SwaSan OS: 'The Colors of Love' - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: kulsum_5

lovely OS..😊

holi bit was awesome and romantic.. swasan romancing in front of Mr.LRG..😆 loved this.
swara's treatment to Mr.LRG..😲 unexpected but gave pleasure..😃
she should behave something like that in show as well..😉😆 then only this psycho is gonna understand her NO..😡
ragini...🤢 loved sujju..😳
you used sanskaar's mantara in your fic.. "breath in breath out"..❤️
beautiful viji.. loved it and keep writing. we need strength to bear this painful track..😒

kulsum..!!



Hey Kulsum...thanks for your comment dear. 😊

Oh definitely I wanted to make SwaSan have their romantic moment in front of obsessive Mr Lakshya. At least then he'll realize that Swara is Sanskaar's. Not available for his chance--maro-ing anymore!! 😆

And definitely, I took a huge amount of pleasure in making Swara give him the scalding hot milk facial!! 🤣🤣

Sujju--yeah, I wanted to show her accepting Swara, but still showing some crazy nautanki here and there. She's Sujju, after all! 😉

Thanks again, will definitely try to keep writing as I also need strength to bear the potential MU and pain that the CVs have in store for us!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Viji I really love you for writing this! This One shot is my current love but attaining it was so hard. My net connection has decided to play Lakshya for me and was saying that No web page existed with the address I had typed. Then My computer has decided to play Swara in her quest for true love and said there was no network available. Hence it took me four hours to finally read this.
Can I hug you for that burning milk you decided to throw on Lakshya's face? I seriously wanted to do him some bodily harm for so long but had no scope of that in my writing but you have just fulfilled that wish of mine.
Then the part where SwaSan were missing each other! So masterfully done. Soft, smooth and utterly innocent yet deep with the longing of love! I adore it to bits!
What I love is the holi scene of cause. Just salt in Lakshya's wounds, the exact amount to be a painful reality check as well as the most deserving medicine! That I miss you was so heart touching! It was a wonderful accomplishment to a master piece!
I absolutely adore this one!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Viji,

Pretty colourful that was.😃
and I love you🤗...swara splashing milk onto his face..scalding it.
That excuse

Seriously as you said..Ragini would pity him.😆

The starting where you made swara pine for him...actually open the wardrobe looking for his scent...very nice touch.Ye toh gayi.😉

I adore the descriptions of..lakshya slinking away...licking his wounds...Ragini's malevolent glares, utter hatred... Very astute they were. You know why we feel the same way about lakshya's of course. Has to do with the similarity to a certain animal...😉 Of course..I adore that animal type..and Pym my be insulted.😕.

When Sanskaar came in...and swara was like,nobody else should put that colour on me but him...I was so happy. delighted.Glad.

the romance ka toh kya kehna. and they were allowed some leeway from their approving families.

Thanks for making the characters a lot less stupid.😡.The angry emoticon is for the CVs. This is for you.👏👏👏

Thanks for making my day with this.Oh and that shyam creep does resemble this version of L.😡
Very beautifully written as always...the Swara missing him part was my favourite.

love--
medha.



Hey Medhu dear...🤗 🤗

Funnily enough, I had the basic idea for this one even before my preceding Diwali "Lights of Love" OS. But then I thought I should do the Diwali one first, given the season. This one kinda changed tone after that, what with the past couple of episodes.

That was what made me write about Swara pining for Sanskaar so much, missing him so badly. I do so hope to see Swara feeling this on the show too. So far, its always Sansku with his heart on his sleeve, and Swara being basically clueless...

I have a weakness for Hugo Boss Man. My Hubby uses it. 😉

Am so very happy you liked the special scalding milk facial, that I made Swara give Lakshya. First, of course, this was the apt way to treat a guy who's stalking you (as opposed to slinging your arm over his shoulder and laughing your head off with him, in a farmhouse! 🤢). And secondly, I wanted Swara to take an indirect revenge on Devar Ji, for all the times he'd splashed water on Sansku's face. 😆

If you promise not to tell me that I am scandalizing you, I'll let you in on a little secret. 😛 That scalding milk was actually the second best alternative I came up with. My first choice was to have Swara kick him in the cojones. 😉 In such a way, that Ragini would never ask for her haq again, it would be a moot point anyway. 😆 But then I thought, maybe I might run afoul of a few forum rules, why take the risk? And so scalding milk facial, it was!

That excuse by Lakshya was nearly as foolish as the apple one, na? 😊

The romance bit--ah well, that was me taking a short detour into SwaSan dreamland. Its a very inexpensive ticket for me---I stay very close by, for the most part. 😆

BTW you seem to have used 2 or 3 thanks in your comment...I thought we had this No Thanks rule going on? 😉 Sansku baba ke vachan?



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Posted: 10 years ago
#54


Thanks so much. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum



Hey Medhu dear...🤗 🤗

Funnily enough, I had the basic idea for this one even before my preceding Diwali "Lights of Love" OS. But then I thought I should do the Diwali one first, given the season. This one kinda changed tone after that, what with the past couple of episodes.

That was what made me write about Swara pining for Sanskaar so much, missing him so badly. I do so hope to see Swara feeling this on the show too. So far, its always Sansku with his heart on his sleeve, and Swara being basically clueless...

I have a weakness for Hugo Boss Man. My Hubby uses it. 😉

Am so very happy you liked the special scalding milk facial, that I made Swara give Lakshya. First, of course, this was the apt way to treat a guy who's stalking you (as opposed to slinging your arm over his shoulder and laughing your head off with him, in a farmhouse! 🤢). And secondly, I wanted Swara to take an indirect revenge on Devar Ji, for all the times he'd splashed water on Sansku's face. 😆

If you promise not to tell me that I am scandalizing you, I'll let you in on a little secret. 😛 That scalding milk was actually the second best alternative I came up with. My first choice was to have Swara kick him in the cojones. 😉 In such a way, that Ragini would never ask for her haq again, it would be a moot point anyway. 😆 But then I thought, maybe I might run afoul of a few forum rules, why take the risk? And so scalding milk facial, it was!

That excuse by Lakshya was nearly as foolish as the apple one, na? 😊

The romance bit--ah well, that was me taking a short detour into SwaSan dreamland. Its a very inexpensive ticket for me---I stay very close by, for the most part. 😆

BTW you seem to have used 2 or 3 thanks in your comment...I thought we had this No Thanks rule going on? 😉 Sansku baba ke vachan?




I am not that easily scandalized, when it comes to guys like Laksh who ask for it.🤢 and i like this treatment better.
BTW..that would actually mean there will never be any ongoing RagYa bloodline. Thats one bloodline which needs to be safely outbred into oblivion.🤢

imagine the RagYa kid.
blackmailing his/her mom."Aap hamare saath aisa kaise kar sakte hain?? If you do not approve of my bf/gf..I will push you from that bridge, where u pushed masi"😈

in babyhood."SwaSan baby stole my toy. SwaSan baby..did this not me. Sab usssne kiya."

"Papa toy doh na...owww gawwd.mujhe toy chahiye. SwaSan baby has that toy"

I like kids...but still...they learn from their parents.😕

Did we have that rule? okies. replace them with jhappies.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😳 Viji...there you again, weaving the magic of your words on us..and making my day (OK night..since its way past day time 😆), yet again! 🤗

I have come to love your love for colors.. Your OSs are so arrayed in multiple hues...the play of words so colorful, they color my imagination as I read up your stories😃..and this one, with its beautiful depiction of blue ..the ultimate color of eternity...is ethereal and enchanting.

What a fine character sketch of our golden girl, Swara..(thankfully, the Swara that we knew before the CVs destroyed her intelligence in their bid to stretch the story😡) You've captured her insecurity, lack of faith, the trauma of a stigmatized childhood and her feeling of betrayal, beautifully. Am so glad you have had her share this with Sanskaar.. 👍🏼

Loved her slow realization of our Sunny boy's true worth, his love❤️ and even more, what she feels for him 😳- is so welcome to parched Swasan shippers..

The description of what she misses about him brought a smile to my face, its so real. When you miss someone, you miss their little things, their smile, their chit chat, their habits...reaching out for their belongings as a succour, happens automatically. And personal fragrance is the closest thing that kindles that identity and memories! So the Hugo Boss bit was perfect !👏 And TV playing cupid with Band Bajaa Baraat - a trigger that was spot on ! (I loved that duo in the movie)😳

Sunny boy, feeling very unsunny in Mumbai (and rightly so..coz Mumbai tends not to be very sunny!) having his own fit of the blues about his salvation and his damnation! 😆He he..little realizing his lady luck was already working overtime! Loved the way you have dived in and explained his psyche..(the bit on Tut's curse was ominous..but you edged us out of there😊) Our Sunny boy is very very special, and dont we all know it ! (Hope the CVs know it too!) And that is why we love him!

Hated that Part 2...cant stand that evil duo🤢..dont wish to talk about em and so will skip em. Except, a BIIIG HUG 🤗for the hot milk on you know who! Ahhh, what a massive feeling of satisfaction that gave me! Bravo Swara, Keep it Up..DP would be even prouder of you than he always is!😆
I liked that Suju is taking to our girl ! Again, AP is definitely dubious here as well...haha..you cant let her be, ever! 😆 (BTW, was there a bit of Arshi here too...you know, emptying a cup of hot tea/milk over someone you think is a rakshas?)

Loooved Holi..for him coming in at just the precise moment she most needed him, as her eternal knight in shining armor😃.. and her complete embracing of what he means to her...ummm 😳! You've repeated a line there, that I think came from one of your own OSs.- he held his whole world in his arms - I just fell in love with it again! It depicts so well his complete contentment and happiness.😳

And what a beaut of a memory you have, to pull in that bewitching Arshi moment❤️ into Swasan's enchanting reunion! 🤗I can just imagine these 2 doing it...a truly droolicous moment ! 😳Their exchanged declaration on missing one another, hesitant on his part, ardent on hers, but uplifted by hope and faith, truly a touch of class!⭐️

And of course, your nature touch..the sun breaking out of the clouds,,a true golden moment for our golden couple.😃😳

Another gem to treasure and revisit whenever the angst and the dumbness gets overbearing.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: medhasankar


I am not that easily scandalized, when it comes to guys like Laksh who ask for it.🤢 and i like this treatment better.
BTW..that would actually mean there will never be any ongoing RagYa bloodline. Thats one bloodline which needs to be safely outbred into oblivion.🤢

imagine the RagYa kid.
blackmailing his/her mom."Aap hamare saath aisa kaise kar sakte hain?? If you do not approve of my bf/gf..I will push you from that bridge, where u pushed masi"😈

in babyhood."SwaSan baby stole my toy. SwaSan baby..did this not me. Sab usssne kiya."

"Papa toy doh na...owww gawwd.mujhe toy chahiye. SwaSan baby has that toy"

I like kids...but still...they learn from their parents.😕

Did we have that rule? okies. replace them with jhappies.😃

@ Bold - Medhu 🤣 hahaha.. priceless

Viji - I meant to tell you I so wish you had gone through with the cojones blow! It would solve everything . Seriously! No fight for haq, meaning no psycho Ragini plotting and ruining SwaSan life. SwaRagini' s happy ending is in Laksh's impotence😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb os...
Loved it...

loved os very much..

Swara missing Sanskar...
As usually swara blindly trust ragini and not sanskar

Swara throws Hot milk on Laksh's face... 🤣🤣🤣🤣
The reason Laksh gave to AP.. 🤣🤣🤣

Ragini 😡
Why ruining swara's image in front of AP what will u get dear...

Ragini supporting Laksh... 😡😡😡😡

Finally holi celebration...
THE BEST OF ALL👏...
Swara saved by sanskar...
SwaSan hug was so wndrful & so romantic...
And Swara take the color from Luky's hand & put it on Sanskar's face...
Hayye me mar java...

sanskar too put color swara👏...

Awesome..
Thank you for the PM...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You always write so beautifully. .I simply look forward to each of ur works. This one is fabulous...holi is still so far away n such a swasan scene would be most welcome. ...but i do hope they dont prolong the actual confession in show so long tho!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Viji :)
This came to soothe all the pain I've taken after last epi .
I mean how swara be so unreal and dumb . how badly her fall in the river effected her. She is no more the same swara from the initial days of the show.

Three parts . her realisation, her missing him her fears her ache for him so beautifully written
Him missing her . their is no doubt abt him n his love I love this guy . from which planet is swara from can't she see his uncontional and undying love which seems to ggrow everyday? How can she be so immune to his presence. ? There is a big locha :P

Second part I love it :D that was best part swara scalded himwith hot milk.aww dil vich thand pay gayi :D
He is absolute idiot surviving on this planet. He should be chained or should be under medical guidance.

And finally the milap .shameless devar never seems to get the hint ..neither the reaction how blind can he be ? Like always Knight in shining ArMaani comes to her rescue
Best ever holi .
Loved it.

Har karwat pe Teri aahat mehsoos karti hoon
Teri khushboo ko khud main dhoondti hoon


Loved it

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