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Posted: 9 years ago
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Perfect👏
I just want something like this to happen. The story flows smoothly. Well done😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Sanskaar, hw much I love this guy. He'll be thinking practically in any damn situation. The trust which he has on Swara is unbelievable.

U hv bght the characters well thru ur writing. Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really liked it Akanksha. love the both parts. Look forward to the next update. Do PM me if you can.
Thanks.

its like a thandi hawa ka jhonka.👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Fantastic
Finally all sorted
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Awesome update!

First Swara on detective mode and now Sanskaar! They truly are made for each other! 😉 😆
At least Laksh had some kind of realisation, better late than never eh? 😊
Glad Shekhar had the sense to consult a psychiatrist for Ragini because she really needs it!

Swasan at the end.. ☺️ ☺️

Precap sounds interesting!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
awesome update dear...beautifully written...👏.i really love it...&&&&& thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2b

Sanskar got up in the morning to find himself tangled with his, yes his cute little wife. Swara was right beneath him under his weight. Her hands were in his hair. He smiled and lifted himself up to lie down beside her. He started caressing her face. Swara started waking up she saw her husband looking at her with eyes full of love and trust. She realised their position and blushed. Sanskar noticed this and his naughty instinct woke up. He smiled and started kissing her neck.
Swara- sanskar? Chodo mughe subha ho gayi hai pls
Sanskar - hmmm
And he continued his kisses and started removing the only blanket she was covered in.
Swara- sanskar pls na baba, stop it
Sanskar looked up in her eyes and very innocently asked her
Sanskar- u really want me to stop?
Swara was shocked, her husband was looking like a kid who was naughty yet innocent. She was discovering new dimensions of sanskar, as her lover.
Sanskar- bolo na swara?
Swara blushed and closed her eyes.
Sanskar smirked seeing his effect on his wife and was going to attack her lips but someone started knocking their door
Swara opened her eyes and pushed sanskar back and covered herself in the blanket. She passed sanskar's shirt which was on her side because she removed it the previous night and blushed more, if that was even possible. She stood up and went to the bathroom. Sanskar dressed himself and opened the door to find his badi ma who was crying badly.
Ap- woh chale gaya woh chala gaya
Sanskar immediately held her and consoled her he brought her in and gave her water
Sanskar-kya hua badi ma?
Ap passed him lakshay's letter addressed to Dp. He read it and was shocked just then swara came out drying her hair and was tensed to see her husband shocked and her badi ma crying
Swara- kya hua Sanskar?
Sanskar passed her the letter
Swara read lucky's words which were full of remorse and redemption, the letter was smudged due to his tears. In that letter he apologised to his father for being such a nuisance and he also apologised to Swara and the rest of the family. He told them not to worry about him and assured his family that he would return and when he would return they would be proud of him.

After 3 months

The maheshwaris were happy, swara and sanskar were together and strong, swara was the singing sensation of Kolkata now and it was all because of sanskar. He motivated her to participate in Kolkata Idol and she still could not believe that she won that. She was now a background singer in many bengali movies. She was getting offers from bollywood too. Sanskar and adarsh were backbones of maheshwari industries. Ram and Dp were proud of them. Sujata was ashamed of herself, she understood that no one could keep his son happy other than swara and now swara and sujata were inseparable. They were best friends. Ap was happy seeing her family happy. Pari was expecting, it was her second month.
Shekhar and shomi were going strong. Dadi was satisfied. Ragini was going for regular sessions with the psychiatrist. She was suffering from obsession. There was improvement in her and now she was remorseful too for her behaviour. She apologised to everyone and everyone forgave her.
But amongst all this happiness something was missing and it was lucky. Everyone missed him especially Ap.

Swasan room
Swara just came back from the studio after recording a song. She entered her room to find it empty.
Swara- yeh sanskar abhi tak nahi aaya? Raat k 8 baj gaye Aur voh toh humesha 6 baje tak wapas aa jata hai
Sanskar just returned and was standing just behind her. He hugged her from behind and pressed her to himself. Swara relaxed in his embrance.
Swara - aaj late Kyun huye?
Sanskar- ek khush kabhi hai
Swara - kya jaldi batao pls
Sanskar - niche chalo sabko bataunga
Swasan walked downstairs everyone was present there.
Dp- kya hua Sanskar?
Sanskar - aap sabke liye ek surprise hai
Sujata- kaisa surprise chore? Jaldi batah
Sanskar looked towards the entrance and shouted
Sanskar- Andar aaja
Everyone looked towards the door to see lucky, yes there lucky. The family was overjoyed seeing him. Ap ran towards his son and hugged him tight. 3 months of separation, was enough for her to understand sujata's pain in those 5 yrs. Dp also ran towards him. Adarsh and Pari went and gave him a hug. Swara looked at sanskar questioning him. She knew sanskar made all the efforts to find lucky but was unable to find him but he didn't loose hope and continued his search until Dp told him to stop. He told him that lucky would return himself.
Ap- Kahan chala gaya tha Tu? Kitna sataya tune mughe
Lucky- sorry ma
Lucky walked towards swara with folded hands. Swara immediately held his hands indicating him with a no. Swara immediately brought her hand forward for a handshake offering a freindship and lucky happily accepted it.
Lucky - thanks Swara for forgiving me and for this friendship. Tum bohat achhi ho.
Swara- woh toh Mai Hu
Everyone started laughing.
Adarsh- Kahan mila tughe yeh sanskar?
Sanskar - hotel paradise Mai meeting k liye aaya tha.
Ram- meeting?
Sanskar- papa humari company mumbai Mai branch kholnai chahti hai toh uske liye jo marketing company humai hire ki hai voh lakshay maheshwari ki hai, Durga marketing k naam sai
Everyone looked at him Dp walked up to him and hugged him.
Dp- i am proud of u lucky
That was it lucky cried and cried hard in his father embrance. Everyone was in awee seeing this. Lucky finally did it. His father was not ashamed of him now.
It was an emotional evening in the maheshwari mansion. Everyone was finally satisfied and happy. They got the missing piece of their family back.

Swasan returned back to their room
Swara- Sab sahi ho gaya Sanskar
Sanskar hugged her and said yes swara finally
Swara- achha ab chodo mughe change karna hai
Sanskar - kya fayda swara kapde toh utarnai hi hai
And he started unzipping her kurti, while placing kisses along her neck.
Swara turned and pushed him back
Swara - besharam Kahin k... Hato
Sanskar- besharam Aur Mai achha... Ahh sanskar yes hmmm yes aaahhh plsss ohhh achha yes baby hmmm sanskar
Sanskar started mimicking swara when she is in her throws of passion
Swara turned red and picked up a pillow and threw it towards him.
Sanskar caught it and started laughing seeing his wife's red face. Swara decided to leave the room she was red with embarrassment. Sanskar caught her hand and pulled her towards him, he gave her a hug and said
Sanskar- i love u swara
Swara looked into his eyes and said
Swara- i love u too
And they kissed and the room filled with there love and passion. They were finally happy and they were experiencing fulfillment.


The end

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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Aww...
That so sweet..
Was eagerly waiting for the update..

Naughty Sanskar..
Haayee 😳😳😳😳😳😳

Finally everything in place .
Everyone is happy...

Loved it..
Thank you for the PM...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Wow nice ending
Loved ur story
Keep writing 👏
Thks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
I love happy endings nd ur story hd every part of it.

Thnx for such a lovely story.

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