations because they have trapped swara well this time. She had no proofs to prove herself innocent.
Sujata- patanahi k Patti padha rahi hogi mahre chore ko?
Ap- sujata... Bhagwan k liye chup ho jao unko niche aane do Aur swara sanskar ko upar le kar nahi gayi sanskar usse le kar gaya hai
Sharmishtha- swara aisa nahi kar sakti woh aisi nahi hai, baat kuch Aur hai
Shekhar - mishthi don't worry woh humari beti hai abhi niche aa kar sab bataegi
Dadi- lo aa gaye dono
Everyone looked at them. They were smiling and were coming downstairs hand in hand. Ap Dp ram Pari and adarsh were happy seeing them. Sharmishtha,shekhar and dadi were releived. Sujata was angry. Ragya were shocked they didn't plan for this.
As soon as they reached downstairs sanskar declared
Sanskar - mughe swara par yakeen hai woh jhooth nahi bolti
Ragini - par sanskar tumne khud swara ko farmhouse Mai dekha tha Lakshay k saath jiski wahjah sai Tum Naraz ho kar chalein gaye thai.
Lakshay- Aur bhai swara mughse pyar karti hai yeh dekho moli ka aadha hissa jo swara nai mughe diya agar aap na hotey toh woh puri moli bandhti mughe voh toh samaj Aur logo k wahjah sai hum alag hai
Swara's hold tightened on sanskar's hand and she closed her eyes in disgust
Sanskar - i don't believe u. Tumne sahi Kahan ragini Mai aaya tha farmhouse Aur dekha tha Inn dono ko hasten huye par Mai apni nazar sai jayada swara par vishwas karta hun Aur uska kehnai yeh hai ki lucky nai ussi din Swara sai dosti ki Aur usko apni zindagi Mai Lautne ko Kahan Aur vada bhi kiya ki vo ragini Aur apne rishtein ko ek mauka dega
Sujata- beta saare saboot uske khilaf hai Tu kyun usko sahi sabit karne par tula hai?
Sanskar - MA saare saboot mere bhi khilaf thai..Mera bhi bracelet mila tha na kitchen Mai? Tab kya ragini ka jhooth Sach Tha?
Sujata was stunned
Sanskar- kya hua MA chup kyun ho? Jis ladki par aap characterless honai ka ilzam laga rahi ho woh wohi ladki hai jisnai aapke beta ko rapist honai k ilzam sai bachaya tha.
Dp- sanskar par lucky toh
Sanskar - bade papa lucky jhooth bol raha hai Aur ragini bhi
Ram- beta saaf Saaf bol.
Sanskar- ragini ki yadasht wapas aa gayi hai, Karwa Chauth k din sai woh bilkul thik hai
Ragini- sanskar yadasht kiski gayi hai?
Sanskar- really ragini?
Sanskar turned to lucky
Sanskar- lucky Karwa Chauth k able din ragini k Sar Mai Dard tha na?
Lucky- Haan tha toh?
Sanskar - Aur Tum usko hospital le gaya tha? Kaunsa hospital tha?
Lucky started sweating and stammering
Lucky- ciiityyy hospital
Sanskar - prescriptions dikhayiyo
Ragya were shocked they could see there plan crumbling
Everyone looked at them.
Dp- kya hua lakshay jawab do
Lucky- papa mughse prescription kho gayi
Sanskar- arrey achha? Koi nahi Mai abhi city hospital call karta hun. Lucky doctor ka naam batayiyo jiske pass Tu ragini ko Lekar gaya tha?
Ragya were tongue tied they had no reply
Sanskar - bade papa Mai batahta hun
Then sanskar revealed everything to the family. He told them about him arranging swalak meeting on lucky's insistence in the park so that swara forgives lucky. There lucky proposed her in front of him and Swara refused. Then he told him about the bridge scene of which he was a witness due to lucky's call. Then he revealed why swara refused to divorce him. After that ragini's memory loss happened. Lucky was still stalking swara he told them. He also showed the family swara's mobile which had lucky's blackmailing messages. Then he told them that lucky tried to commit suicide, his wrist cut was not due to Apple. He told them he did so to blackmail swara to live in mm. Swara on ragini's and his insistence gave lucky a chance unwilling. Then he repeated the farmhouse fiasco.
Dp sat down he was ashamed of his son
Dp- patanahi kya kami reh gayi humari parvarish Mai?
Ap- lucky? Kyun kiya aisa? Sirf swara ko panai k liye?
Dadi- ragini? Kitnai fareb karegi? Kitna giregi? Tu thaki na ab tak?
Lucky- Mai swara sai pyaar karta hun meri hai woh meri
Dp got up and slapped him
Dp- par swara tumse pyaar nahi karti lakshay kya farak reh gaya Tum mai Aur ragini Mai?
Lucky looked at his father realization struck him. He ran to his room.
Dp turned to Sanskar with folded hands but Swasan stopped him before he could apologize for lucky. They couldn't see him like this. All the family members went to their room.
Ragini was being dragged by shekhar to the badi. She needed a psychiatrist, shekhar understood this and made an appointment. Dadi and sharmishtha were looking at him while he was doing so. Ragini was playing with her fingers in her room and was smiling and talking to herself. Three of them peaked in to have a look at her. They sighed,
Shekhar - humai pehle hi ragini halat samajni chahiye thi.
Sharmishtha - koi nahi shekhar doctor ko aane do dekhta hai woh kya kehtein hai.
Lakshay looked himself in the mirror he could not recognize himself. What had he done? Swara's and Dp's slap was running in his mind. Finally he realised his mistakes but it was too late. So he wrote a letter to his father and went away to search himself. The old happy go lucky.
Swasan sat in there room when they heard a knock. Sanskar tried to get up but swara held him back.
Sanskar- swara sab thik hai ab toh Mera haath chodh darwaza kholnai do
Swara left his hand with great difficulty
Sanskar opened the door to see his bade papa, dad, badi ma and mom
Dp - sanskar Tum dono abhi kya chahtein ho? Swara nai divorce k liye na lucky ki blackmailing k wahjah sai Bola tha. Kya Tum saath rahana chahtein ho?
Sanskar- bade papa Mai swara sai pyaar karta hun Aur swara bhi mughse pyaar karti hai hum humesha saath rahana chahtein hai.
Ap- kya yeh Tum dono ka akhri faisla hai?
Sanskar- Haan badi ma
Ram- Arre waah chalo Inn sab sai kuch toh achha nikla
All of them left
Swara looked at him when he closed the door
Sanskar walked towards her and sat besides her. He cupped her face in his hands. Swara closed her eyes in shyness. Sanskar kissed her eyes, her cute little nose and her cheeks. He paused and looked at her lips. Swara opened her eyes to look at him. She was overwhelmed when she did so, his eyes were asking her permission to touch her.
Swara whispered - Mai tumhari hun sanskar
Sanskar only needed this
He captured her lips like a starved man. Swara was shocked with sudden impatience from him. His force was so strong that swara fell back on the bed and now sanskar was on her. He was literally chewing her lips to his satisfaction. Swara came out of the shock and started responding.
Sanskar Finally stopped his violent kissing and looked at her, her hair were messed up, her lipstick was smudged and her bangles broke.
Sanskar - sorry, patanahi what happened?
Sanskar started feeling guilty for his act.
Swara looked at him and kissed him again to stop him from saying anything else.
This time there kiss was tender and sweet.
Sanskar started unzipping her kameez. He was now kissing her neck and shoulders. All swara could do was moan his name. With every kiss he was living a love bite on her. To mark her as his. Swara was shocked to see this sanskar. She always thought that their lovemaking would be tender and sweet because sanskar was like that. But here she was being passionately loved by her man.
Soon there cloths were left behind on the floor and they became one. Swara looked at her husband who was now sleeping like kid, his head was buried in her bossoms and her neck could feel his breath. She kept looking at him and her hand were brushing his hair. She kissed his forehead and closed her eyes in satisfaction as sleep took over her.

Precap- 3 months leap
Lucky's return

Edited by luvakanksha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Wow Akanksha. ...well written yaar. Sanskaar's way of bringing out the truth was fabulous. So well thought out and intelligent. RagYa plan went to smithereens 😆
Glad that Lakshya got a belated realization he was changing into Ragini 2.0.

And the SwaSan scene in the end...Man was it hawt or what. 😳☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Awsm updt.
Sanskar trap ragya very well.
Swasan part was cute yet hot.
Waiting 4 nxt part.cnt soon.thnks 4 pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Oh that was so good😃Eagerly waiting for more👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Wonderful Start
Love the both parts, best relaxation after watching crap show😊
I wish cvs show something like this in the show

@Part1: "Swara hugged sanskar started telling him everything like a parrot" ( But in reality cvs showing swara doing everything like a parrot which laksh and ragini tell her to do)😆

@Part2 I am gald Sanskar managed to trap both psycho laksh and obsessive ragini very well👏
Thanks for giving 2 tight slaps to laksh
Ending was quite romantic😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Awesome update
Sankaar fighting against those evils believing swara
Without any proof
Atleast here lucky got slap from most wanted swara and dp 👏
Same slap expecting in show also
Swasan accepting their relationship to their family
Ragini gng to psychiatric
Sanskaar impatience to love his lady love
awww😳
Swasan becoming one 😉
Thks for ur pm
Edited by Nandhu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Awesome..
Kash asa serial me hota...
REaally hoping to see it..

Continue with something new soon...
Thank you for the PM

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