SwaSan OS: 'The Colors of Love'

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hello Shru Darling...🤗 🤗

I've decided that I am not going to follow the dumbed down version of Swara, the CVs are dishing out now, in my Fics. She is too credulous, too naive, and too, too martyr like. Swara wasn't like this at the start of the serial.

Anyway, I wanted so badly to give her a dose of pining for Sanskaar. And also, for her to give her Devar Ji the appropriate treatment for his harassment. 😉 You know, I had earlier planned on her giving him a solid kick in his cojones, but considering this is IF forum, I desisted and stuck to scalding milk. 😛 Oh, the scenarios I had imagined first, with him writhing in agony, clutching his...well, you know...😆

Hugo Boss Man is my Hubby's favorite---or to be more accurate, its my favorite which I insist he uses. 😉

Glad you liked this Shru!!

Loads of Love to ya, sis...

I am sad we couldn't read about a kick where much deserved- would have been a blow to Ragini too in terms of claiming "haqq" 🤢😆 but yes, what to do- have to have some consideration for the Forum!

Another one who makes hubby use what they like- 😆- me too!

Oh and wanted to say how I liked the sub heading a lot- so apt and great play on words as ever. x

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: misaki
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Viji!!🤗🤗
I really couldn't concentrate on writing Partners . Was trying to, just couldn't get myself to. I couldn't get these prev weeks episodes out of my mind.
But now after reading this I can so thank you so so much. I might write another OS too. This OS was seriously an inspiration. Let's make our own SwaSan world. Who cares how long it will take for it to happen on the show😎

Firstly I have to tell you and you would have obviously expected this from me. I loved the treatment Laksh got in your OS from Swara. Hayye! Mera dil ko thandak aur sukoon mila Big jhappi to you Viji for this. Completely made my evening🤗 Any girl with common sense would see how creepy Laksh is and your Swara thank god is one of them🤗(such a breath of fresh air)

I love love loooved the way you managed to so beautifully bring out Sanskaar's presence in Swara's life to the significance and clear importance of the color blue. It got my phan-gurl dill beating like crazy with so much happiness and pride!. So so happy❤️

How could I not mention that amazing holi scene, Firstly of course I noted how you got the climate to reflect SwaSan especially Swara's current mood. It was so brilliantly done again Viji👏
I was of course grinning reading how Swara clearly was so terrified of Laksh and vermillion that she just couldn't help but run like crazy . Yayy!!
But that SwaSan scene with Vermilion! *sigh* Finally my Sansku got his answer🤗 YASSS!! So happy! Him rubbing his cheek to apply color on her.! aljsdadasdkanldd! !!!
And then this line,
"the most powerful things are the ones you can say without really saying anything at all"
so true!
Seriously I couldn't even bother thinking about Laksh's reaction ... I didn't want to think about anything else but picture that scene in front of my eyes! So good!
Viji !!🤗love you XOXO

Hey Geethu...🤗 🤗

Your comment literally had me grinning and blushing re. I'm still at work, and I don't know if people feel I am chatting with my Hubby on the sly. 😆

Seriously, let us all weave our own version of SwaSan land, in our tales. The serial is going to drag the pain and MU interminably, I feel. Well, maybe after that crazy car blast track, Swara would realize her feelings? One can only hope. But I seriously don't get how she can go back to back slapping, arm on shoulder kinda friendship with a guy who was obsessively harassing her till a day before. Hello? No self preservation instinct? 😕

You loved the scalding milk part, huh? Imagine what joy I took in writing it. 😆 As I was telling Shru, I was actually planning to get Swara to give him a solid blow in his cojones 😉. Perhaps so bad that he may have never become a Dad...😆 But then I desisted, I didn't want to run foul of forum rules. 😉

Blue is my favorite color, so I wanted to bring out all the significance of that, and tie it in to what Sanskaar is, in Swara's life. His love truly is an all encompassing, constant and unshakable thing, na? Man, sooo very intense and yet so selfless...

Thanks for spotting that para where I'd tried to reflect Swara's pangs of separation with the overcast, cloudy sky...and then of course when SwaSan unite, its all brightness and glory (except for Devar Ji, who slinks off to the shade 😆)!

I had taken a short trip to SwaSan dreamland when I wrote that Holi bit, Geethu. ☺️ 😳 Its a very inexpensive ticket for me, I live right next door to it, almost all the time!! 😆 Really glad to hear you liked it. Feels really good, coming from my fellow SwaSan shippers!

For Swara---vermilion application is only by Sansku. End of story! 😉

Waiting for your update on Partners, as well as this new OS you're thinking about.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

I am sad we couldn't read about a kick where much deserved- would have been a blow to Ragini too in terms of claiming "haqq" 🤢😆 but yes, what to do- have to have some consideration for the Forum!
Another one who makes hubby use what they like- 😆- me too!
Oh and wanted to say how I liked the sub heading a lot- so apt and great play on words as ever. x

Hey...Felt very happy that you picked out that that sub heading bit. As you will, I am sure, understand, I took the greatest pleasure in framing "Green Eyed Goons". 😆

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Its awsm.
Hehe!devar ji k mu me hot milk.he deserve it.bt firvi tht creep runing behind her.
Yes yes,swara ko tadapta chahiye wht she did with sanskar.bt yet love thr holi scene.aww cho chweet.
Write more.m nt thnking u as we r sanku's girls. *wink*

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Its awsm.
Hehe!devar ji k mu me hot milk.he deserve it.bt firvi tht creep runing behind her.
Yes yes,swara ko tadapta chahiye wht she did with sanskar.bt yet love thr holi scene.aww cho chweet.
Write more.m nt thnking u as we r sanku's girls. *wink*

Hey Sonu...Very glad you liked this. 😊

Oh, I really enjoyed making Swara throw scalding milk on Lakshya, He deserves it! Wish she would do it on the serial, too.

And I also wanted to make Swara miss and pine for Sanskaar. In the serial, only Sansku is feeling pain now, Swara is unaware. 😕 He really deserves Swara to go completely fida on him, na? 😉

Happy to hear you liked the Holi scene. I was totally in SwaSan dreamland ☺️ when I wrote that.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi
Nice update
Loved it

Thanks a ton, Mansi 😊

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Masterpiece!!!!
Take a bow for this amazing superb fantastic story
It was not prose, it was pure poetry..a ballad
The two things that made me to fall in love with story more
First Swara's realisation of her feelings for sanskaar
"love doesn't knows its own depth until the hour of separation"
So true...I truly felt only distance would make her realize her love for sanskaar and how beautifully u described it...beautiful indeed !!
" She missed Sanskaar's smile, that naughty
curve of his lips that could set his eyes
sparkling and light up his face. She had missed
his melodious crooning of his favorite old
Hindi film songs. She had missed his presence,
the steady, comforting awareness that he was
in the same room, the same home as she was.
And she had startled herself by realizing she
missed his fragrance , too. The room didn't
seem such a warm and comforting place
without him in it, after all."
"Let there be colors in the flowers,
and the breeze of new spring would come.
Come, so that the daily business of garden
can go on."
These words are gems ,a soothing balm for my pained shipper heart ,how I wish swara to feel the same pain grief and anguish that sanskaar went through .
The second thing which made this os even more special was dhoodh nehlaoying of laksh .Totally deserves it .The cold shoulder from swara didn't had any effect so a hot treatment was must.
The end was as it should have been,..perfect and amazing
The words are truly not needed between swason ...their eyes speak what lies in their heart.
Viji thank you so much for writing such a beautiful story.The distress last few epiz have caused us is little eased by such stories
thanks a lot for pm
As always waiting for a new story from u soon
love love n lots of love
Samiya

Edited by samiya.059 - 10 years ago

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dundumol96

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Luxji ko aisa hi hona tha baar baar kehene ke baad bhi usse samaj main nahi aata hai kya????????

Waise bhi maheswari boys ko NO words ka meaning pata nahi
ek luxji swara usee baar baar keh rahi thi uske zindgi main vaapas nahi aana chahta usse pyar nahi karti lekin nahi usse kabhi bhi NO ka meaning pata hi nahi

aur ek sanku usse bhi swara ne baar baar kaha hain vo kisi bhi halat main luxji ke pass vapas nahi jana chahti hai par nahi usse bhi ab yeh lagta hai swara luxji ke pass vapas jana chahti hai

swara sanku se ab pyar nahi karti yaa uski realisation nahi hua jo bhi ho agar vo sanku se pyar nahi karti iska matlab yeh nahi ki vo luxji se pyar karti hai

vo nuteral main bhi reh sakti hai na

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: dundumol96
Luxji ko aisa hi hona tha baar baar kehene ke baad bhi usse samaj main nahi aata hai kya????????

Waise bhi maheswari boys ko NO words ka meaning pata nahi
ek luxji swara usee baar baar keh rahi thi uske zindgi main vaapas nahi aana chahta usse pyar nahi karti lekin nahi usse kabhi bhi NO ka meaning pata hi nahi

aur ek sanku usse bhi swara ne baar baar kaha hain vo kisi bhi halat main luxji ke pass vapas nahi jana chahti hai par nahi usse bhi ab yeh lagta hai swara luxji ke pass vapas jana chahti hai

swara sanku se ab pyar nahi karti yaa uski realisation nahi hua jo bhi ho agar vo sanku se pyar nahi karti iska matlab yeh nahi ki vo luxji se pyar karti hai

vo nuteral main bhi reh sakti hai na

Dundumol, as always, your comments are just so apt and humorous. 🤣 I always have a big smile after I read your comment, especially when you write about Lakshya. Its just too awesome. 😆

Thanks for reading and your comment, dear. Very glad you liked it. Especially the hot scalding milk thrown on Lakshya. 😉

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: iam-in-love
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superb os... Loved it... Awsm wrk... Thnk u so much for this wndrful SwaSan OS. These day really annoyed with SR epi & u guys with ur SwaSan stories making our mood gud & happy...

loved ur os vry much..

Swara missing her Sanskar vry much... Sanskar warned Swara about Ragini & She didnt trust him...

Hot milk on Laksh's face... I really loved dis Swara... And d reason Laksh gave to AP.. 🤣

Ragini is so cleavar... Wt a plan she done to ruin swara's image in front of AP.. & that moment she realized her lovely sis's plan..

Ragini supporting Laksh...

On holi , whn running away frm Laksh , Swara hit on wall & about fall , but our hero catch her...
SwaSan hug was so wndrful & so romantic...
And Swara take the color frm Laksh's hand & put it on Sanskar's face... Awww... Such a scene I really wanted in show too... "bura na mano holi hei..." & the way hw Sanskar put color on her cheek... Was so romantic...

SwaSan missed each other vry much..

Really superb OS...

Hey dear 😊. Thanks so much for your comment, am really happy you liked this.

I really wanted to make Swara miss Sanskaar, pine for Sanskaar. 😳 In the serial poor guy totally loves her, but she has not yet realized. ...so i wanted to make her realize in this OS. 😉

Lakshya tho deserved the hot milk being thrown at him. When will this happen in the serial...I want to see it so much! 😊

I also wanted to make the SwaSan Holi moment as romantic as possible. 😉 ☺️