SwaSan OS: 'The Colors of Love'

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misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Viji!!🤗🤗

I really couldn't concentrate on writing Partners . Was trying to, just couldn't get myself to. I couldn't get these prev weeks episodes out of my mind.

But now after reading this I can so thank you so so much. I might write another OS too. This OS was seriously an inspiration. Let's make our own SwaSan world. Who cares how long it will take for it to happen on the show😎

Firstly I have to tell you and you would have obviously expected this from me. I loved the treatment Laksh got in your OS from Swara. Hayye! Mera dil ko thandak aur sukoon mila Big jhappi to you Viji for this. Completely made my evening🤗 Any girl with common sense would see how creepy Laksh is and your Swara thank god is one of them🤗(such a breath of fresh air)

I love love loooved the way you managed to so beautifully bring out Sanskaar's presence in Swara's life to the significance and clear importance of the color blue. It got my phan-gurl dill beating like crazy with so much happiness and pride!. So so happy❤️

How could I not mention that amazing holi scene, Firstly of course I noted how you got the climate to reflect SwaSan especially Swara's current mood. It was so brilliantly done again Viji👏

I was of course grinning reading how Swara clearly was so terrified of Laksh and vermillion that she just couldn't help but run like crazy . Yayy!!

But that SwaSan scene with Vermilion! *sigh* Finally my Sansku got his answer🤗 YASSS!! So happy! Him rubbing his cheek to apply color on her.! aljsdadasdkanldd! !!!

And then this line,

"the most powerful things are the ones you can say without really saying anything at all"

so true!

Seriously I couldn't even bother thinking about Laksh's reaction ... I didn't want to think about anything else but picture that scene in front of my eyes! So good!

Viji !!🤗love you XOXO

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
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How nice to wake to this Viji 🤗
A lovely OS as ever from you, no surprises there. But what a nice surprise for heart sore readers to read of a (yayyy!) unbelievably sensible Swara who respects her boundaries and has sense enough to not be stupidly trusting of snakes in the grass. What is my favourite thing about this is -shock of shock at ME saying this- Laksh- OR to be more accurate, the treatment accorded to our dear Devar ji! 🤣🤣 Repulsion, scalding tea and a running away to Sanskaar's arms and playing such delicious Holi with one's HUSBAND rather than creep devar- has improved my Saturday considerably. 👏👏
I loved the end too- the way Sanskaar put colour on her and their wordless communication was so heartwarming. I got the IPK similarity but this was still done so differently, it felt very nice.
Oh and I love Man- have bought it for hubby in the past. Like quite a few of Boss fragrances and also the clothes.
Thanks for the soothing balm this felt like Viji. Am currently considering a piece which in my head is sounding too torturous to Swara, a reaction to her stupidity on the show so I enjoyed this thoroughly. Love you xoxo

Hello Shru Darling...🤗 🤗

I've decided that I am not going to follow the dumbed down version of Swara, the CVs are dishing out now, in my Fics. She is too credulous, too naive, and too, too martyr like. Swara wasn't like this at the start of the serial.

Anyway, I wanted so badly to give her a dose of pining for Sanskaar. And also, for her to give her Devar Ji the appropriate treatment for his harassment. 😉 You know, I had earlier planned on her giving him a solid kick in his cojones, but considering this is IF forum, I desisted and stuck to scalding milk. 😛 Oh, the scenarios I had imagined first, with him writhing in agony, clutching his...well, you know...😆

Hugo Boss Man is my Hubby's favorite---or to be more accurate, its my favorite which I insist he uses. 😉

Glad you liked this Shru!!

Loads of Love to ya, sis...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: bwvianna
Hey,

Another beautiful fanfic.! I can't get enough of these! U just made me love SwaSan all over again. Your author's note at the beginning literally made me laugh out loud and I had to look around to make sure no one saw me 😛. The story! What to say about it! I'm speechless! I am sooo happy you made Swara pine for Sanskaar 😃 It made my day! Your description of surroundings and emotions was as usual fantastic!! You've got an art for describing the most simplest of things in the most incredible fashion.!

Thank you for making Swara 'not so naive'. I needed that. The recent spoilers have seriously killed any hopes for SwaSan moments in future. This one shot lifts my spirits!😊

Sanskaar's entry! ❤️❤️ and the way they put colour on each other!! My heart is sooo happy with that scene that I'm grinning like an idiot at the computer screen while writing this post. 😃

Thank you for writing this amazingly fabulous one shot and thank you for the PM.

Awaiting more fabulous one shots! :) Keep writing.

-V

Hi Vrinda 🤗 🤗

Thanks so much for those very warm and encouraging words.

Oh, I've decided that I just cannot follow this naive, babe in the woods Swara whom they are showing now in the serial, in my Fics. Swara was never like that--she was always such a gutsy, strong character. So I am going to stick to that. 😉

I really wanted to make Swara pine for Sanskaar. That poor guy has had his heart on his sleeve for so long, he needs Swara to also feel the same, no? 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Vaibhi.
Amazing...
So beautifully written ..
Loved it
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Thanks so much, Vaibhi. 😊 Glad you liked it.

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laddu1691

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Aww... Beautiful again viji...

I loved ur swara this time...

Also loved how she threw hot milk and his excuse

I broke into loud laughter scaring my mom...

I also loved the ipk resemblance yet it was so different...

SwaSan playing holi was cute...

Latha

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misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Unresd at page 2 Viji🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Excellent as always. And such a soothing balm to everyone who wants swasan NOW but instead are being tortured with you know what!

I liked that idea of them sharing the same sky. Reminded me of "tu jaha main waha, sang sang yu chalu tere jaise tera aasma" lines from salaam namaste.

Scalding milk 👏 perfect, just perfect!

Whenever you mention laksh slinking away i am reminded of those hyenas from the lion king. No insult to the hyenas intended.

Hey Shruti...🤗 🤗

Thanks so much for this comment. I'm so glad you liked it.

Yeah, we're all fed up with what they are showing on screen now, na? I was so upset with last 2 days episodes, I wanted to write something just on SwaSan bonding. 😉

Lakshya slinking away--you got the reference perfectly, my dear! He is just like Shenzi, Banzai & Ed. With less brains. 😉

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer
Oh My God Viji!
I've no words to describe this one.
I'm really horrible at appreciation and thus saying ki I reallyyy loved it.
It was such a sweet one.
And the way u described Swara's feelings in her heart and her ignorance was awesome.
The Holi SwaSan scene was so cute. The mere imagination of it gets me blushing hard.
And I just loved it when Swara threw that hot milk on Laksh's face!
Awesome..

Thanks so very much. 😊 Very glad you liked it.

I wanted to make Swara really pine a bit for Sanskaar here...in the serial, he is bearing all the pain, and she is so unaware, na? 😕

Holi romance scene---he he, I was in SwaSan dream land when I wrote that, so I am very happy to hear you liked it. ☺️

And as for scalding milk, its high time Swara threw that in Lakshya's face in the serial also. Wahaan na sahi, at least in my Fic I made her do it! 😆

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: manasie23
Viji🤗
Just when I wanted to read something... I found this... Perfect!
Swara as always wants Sanskaar to understand her silence but Our Sanskaar here does not know the extent of feelings Swara has for him.. (Even does not realise that😆) andd so he always misinterprets her silence..

Reading the emotions Swara was feeling in the absence of Sanskaar was absolutely a treat😳
and also Swara throwing hot milk on Devarji's face was hilarious😛
and my God Devarji seems to bee over persistent does not understand the meaning of 'NO'😲
and also the holi start scene (The convo between Swara- Lakshya) was scarry but Just then our hero steps in and the end was aaawww😳

Again Thank you so much Viji for writing this...😃

P.s Thank you for the ref of my story😆😛

Hey Manasi...Thanks so much for your comment dear. 🤗 🤗

I wanted Swara to realize how much Sanskaar means to her, to pine intensely for him when he is not around...😉 In the serial, poor Sansku is bearing all the emotional pain, and Swara is unaware as of now. So I really, really, wanted to write this into this OS. Glad you liked it.

Swara throwing hot milk in Lakshya's face, brought such cool peace to my SwaSan shipper heart. 😛 Devar Ji is seriously deluded, since he does not understand the meaning of "No". In the serial too, he thinks Swara's "No" means "Maybe, Try again"!! 😡

I visited SwaSan dreamland in my head, to write their Holi scene. 😳 ☺️

BTW please update your SS soon. Waiting for it.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: laddu1691
Aww... Beautiful again viji...
I loved ur swara this time...
Also loved how she threw hot milk and his excuse
I broke into loud laughter scaring my mom...
I also loved the ipk resemblance yet it was so different...
SwaSan playing holi was cute...

Latha

Thanks so much Latha 😊 Very glad you liked it.

Lakshya deserves some hot, scalding milk thrown at him. Its high time...in the serial tho its not happening, so I thought I will make it happen in my OS. 😆

I wanted to show the unspoken romance, the blossoming of SwaSan's emotions captured around Holi. Am very happy you said you liked that part.

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