SwaSan OS: 'The Colors of Love' - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aparnasvj

Fantastic yaar... laksh's kodak moment yani swasan romance is my most favourite part... love you viji and thanks alot for pm


Thanks a ton Aparna 😊. I also enjoyed writing about Lakshya's scalding milk facial, and his shock on seeing SwaSan romance. 😆

Very glad you liked it.


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum


Hey Sapna...🤗 🤗

Thanks so much for this lovely comment. It really made my day. 😊 several portions of it made me go all 😳, am glad you liked it so much, and was very happy to hear that you liked the chapter headings fitting the "colors" theme of this OS.

BTW thanks also, for the book recco of "The Book of Lost Things". Who's the author?

The ending with their reunion during holi: I was in SwaSan dreamland when I wrote that ☺️ ☺️ I go there pretty often these days, tickets are inexpensive as I stay very close by, for the most part. 😆 I think cheek rubs are romantic too. 😳

Cheers

Viji


The author of The Book of Lost Things is John Connolly, not sure if I spelt his last name correctly. It's basically a mishmash of various popular fairytales including Snow White and the Seven Dwarves, Rumpelstiltskin, Little Red Riding Hood, and others. It follows the journey of a ten-year old boy named David as he enters a world of his imagination and takes place in England during the second world war.

And me too I go to SwaSan dreamland daily if not multiple times a day. 😆😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!! Love this. 👏 The bumping into each other and rang bit, my fave!! ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asexualflower


The author of The Book of Lost Things is John Connolly, not sure if I spelt his last name correctly. It's basically a mishmash of various popular fairytales including Snow White and the Seven Dwarves, Rumpelstiltskin, Little Red Riding Hood, and others. It follows the journey of a ten-year old boy named David as he enters a world of his imagination and takes place in England during the second world war.

And me too I go to SwaSan dreamland daily if not multiple times a day. 😆😉


Hi Sapna,

The Book sounds pretty interesting. Will try to get it on Kindle or from my library. Thanks 😊

And yeah after yesterday's fabulous episode I think we are all in SwaSan dreamland still 😳☺️

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SmileMore

Wow!! Love this. 👏 The bumping into each other and rang bit, my fave!! ;)


Hey...thanks so much. 😊 I guess this is the first time we are interacting on a thread of mine? Very glad you liked this OS and especially the ending, when SwaSan reunite.

If you have time, do go through my earlier SwaSan works, I've written several OS/TS and the link to my index is on my siggy (at the bottom of my posts). Do read when convenient and let me know what you felt. Its always a privilege to have a new reader and get their feedback.

Thanks again

Viji


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Posted: 9 years ago
Viji... hugs... As always this story left me in state of euphoria... its always a pleasure to read such a good story where Swara is sensible one.. :p The descriptions are like always perfect.. Its one of the fact I love about your stories. Another thing I loved here is your Swara... I am so glad she dont have her self preservation instinct broken here and knows how to handle the perverts...
The last part was absolutely delightful to read... Oh how much I wish something like this happens on show to but Holi is so far away... :-P
I love ya for writing this piece... it was a like a balm to read when things were so negative in SwaSan land.
P.S. This is one of my shortest and less detailed review.. Please dont mind it..I want to say so much more but the thing is since yesterday I have written 4 long reviews and everytime I go to post it... IF gives one error or other. Right now I cant access net from my pc (my router died day before yesterday while I was watching devar-bhabhi torture..it burned itself :'( ) and doing same thing on cell again and again is hard... I will pm ya later with my original one when I have a new router...(Please pray mumma get cooled down soon for that to happen.. yesterday I felt like a kid when she took my class on time I spend on using net :-\) until then ciao...
Love ya
Nityah
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely os dear
beautifully written
thanxx for the pm
😊 😛 😛 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anju10

lovely os dear
beautifully written
thanxx for the pm
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Thanks Anju. 😊 Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

Viji... hugs... As always this story left me in state of euphoria... its always a pleasure to read such a good story where Swara is sensible one.. :p The descriptions are like always perfect.. Its one of the fact I love about your stories. Another thing I loved here is your Swara... I am so glad she dont have her self preservation instinct broken here and knows how to handle the perverts...
The last part was absolutely delightful to read... Oh how much I wish something like this happens on show to but Holi is so far away... :-P
I love ya for writing this piece... it was a like a balm to read when things were so negative in SwaSan land.
P.S. This is one of my shortest and less detailed review.. Please dont mind it..I want to say so much more but the thing is since yesterday I have written 4 long reviews and everytime I go to post it... IF gives one error or other. Right now I cant access net from my pc (my router died day before yesterday while I was watching devar-bhabhi torture..it burned itself :'( ) and doing same thing on cell again and again is hard... I will pm ya later with my original one when I have a new router...(Please pray mumma get cooled down soon for that to happen.. yesterday I felt like a kid when she took my class on time I spend on using net :-\) until then ciao...
Love ya
Nityah



Hey Nityah dear...🤗 🤗 Very glad you liked this OS. I wanted to make Swara the same smart, no-nonsense, courageous girl she always was. I don't want to show her in the dumbed down version the serial sometimes gives us now.

And I enjoyed myself so much, writing how she handles her creepy, obsessive Devar Ji, with a special "scalding milk facial". 😆 Am very happy to hear that you liked that, too!

And the ending sequence tho I was completely in SwaSan dreamland. 😳 ☺️ I am a frequent visitor these days, and yesterday's episode (Thank God for a lovely SwaSan-licious episode after 3 completely tortuous ones!) made me go straight back to that dreamland! 😉

Oh, please don't worry about length of your comments, my dear. Am just happy that you read it and to hear from you what you felt. You write 10 lines or 100, I am just happy to hear you read it and enjoyed it, bas. 🤗

I am confident your router also got burnt out, since it couldn't bear those 3 crappy episodes from Thu to Mon. I don't blame it, my bheja was also getting fried!! 😆 All the best for manao-fying your mumma. Maybe you should ask her to see yesterday's episode. Anyone would be in a good mood after seeing those amazing SwaSan scenes, no? 😛

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Posted: 9 years ago
What a lovely, colorful OS Viji! Loved the glorious sunrise, blue sky, scarlet wound 😆, vermilion red 😳...it was riot of all the colors! 😊
I always love a strong no nonsense Swara and her pining for Sanskar was the cherry on cake! Loved loved how Sanskar applied color to Swara! Oh I'm waiting for Holi now!😃

Loved it!

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