SwaSan OS: 'The Colors of Love'

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Awesome OS!

Thanks so much. 😊

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Shivangi

@Annei123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Amazing OS !!!!

Keep writing more 😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Annei123
Amazing OS !!!!
Keep writing more 😃

Thanks Annei 😊

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Viji dear I just loved ur OS a lot ur title itself made me fascinating my dear as I went on reading it gave me a soothing pleasure and ease,loved it a lot👏👏

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Monica_Suhasini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

unres on page 1 viji😊

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RUQAIYA10

@RUQAIYA10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Viji!!!! I swear I want to take creative writing lessons from you. Yet again you have delivered such a fantastic piece.

As the story is set amidst the beautiful colours of Holi I'm quite thrilled that you chose the colour blue. Like Swara blue is also my favourite and have always had a fascination with anything associated with that colour. Hence my my love for the deep blue sea. For Swara blue represents a state of permanence and I love how you paralleled it to Swaras yet to come epiphany that Sanskar was indeed becoming the very blue state that she longs for and is very precious to her. That is brilliant writing.

I also want to thank you for giving us the satisfaction the show failed to deliver. Of seeing Laksh getting the much deserved vile treatment. I still think Swara went too easy on him. If it was me I would have literally given him the whack on his thick skull that you mentioned.

And the ending was so sweet yaar. I could actually imagine Sanku giving Swara the bristle cheek rub. It was romantic and kind of hot😳

Viji this was absolutely wonderful.Its just what I needed to survive my Sankuless weekend

🤗

Ruqaiya

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Zaalima_5

@Zaalima_5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

lovely OS..😊

holi bit was awesome and romantic.. swasan romancing in front of Mr.LRG..😆 loved this.

swara's treatment to Mr.LRG..😲 unexpected but gave pleasure..😃

she should behave something like that in show as well..😉😆 then only this psycho is gonna understand her NO..😡

ragini...🤢 loved sujju..😳

you used sanskaar's mantara in your fic.. "breath in breath out"..❤️

beautiful viji.. loved it and keep writing. we need strength to bear this painful track..😒

kulsum..!!

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Viji,

Pretty colourful that was.😃

and I love you🤗...swara splashing milk onto his face..scalding it.

That excuse

Seriously as you said..Ragini would pity him.😆

The starting where you made swara pine for him...actually open the wardrobe looking for his scent...very nice touch.Ye toh gayi.😉

I adore the descriptions of..lakshya slinking away...licking his wounds...Ragini's malevolent glares, utter hatred... Very astute they were. You know why we feel the same way about lakshya's of course. Has to do with the similarity to a certain animal...😉 Of course..I adore that animal type..and Pym my be insulted.😕.

When Sanskaar came in...and swara was like,nobody else should put that colour on me but him...I was so happy. delighted.Glad.

the romance ka toh kya kehna. and they were allowed some leeway from their approving families.

Thanks for making the characters a lot less stupid.😡.The angry emoticon is for the CVs. This is for you.👏👏👏

Thanks for making my day with this.Oh and that shyam creep does resemble this version of L.😡

Very beautifully written as always...the Swara missing him part was my favourite.

love--

medha.

Edited by medhasankar - 9 years ago

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misaki

@misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Geethu...🤗 🤗

Your comment literally had me grinning and blushing re. I'm still at work, and I don't know if people feel I am chatting with my Hubby on the sly. 😆

Seriously, let us all weave our own version of SwaSan land, in our tales. The serial is going to drag the pain and MU interminably, I feel. Well, maybe after that crazy car blast track, Swara would realize her feelings? One can only hope. But I seriously don't get how she can go back to back slapping, arm on shoulder kinda friendship with a guy who was obsessively harassing her till a day before. Hello? No self preservation instinct? 😕

You loved the scalding milk part, huh? Imagine what joy I took in writing it. 😆 As I was telling Shru, I was actually planning to get Swara to give him a solid blow in his cojones 😉. Perhaps so bad that he may have never become a Dad...😆 But then I desisted, I didn't want to run foul of forum rules. 😉

Blue is my favorite color, so I wanted to bring out all the significance of that, and tie it in to what Sanskaar is, in Swara's life. His love truly is an all encompassing, constant and unshakable thing, na? Man, sooo very intense and yet so selfless...

Thanks for spotting that para where I'd tried to reflect Swara's pangs of separation with the overcast, cloudy sky...and then of course when SwaSan unite, its all brightness and glory (except for Devar Ji, who slinks off to the shade 😆)!

I had taken a short trip to SwaSan dreamland when I wrote that Holi bit, Geethu. ☺️ 😳 Its a very inexpensive ticket for me, I live right next door to it, almost all the time!! 😆 Really glad to hear you liked it. Feels really good, coming from my fellow SwaSan shippers!

For Swara---vermilion application is only by Sansku. End of story! 😉

Waiting for your update on Partners, as well as this new OS you're thinking about.

Oh how did I forget to add this,

I loved that explanation of Sanskaar's psyche and that very apt reference to Tutankhamun's curse(history had always been my favorite subject) . It delivered that very deserving emphasis on why and how Sanskaar's love was not knee- jerk reaction (like so many Swa--Lak fans love to point out) to Swara getting him out his self-imposed hell. It was of course not expected(which love is?) but it wasn't all no-brain on his part. If it was then he wouldn't be our Sanskaar. And his love wouldn't be epic!❤️ I don't know if I managed to explain it as well as you did but I hope you understand what I mean to tell you😆

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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Vijiii🤗 I just want to play holi with Swasan🥳
To splash all kind of romantic colours over them
Lovely beautiful fantastic awesome outstanding OS dear...⭐️👏
Lakshya 😆 scalded with hot milk..I should have been there with swara..I would have pressed his face on to the ignited burner of the gas stove..😡😡😡
Swara is not dumb as in the serial, all thanks to you😃😃
And you dedicated this to Swasan kids..awww😳😳😳 that was cute, by the way..😊😊
I loved the way Sujata thought, "Jiji ki sundar susheel marwari bahu"😆
When she hit Sanskaar's chest while she ran from Lakshya☺️ Man..I was like..wow..kya timing hain..😃
the way Swara coloured him with the colour and the way he rubbed his cheek on hers..😳😳😳
It reminded me of IPKKND and then you were telling so in the end..It was my favourite scene too😃😃

thank you sooo much Viji...for this story🤗

PS : I always send PM s to you dear..But I don't know how you didn't get the PM of HP+Swaragini story..And I had sent two PM's today also..One a personal msg..and other as a PM for my todays update..Hope you got them..If you didn't please tell me..😊

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