Against All Odds- A SwaSan Four Shot

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Sheesh!!!

Poor thing...she was all wifey concern and that sentence stole my heart Shrutu,..'the person who usually woke her from her nightmares, was the one pushing her towards the monsters' 😕

Well, this was coming. Koi insaan kitna door tak bardaash kare?

Best part was..Swara certainly had no intention of ever going to Lakshya...and she was actually irritated that Sanskaar could come up with it.😃

Swara saw through Ragini...whew.I mean the amount of things that girl gets away with is astounding.🤢

The mandir scene was very well done. firecracker lobbed onto Swara...and of course...hero's entry.👏

I was blown away by the descriptions of Swara worrying over him...and fighting tooth and nail to return to her injured hubby. Later how DP had to re-question her to make sense, because she had been crying incoherently before. Very well sketched.👏

and the confession and its after effects. How he hmmm...

I love this Swara. She is gonna fight to be his wife. if necessary, she will fight against his sanskaariness to be his wife.😉

The small bit about him feeling her arm on his...well put.⭐️

and Sujata's description.😆seriously, how did she not wail?😆

I have a compliment beside excellent writing Shrutu...you type very fast.👏😉 and it never compromises on the quality

Love Ya,

Medha.

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Part3- The whole thing was so different to the original track and yet so similar... you really did redeem Swara's character in my eyes but she is still so naive no grasping the extent of danger lurking around her.
And Sanskaar ever so smart hubby did the right job of hiring a detective to keep tabs on his wifey... and the way he saved Swara felt happy and sad at the same time. Happy because he saved her and sad because he himseld got injured.
Also I felt that Sanskaar did the right thing by responding to her declaration there and then that person has been through so much he needs to be sure that swara is not making any decision hastily especially when she is distressed... update the fourth part soon will be waiting

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Zaalima_5

@Zaalima_5

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

shruti...🤗
wow part3 is awesome..!! hmm loved smart swara.
haye confession..😳
dono miya biwi bade besharam hai yaar...😆 both confessed their love in front of all family members..😉
thanks for including salman in your fic..
waiting for next part..😃

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

This is the best chapter till nw. Loved Swara while talking to Ragini.

The temple sequence was also good. The way swara realise her love is great. Sanskaar is very protective of Swara nd his quick thinking helped in saving Swara.

Swara love confession was epic. Want such a confession in show also in front of family.

Laksh nd Ragini ka to pachka ho gaya. But Sanskaar ke last dialogue ne dil tod diya. Why did he do so?
U left it at such a point. Hw cruel of u... 😡

Continue soon.

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Silpa

@iam-in-love

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Part 3 is jst awsm...
whnevr Swara in danger , Sanskar is there to protect her...

Swara's confession... I loved it... But cnt evn blame Sanskar too... Bcoz he thought that wtevr she is sais jst bcoz of guilty . I loved dis Sanskar vry much...

Gud wrk dear... Waiting for nxt part...

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Ramya

@The-Heart

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

First of all thanks for the fast update

You almost redeemed swara character and her confession is superb😳 but because of her previous track record sanskar is not ready to believe her so soon😆

Swara need to work more hard to prove her love ( I wish CVs show this kind of scenes in show)

Below sentences are heart touching

"His wife stayed glued to his uninjured side, making implicitly clear to everyone that this was her place, and she would not relinquish it to anyone."

(Poor swara securing her place beside her husband)😳

"Swara felt like she had walked in to a nightmare. The only problem was the person who usually could be relied on to wake her from it, was the one pushing her towards the monsters."(Poor swara) 😭

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Shru🤗

If I said I loved the steely reality check Sanskar is bestowing upon his lovely wife would that make me a monster? Why, I must say I loved him saying probably Swara's confession was a result of her feeling sorry for him...she had that coming😈

And Swara...you wanted to know what I think about her now, right. Hmm...while she was coming in terms with her feelings I was going 😕😊😃🥳You have explored her wonderfully and she seems more mortal and less goddess unlike the show. I like this solid basis to her feelings you have given, like saying she is in love with Sanskar alright but afraid of losing him. A girl of her past experience would come to that. The way her insecurities broke is also my heart touched part here. I'm seriously afraid of fire crackers and reading this had made my fear increase ten folds. I would never watch one without remembering the image your words made in my mind of Sanskar with his hand alight!

So in 4th they'll sort everything out. I still think Swara would have to put a lot of effort in to making her hubby believe she actually loves him. Waiting for that. Update soon.😃

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

@Part 3:

Thanks for clearing up the Ram thing from the previous part.

I can understand why Sanskaar did what he did. Swara still thinks of him as her best friend but even then wants all the privileges of a wife. She wants the unquestioned, unwavering trust which is the privilege & right of a wife. And her own actions dont help her either. Going to meet Laksh in garden, his room, doing his marham patti, rushing to him as soon as he messages. She is sending wrong signals to not just Sanskaar but Laksh as well.

I loved that Sanskaar did not offer himself as a choice to her. He gives her two choices: Laksh or total freedom. If that doesn't tell you how genuine the guy is Swara, nothing will.

In the hospital I was expecting a owww gawdd moment 🤣 followed by the usual shocking HAHAHAHA copying me bro? me cut a vein, u burn a hand. u compete wid me bro & then maybe a sataccckkk zaapad from Swara & DP, one on each cheek I have still not forgotten that DP slapped Sanskaar😡 When will someone slap Laksh?

Good Sanskaar didnt accept her straight away. It is but natural that he is being careful. Kya pata abhi msg aya ya behen cheekhi toh ye firse bhaag jaaye waha se😛 Let her do some mehnat to win him now.

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Part 3 read n i must say...swara is redeemed quite credibly. .. and i can even understand sanskaar's reluctance to accept swara's declaration at its face value. Sanskaar has gone thru so many tests fr his love...swara needs some anxiety in her life too...but m sure part 4 will make it all well...superb writing!