Against All Odds- A SwaSan Four Shot

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Sanavi
Part 2 was way too serious but I guess this was important too.

Reference to Mahabharat nd Ramayana was apt. I loved sanskaar dialogues to AP.
Let's see what Ragini is upto nw

Plz continue

Thanks Sanavi,

Yes, totally- I felt I needed to get all this out to be able to resolve the mess we have. Part 3 is up- hope you will enjoy it!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness
Finally a story where Swara is actually dumb like n serial🥳
My dislike for AP increased arrgh she will defo be villain in SwaSan story later... If next part also u are planning to make us cry then update entire story together can't cry in installments 😔

Hawww itni buri lagi yeh Swara?! See, as I am trying to re-tell an alternative version but of the same track we are getting, I couldn't make her sensible without first highlighting her stupidity 😆

Aww- I genuinely didn't think people were going to be that affected, really but as a writer, I think I need to see the compliment in that 😊. Part 3 is done, you should deffo not be crying by its end and despite writing all day literally I couldn't do Part 4- this will be done by end of tomorrow (or today for me now 😲). Thank you Leks for reading and commenting xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
Read part 2...both parts r amazing. .. hmm knew annapurna couldn't see her own son suffering but loved it when Sanskaar answers with his heart...she needed it.
Ye ragini toh harr jagah pohoch jati hai ... harr kisi ki batein sunn leti hai...huh disgusting. ..cant wait fr d next!

Hey! How are you? Thanks so much for reading and liking! Your comment about Ragini is making me chuckle 😆. She won't change!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Hello,

Thank you for the name compliment! :D I just read part 2. Wow! Justice to the plot.! Seriously I loved it. This is needed. Lakshya and Swara need closure or they will forever be awkwardly dancing around each other. Felt terrible for Sanskaar. :( That Ramayan analogy was bang on!!! :) Cannot wait to see how things unfold.

Waiting for another fantastic update!

Edited : Read part 3. I don't have words!!! Loved it! Swara's confession and Sanskaar's caution towards it! <3 You've seriously nailed it! Again absolutely love your part 3! Can't wait for part 4! Update soon. :)

-V

Hi again V!

I'm so happy you read all 3 parts and left me such lovely comments, thanks a lot! Yayyy- someone got my closure point. I want Swara to really reason through her feelings for Lakshya, and then put them to bed for a final time but she can't do that without first annoying us- that's just Swara for you.

Part 3- phew! You liked it? Glad, glad! I'll work on Part 4 in, oh well - hours now as just realised how late it is here . Thanks again V and keep commenting please xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Love, love, love this! I was in tears by the end of part 2 and was furious at Annapurna. But part 3 gave me some solace. My fav part was Swara's public confession and your description of everyone's emotions!
Will Ragini's truth come out in the next chapter? I would love to read about Swara's fury when she finds out that Ragini was responsible for her husband's present condition!
Looking forward to the next chapter and SwaSan confrontation.
Thank you for the PM.

Sapna 🤗

Apologies for the angst in part 2 but seriously relieved that I repaired some damage with 3! So happy you liked the public confession, I feel Swara needs to do this given what Sanskaar has been through for her.

I guess I have to finish Ragini's drama off- but I'll have to finesse it tomorrow. Tell you what- am totally drained today. I didn't realise when I started this, how much of me it would take but anything for SwaSan 😊. I'll try not to disappoint- thanks for your kind comments xoxo

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DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Sapna 🤗
Apologies for the angst in part 2 but seriously relieved that I repaired some damage with 3! So happy you liked the public confession, I feel Swara needs to do this given what Sanskaar has been through for her.
I guess I have to finish Ragini's drama off- but I'll have to finesse it tomorrow. Tell you what- am totally drained today. I didn't realise when I started this, how much of me it would take but anything for SwaSan 😊. I'll try not to disappoint- thanks for your kind comments xoxo

Er... my name is Vyshnavi, Vyshu for short. 😊

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Swathy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Cant blame sanskar for that.she .aight be feeling guilt and all and saying she loves him

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Er... my name is Vyshnavi, Vyshu for short. 😊

Vyshu,

I am so so sorry- I was multi tasking with comments on a number of posts and i blame having sat writing an emotionally draining piece for over 8 hours! Apologies 😳 and thanks again for the kind comments!

Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago