SwaSan OS: 'The Colors of Love' - Page 13

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

Again, another wonderful read! 😊

It was nice seeing the transition in Swara's realisation of her love for Sanskaar. Her hate towards the word itself due being let down by two men she probably expected the most out of at the time, but then being picked up and made whole again by the one who was meant to be her destroyer. Her recognition at his selfless love, just being simply too shocked to respond after knowing she had begun to trust again, with a completely different intensity than before and the privilege given to Sanskaar and him only.

Lovely insight into what Sanskaar should've become (essentially a Laksh 2.0) and what he is. ⭐️ His immense love for Swara, the satisfaction he receives from Swara's happiness along with the unavoidable pain of not being more to her is beautifully penned down.

Loved how you used the phrase 'blue', in different contexts of course, as a base to start off, then as a link to bring out the main gist and finally to close part 1. 😳

🤣 🤣 Part 2 is a treat! Sensible Swara and suffering Laksh! ⭐️ That boiled milk should've been spilled somewhere else as well in my opinion, but then again we gotta think about Ragini and her haq. 😆😉

Moving onto part 3, I adored Swasan's little reunion. It was a simply magical moment. Both of them holding each other's happiness in their hands, speaking very little and letting the eyes do all the talking. Your last sentence sums it up quite nicely! 😊

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Viji 🤗 Another wonderful piece of writing from you. Just finished my exams, was feeling so tired but this totally cheered me up 😳
Viji you deserves a lot of appreciation 👏 You are simply fantastic.
I'm in love with your writings. I loved the whole concept. Swara's realization of love was described in a sublime way.
The sadness that was tormenting her, the distance between her and Sanskar, the fact that she couldn't see him was penned down really really well. She missed Sanskaar's smile, that naughty curve of his lips that could set his eyes sparkling and light up his face. She had missed his melodious crooning of his favorite old Hindi film songs. She had missed his presence, the steady, comforting awareness that he was in the same room, the same home as she was. And she had startled herself by realizing she missed his fragrance, too. This line was one of my fav lines.
The special treatment for the Devar was fabolous 😆 Hot milk served right in the face, not bad 😉 And the excuse he made up for that 🤣 I wonder if AP believed him or not.
I really liked this Swara 😎 Not the typical mahaan devi we get to see on the show nowdays 🥱
The 3rd part was exquisite What a treat those SwaSan moments 😳
Devar ji once again didn't get the opportunity to apply the color on his bhabhi 😆 Sanskar came perfectly at the right time. Wonderful timing 😉
The hug was magical😳 He was feeling a wave of almost spiritual peace engulf him, as he held his whole world within his arms.
That 'holi moment' Swara applying the color on Sanskar's cheeks and he rubbed his cheeks on her's ❤️ I badly want to see this in the show as well. Can we request CVS for this special moment during holi?
As usual another masterpiece from you Viji 🤗

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan.

Viji,

Lovely OS <3 How I wish this plays out in the show.

Thanks,

Nish

Originally posted by: asexualflower

Hi Viji,

First of all sorry for the late comment. Secondly what can I say about your writing? It was just tooo good. 👏 I personally loved the whole theme you had going with the colours. All the titles of your parts were so fitting. I especially liked the title of the first part "Of Velvet Sighs and Cerulean Skies." The thing about me is I love reading and I'm also quite observant, so when authors have a sense of uniformity in their work I love it. I absolutely loved how each of your chapters started with the word "of." It reminded me of this novel I'd read last year called The Book of Lost Things. In that novel every chapter began with the word of and it really fit in with the title of the novel. Anyways that's really irrelevant right now, sorry for getting off on tangents. Another thing about your writing is that you always use really good vocabulary. And every time I read something you write I find myself turning to a dictionary to search up the definition of at least one word. So thanks for expanding my vocabulary. 😳Anyways enough with the technicalities, let's talk about the actual plot. So I'd been waiting for this OS ever since you mentioned you'd be posting it, and as usual you have delivered a beautiful OS. I loved the ending when Sanskaar rubbed his cheeks with Swaras to put the red colour on her. I was literally visualizing the scene in front of me and smiling like an idiot. 😆Once again this OS was amazing, can't wait till you write another. Oh and thanks for the PM. 😃

- Sapna

Originally posted by: Anbhigya

First of all thnks for the PM.. It was lovely... At first i ws like i hv read it by seeing the title.. But aftr goin through the title realised it was Lights Of Love n not this... treatment given to lax was awsum!!! Dat milk burning part made me happy... Yes the show has turned me to a sadist!! Aww sansku... I luv him N dis swara too.. Thnks buddy.. Keep writing more.. They give'dil me thandak ' wali feels..