His trust- Swasan os part 2b pg 6

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Hey guys I am a big time Swasan fan I have written an os on them previously titled
saving my husband -
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4467940
And also an ff titled the judgement which is ongoing (will update it by Thursday )-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4487360
Besides these I have written 2 Khyali pulao titled as
1)the proposal
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4466380&PID=126820941&#p126820941
2)the silence
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4466380&PID=127087295&#p127087295

Here is another os its in 2 parts, I hope u all like it
His trust - part 1

Swara stood in the middle of the maheshwari hall horrified, she could not believe this was happening to her. She was blamed for trapping lakshay and sanskar both for her self interest. She was being labeled as characterless.
Ragini was satisfied at last her efforts worked. She proved swara characterless.
Sujata gave those accusing glares to Swara declaring her as a culprit already.
Ap, Dp, ram, Pari and adarsh were still doubtful. There eyes were questioning swara asking for explanation. Dadi, shomi and shekhar were doing the same.
Swara looked at them and realised that they don't trust her, they are questioning her to explain? Explain this disgusting accusation?
She missed her dida, if she was here she would have trusted her.
She looked at lakshay her friend who was smiling, this shook her why was he smiling?
Then she looked at ragini who was at peace, realization shook her it was her, and her eyes filled up.
She looked at sanskar who was angry he was fisting and unfisting His hands to control his anger
Sujata- dekha ji Maine toh pehle hi Kahan tha ki yeh bangalan hai bangalan, aur Lao bangalan bahu
Sanskar shouted - maa...
Sujata- Tu chup kar patah nahi ke jaadu kiya hai iss chori nai thare pai chup, aur sirf thare pai na thare bhai par bhi
Before sanskar could shut her up lucky said something that shocked everyone
Lucky- Mai swara sai pyaar karta Hu Aur swara bhi mughse...
Before he could speak further he received a slap from swara across his face
Swara- jhooth... Mai tumse pyaar nahi karti samjhe tum.
Ragini was shocked she didn't expected swara to retaliate she thought that she has given up that she was finally able to break her but once again she underestimated her sister
Swara- kyun kar rahe ho yeh sab? Pehle tumne ragini sai shadi ki vishwas nahi kiya mughe par Aur na hi intezar kiya Mera Aur phir sachhai patah chalnai k baad pichai pad gaye mere ki mai tumhai dusra mauka dun jab Maine manna Kiya tumne suicide karne ki koshish ki Aur mughse jabatdasti Haan karwayi. Aur farmhouse pai woh sab natak tha tumhara?
Ap- kaisa natak swara? Saaf Saaf batao
Sujata- jiji k bataegi yeh?
Dp- sujata jo dikhta hai zaroori nahi hai vaise ho bolo swara
Swara- isnai mughe Kahan ki issnai mughe Azad kar diya hai, aur dosti ki mughse Kahan ki ab mughe kabhi force nahi karega aur apne Aur ragini k rishtein ko dusra mauka Dene ka vada bhi kiya
Ragini- yeh sab Kab hua swara? Jhooth kyun bol rahi ho us din aisa kuch nahi hua tha
Lakshay- Haan swara usse din hum nai ek dusre sai apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya tha. Aisa kyun kar rahi ho mere saath swara? Pls marry me aur sab thik ho jayega
Ragini- aap logo ko yakeen nahi hai toh pucheye sanskar sai woh bhi aaye thai farmhouse par unhonai bhi Inn dono ki rangraliya dekhi thi.
Swara was shocked and she started crying thinking that it was all over that no one will believe her now
Everyone looked at sanskar for his answer. Lakshay smirked and ragini smiled to see their motive being achieved.
Sanskar walked towards swara. Swara looked at him and her eyes were pleading to him to trust her. Sanskar walked up to her and held her hand with authority and dragged her towards his room.
In the room -
Swara - sanskar trust me please, maine kuch nahi kiya
Sanskar held her face and kissed her forehead and made her sit on their bed. He wiped her tears and gave her water.
Sanskar -i trust u swara
This was it nothing mattered anymore for swara, She broke down in his embrace and cried her heart out
Swara- thanks sanskar thanks she kept mumering
Sanskar - ssshhh swara bas baba chup ho jao warna flood aa jayegi Aur mughe swimming nahi aati
Swara- swara kept hugging him and started giggling in his embrance
Sanskar pushed her back swara moaned in disappointment but he had to do this, he too wished that the time stopped like this with swara in his embrance laughing and smiling because of him but he had to clear the mess her sister and his brother had created.
Sanskar - swara I trust u mughe shuru sai batao kya hua?
Swara was feeling insecure as soon as sanskar moved out from there hug so she hugged him again and kept her head on his chest and closed her eyes and started telling him everything like a parrot. She told him about her kidnapping, about lucky saving her, about those pictures sent to bade papa, about farmhouse, about everything that happened on Diwali she told him she tied a part of moli on his hand and a part of it on her books, she told him everything
Sanskar listened to her, they were hugging each other all this while
Swara - sanskar u trust me na?
Swara wanted to hear this again and again from him this gave her security
Sanskar - i love u swara and I trust u
Swara- i love u too sanskar
Sanskar was shocked did he really hear that? Was this a dream?
Sanskar - kya Kahan tumne swara?
Swara hugged him tighter she still didn't realise her words
Sanskar- swara?
Swara opened her eyes in shock and got out of the hug and realised that she told him, she told him that she loves him she stood up to run, but sanskar held her hand.
Sanskar- phirse keh do na plsss
Swara looked at him she saw his man begging for her love. She quickly sat down and cupped his face and started kissing him on his cheeks, forehead and chin with each kiss she was telling him that she loves him
Sanskar started crying he wept like a kid and hugged her
Sanskar - thanks swara thanks I love u too
Swara - bas sanskar warna flood aa jayegi and mughe swimming nahi aati - swara mimicked him
And they both started laughing
Sanskar - chalo niche swara
Swara started shivering in his embrance
Swara - nahi pls no one trusts me, sab mughse sawaal karenge pls nahi Aur ragini mughe galat sabit kardegi phirse nahi pls Aur lakshay woh Kitnai gande sai dekhta hai mughe pls nahi yahan rehtein hai aise hi humesha pls
Sanskar- u trust me na swara
Swara - apne aap sai bhi jayada
Sanskar - toh phir bas toh darna kis baat ka? Mai hoon tumhare saath humesha. Chalein?
Swara - thik hai chalo
They walked together hand in hand to face their family

To be continued


Part 2a- pg 3
Part 2b - pg 6


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Posted: 10 years ago
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nyc start..
count soon👍🏼
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Awsome awsone...loved it!! Continue soon!! :)🤗👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really liked it Akanksha. Hope the MU gets cleared like this on the show also. Look forward to the next update. Do PM me if you can.
Thanks

Viji
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it !!
waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful first part ! Trust Swara to get embroiled so badly😕
Loved Sanskaar..he lives up to our faith in him!😳
Eagerly waiting for the next..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That nice..
Hoping for the next update..
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Please continue this right now! I want to read more!! Please please please please!
It is so good. I really wish something like this happens!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update daer..khash yeh sab serial mei hota tho...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update 👏 👏
I very much needed it after today's episode
Thanks for the pm

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